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Hanazawa Kana - Jishu Koi Shoooooter! (Short Ver.)

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Topic Starter
KayeSara
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年11月12日 at 20:57:32

Artist: Hanazawa Kana
Title: Jishu Koi Shoooooter! (Short Ver.)
Source: RO-KYU-BU!
Tags: mjw5150 Kanpakyin Minato Tomoka
BPM: 160
Filesize: 4663kb
Play Time: 02:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. 5150's Normal (3.16 stars, 166 notes)
  2. Hard (4.66 stars, 322 notes)
  3. Kanpakyin's Taiko (4.83 stars, 756 notes)
Download: Hanazawa Kana - Jishu Koi Shoooooter! (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thx for mjw5150 bring his normal diff and Kanpakyin bring his Taiko!!
HellDawn
mjw5150's Normal
Add preview point *-*
00:56:699- clap

Hard
Please recheck your combos.
02:02:319- New combo
02:27:819- 1 grid down
Topic Starter
KayeSara

HellDawn wrote:

mjw5150's Normal
Add preview point *-*
00:56:699- clap
Fix it
Hard
Please recheck your combos. Ok, I'll recheck it.
02:02:319- New combo Fix
02:27:819- 1 grid downI don't think so
Ouch....you mod so fast...
Anyway, thx for your modding
JoJo
回学校了再来MOD

先支持了=w=

shortshortshortshortshortshortshortshortshortshortshortshort
Topic Starter
KayeSara

JoJo wrote:

回学校了再来MOD

先支持了=w=

shortshortshortshortshortshortshortshortshortshortshortshort
谢谢baka hentaijo的星星~
你头像真搞笑>//<
JoJo
My ignorable baka modding here !~~

  • Red-You must fix it.
    Blue-You'd better to fix it.
    ●Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  • I suggest Offset: 256 (Note: Before try this plz read my mod firstly.)
    Add "mjw5150" into tags.
    Check all KIAI sections by youreself and resnap them.
[Hard]
  • Disable useless countdown.
    ●01:16:006 (4) - Plz stack this perfectly.
    ●01:25:006 (2) - ^
    ●01:37:006 (2) - ^
[mjw5150's Normal]
  • Rules wrote:

    Each mapset must have at least two osu!standard difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level. The difficulty of a single map should remain consistent, whilst the set should provide a steady difficulty curve without any large gaps which could alienate groups of players at certain skill levels. This ensures that players of all experience levels are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love.
    Since Alace sensei told me that it's okay if you only exceed a little, so please try to change some patterns and make sure it's ≤3.10 star ratings.
Mapset is fine. Maybe I will give more design suggestions after you fix the offset.
Good luck.
Topic Starter
KayeSara

JoJo wrote:

My ignorable baka modding here !~~

  • Red-You must fix it.
    Blue-You'd better to fix it.
    ●Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  • I suggest Offset: 256 (Note: Before try this plz read my mod firstly.)
    Add "mjw5150" into tags.
    Check all KIAI sections by youreself and resnap them.
[Hard]
  • Disable useless countdown.
    ●01:16:006 (4) - Plz stack this perfectly.
    ●01:25:006 (2) - ^
    ●01:37:006 (2) - ^
Fix all as you said
And thannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnks for your helping.
mjw5150
中秋节半夜寂寞的1B
仍颗星星睡觉去~
Your message is too short.
Topic Starter
KayeSara

mjw5150 wrote:

中秋节半夜寂寞的1B
仍颗星星睡觉去~
Your message is too short.
谢谢的星星 :)
Raging Bull
Hi, tell me what you fixed and what you didn't fix. If you say no, please say why. These are all suggestions unless I said so otherwise.

General:
Hard has countdown while normal does not. Please disable it for hard.
I liked the old name better. At least put 5150's normal or something. The diff name is bothering me now.
I don't really like 2 diff map sets. Try to make another diff. Could be an insane if you want.
Combo colors are different. It's not a big deal, but maybe you can agree on what combo colors you want for consistency?

Normal:
Use tickrate 2. Sounds better.
+1 AR so there's not a lot of circles I guess.
Nothing much to say. Probably map to the end though? You have like 10 more seconds left anyways.

Hard:
Big jump in difficulty settings here. Maybe -1 AR -2 OD?
Map to the end.

Nothing much to say. It's a good map. No kds.
mjw5150

Raging Bull wrote:

Normal:
Use tickrate 2. Sounds better.
+1 AR so there's not a lot of circles I guess.
Nothing much to say. Probably map to the end though? You have like 10 more seconds left anyways.
all fixed,thx~
P.S:change the name of the diff

Download: Hanazawa Kana - Shoooooter! (Short Ver.) (KayeSara) [5150 no Normal].osu
Topic Starter
KayeSara

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi, tell me what you fixed and what you didn't fix. If you say no, please say why. These are all suggestions unless I said so otherwise.

General:
Hard has countdown while normal does not. Please disable it for hard.Fix
I liked the old name better. At least put 5150's normal or something. The diff name is bothering me now.Add normal
I don't really like 2 diff map sets. Try to make another diff. Could be an insane if you want.Ouch...lazy always, and hardly that I can make an insane
Combo colors are different. It's not a big deal, but maybe you can agree on what combo colors you want for consistency? Fix

Hard:
Big jump in difficulty settings here. Maybe -1 AR -2 OD?
Map to the end.Fix all

Nothing much to say. It's a good map. No kds.Kds for someone who help my map, whatever the degree is. :(
Thx for your modding~
Raging Bull
Why is it called 5150 no Normal? Is it an accident or on purpose?
Topic Starter
KayeSara

Raging Bull wrote:

Why is it called 5150 no Normal? Is it an accident or on purpose?
mjw is naughty boy :) I fix it.
Raging Bull
Hmm well okay. And since you gave me a kudosu, I'll star your map.
Topic Starter
KayeSara

Raging Bull wrote:

Hmm well okay. And since you gave me a kudosu, I'll star your map.
><~~~~~~~Thx ~a~ ~l~ o~ t~~~~~~~
AoiX
M4M request
Aoi的无节操Mod
[box=┗[+ω+:515b1]]
[Hard]
00:02:506 (5) - 第三个节点下移3格|美观
00:06:256 (7) - 去掉finish,加这感觉很奇怪
00:06:443 (1) - finish
00:30:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 既然用了变间距那就让其分布的均匀点。可以将(2,3)往外摆或者将(5,6)往内摆
00:31:193 (5) - new combo|便于区分
00:31:755 (1) - 开头加finish
00:36:068 (2) - 右移一个|nazi.space
00:57:818 (5) - 既然拉了这么长那就做个fade in的效果吧~
01:00:443 (2) - 开头加finish
01:26:318 (1) - 改用whistle
02:06:255 (2) - ^
02:23:880,02:24:255 - 添加circle,否则这段的节奏很奇怪
02:24:443 (11) - new combo
//做的很好,在音效方面,特别是finish音效最好参照下Normal

[Normal]
02:25:756 (3) - 这里的reverse可能会被前一个滑条的击打火焰遮挡
//awesome~
混了这么久终于来个M4M了。激动啊~
Topic Starter
KayeSara

xykbear wrote:

M4M request
Aoi的无节操Mod
[box=┗[+ω+:77178]]
[Hard]
00:02:506 (5) - 第三个节点下移3格|美观
00:06:256 (7) - 去掉finish,加这感觉很奇怪
00:06:443 (1) - finish
00:30:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 既然用了变间距那就让其分布的均匀点。可以将(2,3)往外摆或者将(5,6)往内摆
00:31:193 (5) - new combo|便于区分
00:31:755 (1) - 开头加finish
00:36:068 (2) - 右移一个|nazi.space
00:57:818 (5) - 既然拉了这么长那就做个fade in的效果吧~
01:00:443 (2) - 开头加finish
01:26:318 (1) - 改用whistle
02:06:255 (2) - ^
02:23:880,02:24:255 - 添加circle,否则这段的节奏很奇怪
02:24:443 (11) - new combo
//做的很好,在音效方面,特别是finish音效最好参照下Normal

混了这么久终于来个M4M了。激动啊~Thx~for your modding almost fix!
Nymph
谁说以后自己不上传图的 谁啊? 谁啊?

切 果然节操都给Bakajo了么
Topic Starter
KayeSara

Nymph_ wrote:

谁说以后自己不上传图的 谁啊? 谁啊?

切 果然节操都给Bakajo了么
先谢谢星星啦,算你还不是最坏的,再来,我顶着爪机也要回复,不是我上传的啊!是我手上传的!?哼,至于bakajo才没节操勒O_o
Moonlight
I only did a little modding, as I think the map is good enough. I do feel some parts of the map are a little off sync with the music, but everyone is different so I didn't change it at all.

Download: Hanazawa Kana - Shoooooter! (Short Ver.) (KayeSara) [Hard].osu
Topic Starter
KayeSara

Moonlight wrote:

I only did a little modding, as I think the map is good enough. I do feel some parts of the map are a little off sync with the music, but everyone is different so I didn't change it at all.
Thanks a loto>_<o and I will check it as soon as possible~

Edit: Thx for your modding, but actually, that's not my style, so I don't want change it as you did.
Vergence

Hi~
Please Read The Rules~

5150's Normal
01:16:755 (1) - Remove new combo
Fine~

Hard
HP Drain +1
00:02:506 (5) - The tail is overlapping with (3)
00:30:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hard to read~
01:10:443 (2) - Ugly Slider X.X
02:40:055 (2) ^
_________________________________________
That's all~
Topic Starter
KayeSara

DragonSparta wrote:


Hi~
Please Read The Rules~
Sorry for that, I have add it~Uncle Tails~

Hard
HP Drain +1 Fix it
00:02:506 (5) - The tail is overlapping with (3)Staying, no a big issue
00:30:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hard to read~A little hard, but for my map is the highest diff, so I make some jumping in some parts.
01:10:443 (2) - Ugly Slider X.X
02:40:055 (2) ^It just make playing smoothly, and I don't think it's ugly enough.
_________________________________________
That's all~
:) Thx for your modding~Uncle Tails
Kanon
首先是aimod
Warning: [5150's Normal] 01:00:252 kiai线未对齐时间轴
Warning: [5150's Normal] 02:06:252 kiai线未对齐时间轴
Warning: [Hard] 01:00:252 kiai线未对齐时间轴
Warning: [Hard] 02:06:252 kiai线未对齐时间轴

General
Combo colour颜色需要加深,和背景的对比度太低了。
还有2种combo colour颜色过于相近,这是不好的。因为会无法区分new combo (我MOD的时候只好改好颜色才能吐槽NC._.)

Normal
00:52:944 (3) - 开头finish
00:54:444 (1) - ^
01:15:068- add note
01:17:505 (2) - 应该结束在01:17:880-
01:57:444 (3) - 开头finish
01:58:944 (1) - ^
02:17:880- 这里按照你的排法 是应该+一个1/2的slider吧。。
02:48:443 (1) - 转盘结束在02:49:943- 听起来我觉得好一点,和音乐的finish连一起有点难听
跟vocal跟的有点死,玩起来比较别扭,不过是rankable的,本来想建议你加一些NOTE 配合鼓点的,一看难度已经超3星了,所以无从吐槽了._.

Hard
AR+1 因为你的摆法前面很多纯靠反应才能打的跳,换了以后玩起来感觉会好很多
00:03:256 (1) - 不要NC 如果非要的话,00:05:506 (5) - 也加上
00:09:068- 这根绿线没用 直接用红线代替了
00:21:443 (1,2,3) - 1的clap放到3上
00:22:380 (4) - 头的clap放到中间 可能会好听点,不然实在clap听起来很突兀
00:27:068 (4) - NC

00:37:568 (2) - 这样遮挡比较蛋疼,头尾遮挡住一边就好了。都遮住-.-
00:43:005 (4,5,6,7) - 这里可以摆好看一点。
02:03:630 (5,6,7,8) - 摆好一点
02:20:693 (8) - NC 后面的02:21:068 (1) - 不要NC
02:48:443 (1) - 和normal一样
整张map的flow一直在转圈, 让我想起来lkp的图- -这个diff还不错

给你颗星星,加油吧~
Topic Starter
KayeSara

Kanon wrote:

首先是aimod
Warning: [5150's Normal] 01:00:252 kiai线未对齐时间轴
Warning: [5150's Normal] 02:06:252 kiai线未对齐时间轴
Warning: [Hard] 01:00:252 kiai线未对齐时间轴
Warning: [Hard] 02:06:252 kiai线未对齐时间轴
All fix
General
Combo colour颜色需要加深,和背景的对比度太低了。
还有2种combo colour颜色过于相近,这是不好的。因为会无法区分new combo (我MOD的时候只好改好颜色才能吐槽NC._.)
OK 颜色加深了
Hard
AR+1 因为你的摆法前面很多纯靠反应才能打的跳,换了以后玩起来感觉会好很多
00:03:256 (1) - 不要NC 如果非要的话,00:05:506 (5) - 也加上
00:09:068- 这根绿线没用 直接用红线代替了
00:21:443 (1,2,3) - 1的clap放到3上
00:22:380 (4) - 头的clap放到中间 可能会好听点,不然实在clap听起来很突兀
00:27:068 (4) - NC

00:37:568 (2) - 这样遮挡比较蛋疼,头尾遮挡住一边就好了。都遮住-.-
00:43:005 (4,5,6,7) - 这里可以摆好看一点。
02:03:630 (5,6,7,8) - 摆好一点
02:20:693 (8) - NC 后面的02:21:068 (1) - 不要NC
02:48:443 (1) - 和normal一样
整张map的flow一直在转圈, 让我想起来lkp的图- -这个diff还不错
全部都改完了!
给你颗星星,加油吧~
先谢谢kanon的modding和星星啦>_<
Muya
[Normal]:
Make a 1 sec Audio Lead-in?
Slider Tick Rate: 1
00:09:068 - this break time start at 00:09:443?
00:54:069 (4,1) - why jump here?
02:48:443 (1) - end at 02:50:505 and add finish

[Hard]:
Make a 1 sec Audio Lead-in?
Slider Tick Rate: 1
00:09:068 - this break time start at 00:09:443?
00:45:068 (1,2) - (1) remove new combo (2) add new combo
01:26:318 (1) - end at 01:28:943 , and some add note to 01:29:693 ~ 01:30:068 ?
02:48:255 (1) - end at 02:50:505
Topic Starter
KayeSara

Muya wrote:

[Hard]:
Make a 1 sec Audio Lead-in?
Slider Tick Rate: 1
00:09:068 - this break time start at 00:09:443?
00:45:068 (1,2) - (1) remove new combo (2) add new combo
01:26:318 (1) - end at 01:28:943 , and some add note to 01:29:693 ~ 01:30:068 ?
02:48:255 (1) - end at 02:50:505
All fix, besides
  1. Slider Tick Rate: 1
Thx for yor modding~
Tanmak
Great.

:)


Your message is too short.
Your message is too short.


:cry:
Topic Starter
KayeSara

Tanmak wrote:

Great.

:)


Your message is too short.
Your message is too short.


:cry:
Thx for your praising~
Aleks719
General
You easiiest diff has 3.08 stars. Reduce it to 3 or less than 3 stars? :S
BG resolution is 1024x767, make 1024x768 please
I suggest to use noiseless soft sliderbody (in attachments). imo, will sounds better
Hum.. I checked you timing. i got +10ms offset for every timing point :
offset 266, bpm 160
offset 4953, bpm 160

5150's Normal
Set slider tickrate 2. imo, fit's better
00:06:069 (2) - add whistle to the end
00:33:444 (1) - add finish
01:02:880 - add note
01:03:068 - ^ or add slider instead of 2 notes
02:16:756 (3,4) - bad jump
02:17:880 (4,1) - damn, this jump
02:17:880 - add a note+whistle instead of slider?

Hard
OD +1
00:54:828 (4,6) - add 2 whistles
01:19:765 (3,4,5) - remove claps from (3) and (5), add whistles to (3,4,5)
01:22:765 (4) - remove clap from the start, add whistles to the start, to the end
01:23:703 (6) - imo, this note must be at 01:23:515 + whistle
01:31:203 (2) - add clap
02:09:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this combo doesn't fit's the music
02:18:828 (4) - add finish to the start instead of clap
02:19:765 (6,7) - vise versa :
02:23:140 (6,7) - ^
02:25:765 (1,2,3) - remove clap from 2, add whistle to (1,2,3)
02:28:765 (8,9) - add whistles to the start, end of (8), remove (9), add 2 notes+whistles, as on picture:
02:40:765 (4) - add whistle
02:41:140 (5) - add whistle, remove clap
02:41:515 (6) - add finish

Good luck, star

Download: soft-sliderslide.rar
Topic Starter
KayeSara

Aleks719 wrote:

General
You easiiest diff has 3.08 stars. Reduce it to 3 or less than 3 stars? :S
BG resolution is 1024x767, make 1024x768 please
I suggest to use noiseless soft sliderbody (in attachments). imo, will sounds better
Hum.. I checked you timing. i got +10ms offset for every timing point :
offset 266, bpm 160
offset 4953, bpm 160
All of them fix
5150's Normal
It will be update later, this guy is absent.

Hard
OD +1
00:54:828 (4,6) - add 2 whistlesFix
01:19:765 (3,4,5) - remove claps from (3) and (5), add whistles to (3,4,5)Fix
01:22:765 (4) - remove clap from the start, add whistles to the start, to the endFix
01:23:703 (6) - imo, this note must be at 01:23:515 + whistleFix
01:31:203 (2) - add clapFix
02:09:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this combo doesn't fit's the musicstaying for it will take smoothly playing
02:18:828 (4) - add finish to the start instead of clapFix
02:19:765 (6,7) - vise versa : Fix
02:23:140 (6,7) - ^Staying, not big issue
02:25:765 (1,2,3) - remove clap from 2, add whistle to (1,2,3)Fix
02:28:765 (8,9) - add whistles to the start, end of (8), remove (9), add 2 notes+whistles, as on picture:
Staying
02:40:765 (4) - add whistleFix
02:41:140 (5) - add whistle, remove clapFix
02:41:515 (6) - add finishFix

Good luck, star
:) Thx for you star >< And I really appreciate your sound's improvement.
Pereira006
hello~~ sorry later

IMO <- My opinions

General

you have Slider tick rate diferent Normal is 1 and hard is 2 you should same all diff cannot different

Some suggestions

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[5150's Normal]

Cicle size +1 this will great gameplay IMO

pleasse slider tick rate is 2 because this fit this song IMO all diff tick rate should same
00:48:454 (1) - Put add Finisht hitsound only start slider?
01:03:828 (5) - Put new combo and at 01:06:454 (1) - Remove new combo

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Hard

00:29:890 (6) - this hidden and hitburst that this is unrank i suggest get another place or stack it with the end slider 00:28:953 (3) if you change this don't forget fix spacing at 00:30:078 (7,8)
00:34:765 (4) - this clap i can't feel nothing so remove it clap?
01:02:515 (3) - remove clap and 01:02:703 (4) - add clap 01:02:890 (5) - remove clap 01:01:953 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - that hitsound conscienty better IMO
01:30:453 (1) - Remove new combo

The play is fine and i like but you hitsound is random...i not like this hitsound sorry but
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
That all i think
good luck~
DerekMcD
Hello!!! http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24043 or http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36687

  • Blue: You must fix this.
    Red: You better fix it!
    Orange: Screenshot ahead.
    Black: Just suggestions though.

    ~General~

    2 diffs are not enough for this to be bubbled soon though... If you want it that way though.

    ~5150's Normal~

    Looks good...

    ~Hard~
  1. 00:32:140 (2): Try moving this to x: 360 y:208
  2. 00:55:296 (6): To x:320 y:184???
That's it. I LOVE the song!!!!
Thank you and good luck.
Topic Starter
KayeSara
Thanks for your helping. I'll check it tonight o>_<o. Studying:( for such time
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