1. Hard (4.88 stars, 633 notes)
2. Normal (2.19 stars, 291 notes)

pieguy1372 wrote:

Normal:

00:36:764 - perhaps add a spinner (5% volume) here that ends at 00:39:899? added a spinner of 30% volume.
00:42:138 (3) - clap on end? Added
00:45:720 (3) - ^
00:47:511 (1) - ^
00:49:302 (3) - ^
00:51:988 (2) - clap on start?
00:53:779 (4) - ^, and so on... I'll stop pointing it out here, if you agree with these please change it in the rest of the map I will add clap on every 3rd white line.
01:09:003 (1) - too close to (2) I don't think so but I moved (2) a little farther.
01:12:585 (1) - whistle on end? ok
01:17:959 (3) - ^ No. there's already a clap on it, adding a whistle will make it hear weird.
01:19:750 (5) - ^ ^
01:47:511 (1) - given the spacing it's too far from (5) fixed spacing XD
02:10:944 (1) - end it 1/1 earlier? Done.
04:22:436 (1) - close to (3), though this one is far away on the timeline so if you like it, just keep it spacing changed

Hard:

-AR 7? 8 seems too fast for this song OK.
-CS 4? No, I don't like it. I think 3 is better. :p
-spacing is a bit odd at some points but it plays nice so it's fine

00:36:764 - same Done
01:55:570 (6) - new combo? Done
02:09:451 (1) - end it 1/1 earlier? OK
03:56:317 (11) - this slider seems really weird, start it 1/3 later and add a note where it starts? OK
04:19:750 (6) - move it 1/3 earlier? (then, start the spinner where this note is) It may be fine but I want the whistle sound on the note /.\

nice map~

Maya-kira wrote:

hello xD

normal:
(do not use more than 3 slider speed ><; its unrankable) Now it's done.
00:48:704- (1) add clap in the end of the slider. There is already a clap. D:
03:34:526- add a circle in x:136, y:280 OK
03:44:376- (3,4) delete 4, add reverse arrow on 3 until 03:45:720 (optional) No /.\
03:46:167- (5) why don't you new combo here? This part is in the same sentence with the wave slider next to it xD remember to click the option 1 to make sure they're in the same combo color. Here's a hard beat, so I added new combo here.
04:11:242- add hit circle on x:104 y:120 I want a pause here.
04:14:824- ^ (x:264 y:104) ^
04:29:153- ^ (x:48 y:272) (new combo, change the pink one to the blue one) ^

uh.. I think thats it? @_@;; my mod is not really good since I'm no pro, but I hope that helps-- It really helps

hard:
overall:
umm... BPM is 134, but why do you use beat snap divisor 3? I think 3 doesn't fit well here ._.;; try 2 or 4 >< /.\ The song fits 1/3 beats..
here is some errors that I detect

(I will tell other things when you resnap them to 1/4 or 1/2) ><
01:53:630- (1) don't overlap them oAo your map will be hard to rank if this happened, instead, try to move it to x:84 and y:214. :3 Moving it to 84,214 will make the map harder to rank /.\ But I moved it to somewhere else
03:14:376- (7) I think it sounds better if you change this one to slider until 03:15:123 Sorry, for the sake of rhythm.

I guess thats all for now ><;
btw I really like how you use sliders >w< its awesome! keep it up! Thanks~ I will

• Try offset = -2655
  删掉歌曲文件夹内的osb文件然后重新full submission

• 我觉得开始时候的normal-hitnormal的声音有点吵,小声一点?
  00:36:764 (1) - 小声一点
  00:51:988 (2,3,4) - 从形状上说没问题,不过这难度是normal,同时有easy的任务(因为这是最简难度)，新人玩可能会因为间距的问题给你打低分
  01:34:227 (1) - 静音？
  01:44:824 (2,3) - 太近
  02:03:630 (2,3,4,5,6) - 新人会感到郁闷的，给5加new combo？
  02:12:585 - KIAI应该在note上开始和结束
  02:49:750 - 加个circle?
  04:13:033 (2,4) - 没有重叠好
  04:54:675 - 这里的KIAI之后已经没有NOTE了,所以没必要拉到那么后面

• 00:22:436 (5) - 放在那几个slider的中间会更好看
  00:36:764 (1) - 小声点
  00:50:197 (8,9) - 没有重叠好
  01:13:033 (5) - 听起来感觉挺奇怪的
  01:30:048 (1,2) - 没有重叠好
  01:54:227 (3,4) - 没有重叠好
  02:12:585 - KIAI应该在note上开始和结束
  02:59:600 (1) - 加clap
  03:25:123 (2) - 加finish
  04:19:899 (1) - 加clap
  04:54:675 - 这里的KIAI之后已经没有NOTE了,所以没必要拉到那么后面

Weiren wrote:

General

• Try offset = -2655 嘛 我先去问问再改
  删掉歌曲文件夹内的osb文件然后重新full submission 好

Normal

• 我觉得开始时候的normal-hitnormal的声音有点吵,小声一点? 音量-10%
  00:36:764 (1) - 小声一点 -10%
  00:51:988 (2,3,4) - 从形状上说没问题,不过这难度是normal,同时有easy的任务(因为这是最简难度)，新人玩可能会因为间距的问题给你打低分 :D 我相信新手的判断能力 既然写了normal那就一定会有easy没有的东西
  01:34:227 (1) - 静音？Done
  01:44:824 (2,3) - 太近 没有呀 都是0.8x
  02:03:630 (2,3,4,5,6) - 新人会感到郁闷的，给5加new combo？为了美观 给4加了NC
  02:12:585 - KIAI应该在note上开始和结束 Fixed
  02:49:750 - 加个circle? 加了
  04:13:033 (2,4) - 没有重叠好 Done
  04:54:675 - 这里的KIAI之后已经没有NOTE了,所以没必要拉到那么后面 因为我觉得后面都是不停重复 找不到合适的位置结束 所以就保留了 /.\ 反正也不影响游戏

Hard

• 00:22:436 (5) - 放在那几个slider的中间会更好看 done
  00:36:764 (1) - 小声点 -10%
  00:50:197 (8,9) - 没有重叠好 done
  01:13:033 (5) - 听起来感觉挺奇怪的 去掉了中间那个
  01:30:048 (1,2) - 没有重叠好 done
  01:54:227 (3,4) - 没有重叠好 done
  02:12:585 - KIAI应该在note上开始和结束 done
  02:59:600 (1) - 加clap 已经有啦
  03:25:123 (2) - 加finish OK
  04:19:899 (1) - 加clap OK
  04:54:675 - 这里的KIAI之后已经没有NOTE了,所以没必要拉到那么后面 理由同Normal

总体来说还是不错的
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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren

1. 没有点tag么?

1. 00:40:347 - 01:37:660 - 貌似你前面减过音量了,不过我感觉这段custom clap还是很大声,降低音量或者考虑换个其他的custom clap声吧,比如更小声的鼓声或者拍掌声
2. 02:09:003 (2) - Add clap?
3. 03:00:496 (1) - ^
4. 03:29:153 (6) - 加clap, 然后7用finish代替clap
5. 03:30:496 (1,2) - slider的四个点都加clap,有whistle的去掉,感觉会听着更好
6. 04:06:764 (3) - Add clap
7. 04:35:421 (3) - ^
8. 04:54:526 - 这之后放那么多绿线干嘛._. note都摆完了,分数出来前还来次喷泉效果不会觉得很奇怪么

1. 时间超过4分钟了...很可能会被当做app map对待的,是否考虑缩短点时间?
   
2. 00:55:570 - 01:37:660, 02:27:362 - 02:42:138, 这段时间内的custom clap还是感觉太大声了,降低音量或者换用其他的custom sound
3. 02:05:720 (4,5,6,7) - 加clap然后用声音渐大效果感觉更好
4. 03:31:690 (1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 04:54:526 - 后面多余的绿线

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. 没有点tag么? added

[Normal]

1. 00:40:347 - 01:37:660 - 貌似你前面减过音量了,不过我感觉这段custom clap还是很大声,降低音量或者考虑换个其他的custom clap声吧,比如更小声的鼓声或者拍掌声 音量减小了 现在听起来应该会好些
2. 02:09:003 (2) - Add clap? done
3. 03:00:496 (1) - ^ added
4. 03:29:153 (6) - 加clap, 然后7用finish代替clap 嗯
5. 03:30:496 (1,2) - slider的四个点都加clap,有whistle的去掉,感觉会听着更好 嗯
6. 04:06:764 (3) - Add clap done
7. 04:35:421 (3) - ^ done
8. 04:54:526 - 这之后放那么多绿线干嘛._. note都摆完了,分数出来前还来次喷泉效果不会觉得很奇怪么 /.\ 那我就去掉吧

[Hard]

1. 时间超过4分钟了...很可能会被当做app map对待的,是否考虑缩短点时间? ppy说最高限度是4:30 还差十秒钟 XD
2. 00:55:570 - 01:37:660, 02:27:362 - 02:42:138, 这段时间内的custom clap还是感觉太大声了,降低音量或者换用其他的custom sound 减小了音量
3. 02:05:720 (4,5,6,7) - 加clap然后用声音渐大效果感觉更好 done
4. 03:31:690 (1,2,3,4) - ^ done
5. 04:54:526 - 后面多余的绿线 deleted

star

ziin wrote:

[general]
end the kiai time at the end. I guess it's mainly for the main screen.

[hard]
00:13:779 (2,4) - delete, overmapped ok
00:17:362 (2,4) - ^ ok
00:21:988 (4) - use circles instead sorry but i like it
00:43:033 (7) - 1/3 earlier. Seems silly to stop following lyrics it sounds bad imo
00:52:884 (3,5) - make these just circles. The slider end is overmapped and it's repetitive. ok
01:17:362 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - plays poorly. Mix in circles and long sliders. done now
01:49:153 - add ok
01:50:347 (2,5) - overmapped. Save the streams for the drumrolls. deleted 2 5
02:00:347 - ^
02:03:481 - ^
02:04:675 - ^
02:04:824 - ^
02:05:272 - ^
02:27:362 - why is this 5%? it sounds better imo
03:29:153 (8) - use 4 circles instead ok
03:39:003 (2) - use 3 circles i like this way now

The spacing on the streams is pretty high, which IMO makes it too difficult for a hard, but the entire map is too easy for an insane. 0.8x now

Check AIMod for some expert spacing distances, and consider making them a bit shorter.

1. Try offset 949, I dunno why the offset is "out" of the song xD
2. Slider tick rate 2? Sound is better.
3. Stop kiai time at 04:52:889 xD

1. 01:19:750 (5) - Delete
2. 01:20:794 (1) - Start it at 01:19:750 (Where there was the slider)
3. 01:34:227 (1) - Start it at 01:34:531
4. 01:44:376 (1) - No new combo
5. 01:44:824 (2) - New combo and add a finish at the beginning of the slider
6. 02:10:944 (1) - Start it at 02:11:247 and remove clap adding a finish at 02:13:486
7. 02:48:854 (1) - Finish at the end?
8. 04:24:232 (4) - Move the second waypoint at x24 y112 and 3rd at x88 y64, better blanket.

1. 04:18:705 (4) - It almost touches the hp bar.
2. 04:24:227 (1) - No new combo
3. 04:24:526 (2) - New combo

Chewin wrote:

General:

1. Try offset 949, I dunno why the offset is "out" of the song xD A green line is before 949, if offset changes to 949, there will be something wrong with the slider speed.
2. Slider tick rate 2? Sound is better. I use 1/3 snap to map the song, slider tick 2 sounds messy.
3. Stop kiai time at 04:52:889 xD yes sir.

Normal:

1. 01:19:750 (5) - Delete ok
2. 01:20:794 (1) - Start it at 01:19:750 (Where there was the slider) done
3. 01:34:227 (1) - Start it at 01:34:531 ok
4. 01:44:376 (1) - No new combo done
5. 01:44:824 (2) - New combo and add a finish at the beginning of the slider ok
6. 02:10:944 (1) - Start it at 02:11:247 and remove clap adding a finish at 02:13:486 I dont want to add a finish at a soft part.
7. 02:48:854 (1) - Finish at the end? ok
8. 04:24:232 (4) - Move the second waypoint at x24 y112 and 3rd at x88 y64, better blanket. done XD

Hard:

1. 04:18:705 (4) - It almost touches the hp bar. moved down
2. 04:24:227 (1) - No new combo i don't think it looks well.
3. 04:24:526 (2) - New combo

Ok, I really love the song and maps, very good job.
I hope it will be ranked soon ~ Have my star and good luck *-*/

1. clear

1. 00:40:347 (1) - 離轉盤時間有點近, 距離卻有點遠, 重新排版讓他近一點
2. 01:09:899 (2,3,4,5) - 這邊spacing一致些?
   整體沒什麼問題的diff, 三段KIAI前的spinner的不同處理方式不錯

1. 需要比Normal大的lead-in..
2. 00:01:839 (5) - 建議2/3拍, 如果想map鋼琴白線再補圈, 和00:03:929 (6) 照應
3. 00:20:645 (T) - 降到40%左右..當然這裡是變強但是60%有些對比太強了
4. 00:40:347.. 開頭是0.5x, 這裡突然就1.0x, 感覺非常的快..雖然工程有點浩大不過建議到0:54:675為止用0.75x作過渡
5. 02:27:362.. 整段的5%..很容易被說unrankable
6. 04:00:048 (x) - 有漏一個note的感覺
   沒什麼大問題, 不過小圈又讓人感覺有使用DS的時候, 建議適量的nazi一下自己的排版, 稍微參差不齊的spacing在小圈會相對明顯一點, 像是03:47:511 (6), 03:49:302 (3) 一類

loveFantasy wrote:

你好

[General]

1. clear

[Normal]

1. 00:40:347 (1) - 離轉盤時間有點近, 距離卻有點遠, 重新排版讓他近一點 done
2. 01:09:899 (2,3,4,5) - 這邊spacing一致些? 嗯
   整體沒什麼問題的diff, 三段KIAI前的spinner的不同處理方式不錯

[Hard]

1. 需要比Normal大的lead-in.. 改成了2000
2. 00:01:839 (5) - 建議2/3拍, 如果想map鋼琴白線再補圈, 和00:03:929 (6) 照應 done
3. 00:20:645 (T) - 降到40%左右..當然這裡是變強但是60%有些對比太強了 嗯
4. 00:40:347.. 開頭是0.5x, 這裡突然就1.0x, 感覺非常的快..雖然工程有點 浩大不過建議到0:54:675為止用0.75x作過渡 我再考虑一下 问问其他人的看法再改
5. 02:27:362.. 整段的5%..很容易被說unrankable ;_; 呀 上次删错绿线了
6. 04:00:048 (x) - 有漏一個note的感覺 加了一个note
   沒什麼大問題, 不過小圈又讓人感覺有使用DS的時候, 建議適量的nazi一下自己的排版, 稍微參差不齊的spacing在小圈會相對明顯一點, 像是03:47:511 (6), 03:49:302 (3) 一類

star

• Blue: You must fix this.
  Red: You better fix it!
  Orange: Screenshot ahead.
  Black: Just suggestions though.
  
  ~Normal~

1. 03:36:018 (Spinner):That spinner's too close after (3)... Move this to another tick or white tick...
   
   ~Hard~
2. 00:50:645 (9, 10) - That;s better to me.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:51:839 (1, 2) - ^, Look at the differences!!!!
   
   SPOILER

   

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello. Hello~

~Normal~

[*]03:36:018 (Spinner):That spinner's too close after (3)... Move this to another tick or white tick... Done~

~Hard~
[*]00:50:645 (9, 10) - That;s better to me. :O
[*]00:51:839 (1, 2) - ^, Look at the differences!!!! ;_; what's the difference.

That's it.
Thank you and good luck.

Shiki wrote:

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello. Hello~

~Normal~

[*]03:36:018 (Spinner):That spinner's too close after (3)... Move this to another tick or white tick... Done~

~Hard~
[*]00:50:645 (9, 10) - That;s better to me. :O
[*]00:51:839 (1, 2) - ^, Look at the differences!!!! ;_; what's the difference.

That's it.
Thank you and good luck.

Thank you
You forgot to kudo me for the m4m ;_;

-Gamu- wrote:

hi- hi~ :3

All suggestions

[General]

●Offset 944. Timing > Resnap All Notes(I think this was better) okay

[Normal]

●AR-1. OD-2. HP-1 This is normal, I don't want it to be too easy, so I only do the HP-1
●Please be consistent with spacting(
●02:31:391 (1) - tightly stacked perfectly stack now
●04:30:944 (3) - 1 grid up done
●04:32:287 (5) - 1 grid up eh, no

[Hard]

●AR+1. I think AR8 is too fast for the song.
●To offset 944 done

●00:49:152 (5) - new combo add done


Good map!!!! and Good song!!!!!

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Here's my mod

General;
- Audio lead-in is not the same for both diffs, not a big deal though All changed to 2000 xD
- You could cut the mp3 Sorry, I don't want to do this

Normal;
- 01:16:167 >> Add a finish Done
- 01:59:152 >> ^ Added
- 03:02:287 (4,6) >> Claps Okay
- 03:10:794 >> Finish Added
- 03:17:958 >> ^ Done
- 03:25:123 >> ^ Done
- 03:26:018 >> ^ No
- 03:27:809 >> ^ No
- 03:46:615 >> ^ Done
- 04:00:944 >> ^ Done

Hard;
- The slowdowns at the 1st part (before the 1st break) are so wrong imo, I thought the song was going to start with a slowdown, is kinda anti-climatic that you start with the normal speed a song that starts so slowly, also at 00:20:645 the slowdown doesn't suit, a normal speed would be best here I have already started with 0.75x slider speed ;_;. Fixed the slowdown at 00:20:645
- 00:02:287 >> This note is not needed, it doesn't sound good at all Deleted
- 00:02:585 >> Add a note Added
- 00:04:476 >> Move (1) here and add a note at 00:04:973 Okay
- 01:51:988 >> New combo No.
- 03:26:018 >> Finish Done
- 04:29:600 >> ^ Done
- 04:35:570 >> Here and at 04:35:720 add notes Added

* Really nice song, makes me feel all warm inside, star

yangzd88 wrote:

围观326大触求GD GDN遍了次次被拒信心完全丧失还是滚出去好了

184,72,151391,6,0,B|296:72|368:160,1,200,2|8

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que

[General]
fine

[Normal]
00:20:645 (1,2,3,4,1) - 音量渐强，具体多少我懒得试了 我尝试下用40 50 60 50
00:36:764 (1) - end at 00:39:451 done
01:09:899 (2,3) - 太突然了，这里开始DS渐小好点 减小了spacing
01:24:078 (2,3) - 换slider，卧槽你还给不给新人活了 马上换
01:25:869 (2,3) - ^ done
01:36:317 - 绿线挪到spinner尾 done
02:31:391 (1) - 为了flow

184,72,151391,6,0,B|296:72|368:160,1,200,2|8

谢谢
03:36:018 - spinner start here ok

[Hard]
这个diff的spacing感觉很奇怪 /.\ 我没有一直开着ds来做, 不过我认为辨认是没有什么困难的
00:07:511 - add note ? ok
00:20:645 (1,2,3,4) - 音量渐强，ds渐大 done
00:36:764 (1) - end at 00:39:451 okay
00:43:033 (7) - start at 00:42:884 在那个地方加了一个圈
01:27:212 (3) - start at 01:27:361 done
01:42:735 (7) - delete deleted
01:57:809 (4) - end at 01:58:108 ok
02:04:675 - add note 虽然那里的确是有个音没错 但是我总感觉有点奇怪
02:05:570 - ^ ^
02:07:212 (2) - start at 02:07:063 在那里加了note
02:35:869 (2) - start at 02:35:720 don
02:38:705 (1) - end at 02:41:242 done
04:13:182 (6) - delete ok
个人感觉这首歌非常不适合用直slider，也不适合对称排版

1. Circle Size change to the Large?
2. i suggest, in Normal Difficulty, please using Distance snap to arrange them...

1. HP Drain change to 6?
2. OD change to 7?

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

你好~~ ^^ 你好~ XD

Normal

1. Circle Size change to the Large? Sorry, but i think it will look crowded.
2. i suggest, in Normal Difficulty, please using Distance snap to arrange them... Okay. I will check the spacing with AIMOD

01:08:108 (1) - remove this New Combo? eh.. okay
04:00:944 (1) - this slider beginning sound is finish, instead of whistle done

Hard

1. HP Drain change to 6? Okay
2. OD change to 7? Done

02:34:526 (x) - add a circle? Okay
03:41:242 (5) - add a New Combo? All done except 04:13:332 (6)
03:44:227 (5) - ^
03:55:421 (8) - ^
03:59:003 (7) - ^
04:13:332 (6) - ^
04:16:018 (5) - ^
04:23:332 (3,4) - here is no need to jump, i think. Spacing reduced
04:27:809 (6) - add a New Combo? Done
04:35:421 (10) - ^ Done
04:47:063 (1) - this spinner i suggest start from 04:48:406 . I changed it to start from 04:47:511

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Nice Mapset!
Shoot a little Flower Star for you :3
and Good Luck

merchat7 wrote:

Straight sliders :@@@@@

merchat7 wrote:

As requested,

[General]

- +1 stack leniency to all difficulty? Cleaner stacks. Okay~

[Normal]

- Straight sliders :@@@@@

00:11:690 (1,3) - Can you curve these two sliders? More interesting / better flow etc. Don't see any reasons for them to be straight. Curved
00:18:406 (1.2,3,4) - Repeating slider fits better for (1,2) and slider for (3.4). It emphasize the hit circle in the next combo much better. This will require slight remapping, so If not, please curve slider (2) a bit. Done
00:51:093 (1.2.3.4) - Try to curve all the sliders. Perhaps make (1,2) symmetrical to each other and the same with (3,4) or you can come up with a more interesting pattern if you have one. Curved all XD
00:55:570 (2.3) - The only time straight sliders fit, imo is in rock/fast song and occasionally if the feel calls for it. This part, not at all. Curve the sliders / more interesting slider type instead please. Done.
01:04:526 (1,3) - Don't see why patterns like this http://puu.sh/66vF doesn't work. Thank you~
01:14:376 (3.4) - http://puu.sh/66w2 Why not? Sure~
01:23:332 (1.2 1,2) - curve it or something else, don't leave it straight. Done
03:30:496 (1,2) - ^ you can keep it straight if you want through. Curved.
04:29:600 (1.3) - -_- Same suggestion as before Done as before

merchat7 wrote:

Straight sliders :@@@@@

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00:00:347 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/66xl I like this more. I like this too~
00:06:317 (5.6) - http://puu.sh/66xz Yes, why not?
00:17:362 (2.3.4.5) - Sliders maybe? But it's fine. Sorry, I want to keep them.
00:47:511 (2.3.4) - http://puu.sh/66yD Done
00:50:197 (4,6) - Curve them. Curved.
01:53:799 (1) - Curve Done
02:27:660 (2.3 2.3) - I'm sure there is better way to arrange them than straight. Yes.
02:44:227 (2.3) - Curve (2), copy and paste to the other then Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J it and readjust. Done
03:09:003 (1) - Curve Okay
03:24:675 (1.4.5) - ^ Done
03:28:705 (5,6) - Space out more and curve. I make the spacing here on purpose, curved.
04:14:824 (2.3) - Curve Done
04:17:361 (1.2.3.4) - Looks a whole better if you curve all of these sliders. Yes, it's better now
04:26:914 (4.5) - Same as 00:06:317 Done
04:33:779 (1-8) - Hard to read since they are covered by hit bursts, try to rearrange a bit. It may be better now.
04:40:347 (1.2) - Curve Done

Same comment about straight sliders.

Good enough for a star. Your beatmap would be a lot better if you curve the sliders but no real issues. Good luck on rank.