1. Hard (4.88 stars, 633 notes)
2. Normal (2.19 stars, 291 notes)

pieguy1372 wrote:

Normal:

00:36:764 - perhaps add a spinner (5% volume) here that ends at 00:39:899? added a spinner of 30% volume.
00:42:138 (3) - clap on end? Added
00:45:720 (3) - ^
00:47:511 (1) - ^
00:49:302 (3) - ^
00:51:988 (2) - clap on start?
00:53:779 (4) - ^, and so on... I'll stop pointing it out here, if you agree with these please change it in the rest of the map I will add clap on every 3rd white line.
01:09:003 (1) - too close to (2) I don't think so but I moved (2) a little farther.
01:12:585 (1) - whistle on end? ok
01:17:959 (3) - ^ No. there's already a clap on it, adding a whistle will make it hear weird.
01:19:750 (5) - ^ ^
01:47:511 (1) - given the spacing it's too far from (5) fixed spacing XD
02:10:944 (1) - end it 1/1 earlier? Done.
04:22:436 (1) - close to (3), though this one is far away on the timeline so if you like it, just keep it spacing changed

Hard:

-AR 7? 8 seems too fast for this song OK.
-CS 4? No, I don't like it. I think 3 is better. :p
-spacing is a bit odd at some points but it plays nice so it's fine

00:36:764 - same Done
01:55:570 (6) - new combo? Done
02:09:451 (1) - end it 1/1 earlier? OK
03:56:317 (11) - this slider seems really weird, start it 1/3 later and add a note where it starts? OK
04:19:750 (6) - move it 1/3 earlier? (then, start the spinner where this note is) It may be fine but I want the whistle sound on the note /.\

nice map~

Maya-kira wrote:

hello xD

normal:
(do not use more than 3 slider speed ><; its unrankable) Now it's done.
00:48:704- (1) add clap in the end of the slider. There is already a clap. D:
03:34:526- add a circle in x:136, y:280 OK
03:44:376- (3,4) delete 4, add reverse arrow on 3 until 03:45:720 (optional) No /.\
03:46:167- (5) why don't you new combo here? This part is in the same sentence with the wave slider next to it xD remember to click the option 1 to make sure they're in the same combo color. Here's a hard beat, so I added new combo here.
04:11:242- add hit circle on x:104 y:120 I want a pause here.
04:14:824- ^ (x:264 y:104) ^
04:29:153- ^ (x:48 y:272) (new combo, change the pink one to the blue one) ^

uh.. I think thats it? @_@;; my mod is not really good since I'm no pro, but I hope that helps-- It really helps

hard:
overall:
umm... BPM is 134, but why do you use beat snap divisor 3? I think 3 doesn't fit well here ._.;; try 2 or 4 >< /.\ The song fits 1/3 beats..
here is some errors that I detect

(I will tell other things when you resnap them to 1/4 or 1/2) ><
01:53:630- (1) don't overlap them oAo your map will be hard to rank if this happened, instead, try to move it to x:84 and y:214. :3 Moving it to 84,214 will make the map harder to rank /.\ But I moved it to somewhere else
03:14:376- (7) I think it sounds better if you change this one to slider until 03:15:123 Sorry, for the sake of rhythm.

I guess thats all for now ><;
btw I really like how you use sliders >w< its awesome! keep it up! Thanks~ I will

• Try offset = -2655
  删掉歌曲文件夹内的osb文件然后重新full submission

• 我觉得开始时候的normal-hitnormal的声音有点吵,小声一点?
  00:36:764 (1) - 小声一点
  00:51:988 (2,3,4) - 从形状上说没问题,不过这难度是normal,同时有easy的任务(因为这是最简难度)，新人玩可能会因为间距的问题给你打低分
  01:34:227 (1) - 静音？
  01:44:824 (2,3) - 太近
  02:03:630 (2,3,4,5,6) - 新人会感到郁闷的，给5加new combo？
  02:12:585 - KIAI应该在note上开始和结束
  02:49:750 - 加个circle?
  04:13:033 (2,4) - 没有重叠好
  04:54:675 - 这里的KIAI之后已经没有NOTE了,所以没必要拉到那么后面

• 00:22:436 (5) - 放在那几个slider的中间会更好看
  00:36:764 (1) - 小声点
  00:50:197 (8,9) - 没有重叠好
  01:13:033 (5) - 听起来感觉挺奇怪的
  01:30:048 (1,2) - 没有重叠好
  01:54:227 (3,4) - 没有重叠好
  02:12:585 - KIAI应该在note上开始和结束
  02:59:600 (1) - 加clap
  03:25:123 (2) - 加finish
  04:19:899 (1) - 加clap
  04:54:675 - 这里的KIAI之后已经没有NOTE了,所以没必要拉到那么后面

Weiren wrote:

General

• Try offset = -2655 嘛 我先去问问再改
  删掉歌曲文件夹内的osb文件然后重新full submission 好

Normal

• 我觉得开始时候的normal-hitnormal的声音有点吵,小声一点? 音量-10%
  00:36:764 (1) - 小声一点 -10%
  00:51:988 (2,3,4) - 从形状上说没问题,不过这难度是normal,同时有easy的任务(因为这是最简难度)，新人玩可能会因为间距的问题给你打低分 :D 我相信新手的判断能力 既然写了normal那就一定会有easy没有的东西
  01:34:227 (1) - 静音？Done
  01:44:824 (2,3) - 太近 没有呀 都是0.8x
  02:03:630 (2,3,4,5,6) - 新人会感到郁闷的，给5加new combo？为了美观 给4加了NC
  02:12:585 - KIAI应该在note上开始和结束 Fixed
  02:49:750 - 加个circle? 加了
  04:13:033 (2,4) - 没有重叠好 Done
  04:54:675 - 这里的KIAI之后已经没有NOTE了,所以没必要拉到那么后面 因为我觉得后面都是不停重复 找不到合适的位置结束 所以就保留了 /.\ 反正也不影响游戏

Hard

• 00:22:436 (5) - 放在那几个slider的中间会更好看 done
  00:36:764 (1) - 小声点 -10%
  00:50:197 (8,9) - 没有重叠好 done
  01:13:033 (5) - 听起来感觉挺奇怪的 去掉了中间那个
  01:30:048 (1,2) - 没有重叠好 done
  01:54:227 (3,4) - 没有重叠好 done
  02:12:585 - KIAI应该在note上开始和结束 done
  02:59:600 (1) - 加clap 已经有啦
  03:25:123 (2) - 加finish OK
  04:19:899 (1) - 加clap OK
  04:54:675 - 这里的KIAI之后已经没有NOTE了,所以没必要拉到那么后面 理由同Normal

总体来说还是不错的
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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren

1. 没有点tag么?

1. 00:40:347 - 01:37:660 - 貌似你前面减过音量了,不过我感觉这段custom clap还是很大声,降低音量或者考虑换个其他的custom clap声吧,比如更小声的鼓声或者拍掌声
2. 02:09:003 (2) - Add clap?
3. 03:00:496 (1) - ^
4. 03:29:153 (6) - 加clap, 然后7用finish代替clap
5. 03:30:496 (1,2) - slider的四个点都加clap,有whistle的去掉,感觉会听着更好
6. 04:06:764 (3) - Add clap
7. 04:35:421 (3) - ^
8. 04:54:526 - 这之后放那么多绿线干嘛._. note都摆完了,分数出来前还来次喷泉效果不会觉得很奇怪么

1. 时间超过4分钟了...很可能会被当做app map对待的,是否考虑缩短点时间?
   
2. 00:55:570 - 01:37:660, 02:27:362 - 02:42:138, 这段时间内的custom clap还是感觉太大声了,降低音量或者换用其他的custom sound
3. 02:05:720 (4,5,6,7) - 加clap然后用声音渐大效果感觉更好
4. 03:31:690 (1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 04:54:526 - 后面多余的绿线

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. 没有点tag么? added

[Normal]

1. 00:40:347 - 01:37:660 - 貌似你前面减过音量了,不过我感觉这段custom clap还是很大声,降低音量或者考虑换个其他的custom clap声吧,比如更小声的鼓声或者拍掌声 音量减小了 现在听起来应该会好些
2. 02:09:003 (2) - Add clap? done
3. 03:00:496 (1) - ^ added
4. 03:29:153 (6) - 加clap, 然后7用finish代替clap 嗯
5. 03:30:496 (1,2) - slider的四个点都加clap,有whistle的去掉,感觉会听着更好 嗯
6. 04:06:764 (3) - Add clap done
7. 04:35:421 (3) - ^ done
8. 04:54:526 - 这之后放那么多绿线干嘛._. note都摆完了,分数出来前还来次喷泉效果不会觉得很奇怪么 /.\ 那我就去掉吧

[Hard]

1. 时间超过4分钟了...很可能会被当做app map对待的,是否考虑缩短点时间? ppy说最高限度是4:30 还差十秒钟 XD
2. 00:55:570 - 01:37:660, 02:27:362 - 02:42:138, 这段时间内的custom clap还是感觉太大声了,降低音量或者换用其他的custom sound 减小了音量
3. 02:05:720 (4,5,6,7) - 加clap然后用声音渐大效果感觉更好 done
4. 03:31:690 (1,2,3,4) - ^ done
5. 04:54:526 - 后面多余的绿线 deleted

star

ziin wrote:

[general]
end the kiai time at the end. I guess it's mainly for the main screen.

[hard]
00:13:779 (2,4) - delete, overmapped ok
00:17:362 (2,4) - ^ ok
00:21:988 (4) - use circles instead sorry but i like it
00:43:033 (7) - 1/3 earlier. Seems silly to stop following lyrics it sounds bad imo
00:52:884 (3,5) - make these just circles. The slider end is overmapped and it's repetitive. ok
01:17:362 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - plays poorly. Mix in circles and long sliders. done now
01:49:153 - add ok
01:50:347 (2,5) - overmapped. Save the streams for the drumrolls. deleted 2 5
02:00:347 - ^
02:03:481 - ^
02:04:675 - ^
02:04:824 - ^
02:05:272 - ^
02:27:362 - why is this 5%? it sounds better imo
03:29:153 (8) - use 4 circles instead ok
03:39:003 (2) - use 3 circles i like this way now

The spacing on the streams is pretty high, which IMO makes it too difficult for a hard, but the entire map is too easy for an insane. 0.8x now

Check AIMod for some expert spacing distances, and consider making them a bit shorter.

1. Try offset 949, I dunno why the offset is "out" of the song xD
2. Slider tick rate 2? Sound is better.
3. Stop kiai time at 04:52:889 xD

1. 01:19:750 (5) - Delete
2. 01:20:794 (1) - Start it at 01:19:750 (Where there was the slider)
3. 01:34:227 (1) - Start it at 01:34:531
4. 01:44:376 (1) - No new combo
5. 01:44:824 (2) - New combo and add a finish at the beginning of the slider
6. 02:10:944 (1) - Start it at 02:11:247 and remove clap adding a finish at 02:13:486
7. 02:48:854 (1) - Finish at the end?
8. 04:24:232 (4) - Move the second waypoint at x24 y112 and 3rd at x88 y64, better blanket.

1. 04:18:705 (4) - It almost touches the hp bar.
2. 04:24:227 (1) - No new combo
3. 04:24:526 (2) - New combo

Chewin wrote:

General:

1. Try offset 949, I dunno why the offset is "out" of the song xD A green line is before 949, if offset changes to 949, there will be something wrong with the slider speed.
2. Slider tick rate 2? Sound is better. I use 1/3 snap to map the song, slider tick 2 sounds messy.
3. Stop kiai time at 04:52:889 xD yes sir.

Normal:

1. 01:19:750 (5) - Delete ok
2. 01:20:794 (1) - Start it at 01:19:750 (Where there was the slider) done
3. 01:34:227 (1) - Start it at 01:34:531 ok
4. 01:44:376 (1) - No new combo done
5. 01:44:824 (2) - New combo and add a finish at the beginning of the slider ok
6. 02:10:944 (1) - Start it at 02:11:247 and remove clap adding a finish at 02:13:486 I dont want to add a finish at a soft part.
7. 02:48:854 (1) - Finish at the end? ok
8. 04:24:232 (4) - Move the second waypoint at x24 y112 and 3rd at x88 y64, better blanket. done XD

Hard:

1. 04:18:705 (4) - It almost touches the hp bar. moved down
2. 04:24:227 (1) - No new combo i don't think it looks well.
3. 04:24:526 (2) - New combo

Ok, I really love the song and maps, very good job.
I hope it will be ranked soon ~ Have my star and good luck *-*/

1. clear

1. 00:40:347 (1) - 離轉盤時間有點近, 距離卻有點遠, 重新排版讓他近一點
2. 01:09:899 (2,3,4,5) - 這邊spacing一致些?
   整體沒什麼問題的diff, 三段KIAI前的spinner的不同處理方式不錯

1. 需要比Normal大的lead-in..
2. 00:01:839 (5) - 建議2/3拍, 如果想map鋼琴白線再補圈, 和00:03:929 (6) 照應
3. 00:20:645 (T) - 降到40%左右..當然這裡是變強但是60%有些對比太強了
4. 00:40:347.. 開頭是0.5x, 這裡突然就1.0x, 感覺非常的快..雖然工程有點浩大不過建議到0:54:675為止用0.75x作過渡
5. 02:27:362.. 整段的5%..很容易被說unrankable
6. 04:00:048 (x) - 有漏一個note的感覺
   沒什麼大問題, 不過小圈又讓人感覺有使用DS的時候, 建議適量的nazi一下自己的排版, 稍微參差不齊的spacing在小圈會相對明顯一點, 像是03:47:511 (6), 03:49:302 (3) 一類

loveFantasy wrote:

你好

[General]

1. clear

[Normal]

1. 00:40:347 (1) - 離轉盤時間有點近, 距離卻有點遠, 重新排版讓他近一點 done
2. 01:09:899 (2,3,4,5) - 這邊spacing一致些? 嗯
   整體沒什麼問題的diff, 三段KIAI前的spinner的不同處理方式不錯

[Hard]

1. 需要比Normal大的lead-in.. 改成了2000
2. 00:01:839 (5) - 建議2/3拍, 如果想map鋼琴白線再補圈, 和00:03:929 (6) 照應 done
3. 00:20:645 (T) - 降到40%左右..當然這裡是變強但是60%有些對比太強了 嗯
4. 00:40:347.. 開頭是0.5x, 這裡突然就1.0x, 感覺非常的快..雖然工程有點 浩大不過建議到0:54:675為止用0.75x作過渡 我再考虑一下 问问其他人的看法再改
5. 02:27:362.. 整段的5%..很容易被說unrankable ;_; 呀 上次删错绿线了
6. 04:00:048 (x) - 有漏一個note的感覺 加了一个note
   沒什麼大問題, 不過小圈又讓人感覺有使用DS的時候, 建議適量的nazi一下自己的排版, 稍微參差不齊的spacing在小圈會相對明顯一點, 像是03:47:511 (6), 03:49:302 (3) 一類

star

• Blue: You must fix this.
  Red: You better fix it!
  Orange: Screenshot ahead.
  Black: Just suggestions though.
  
  ~Normal~

1. 03:36:018 (Spinner):That spinner's too close after (3)... Move this to another tick or white tick...
   
   ~Hard~
2. 00:50:645 (9, 10) - That;s better to me.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:51:839 (1, 2) - ^, Look at the differences!!!!
   
   SPOILER

   

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello. Hello~

~Normal~

[*]03:36:018 (Spinner):That spinner's too close after (3)... Move this to another tick or white tick... Done~

~Hard~
[*]00:50:645 (9, 10) - That;s better to me. :O
[*]00:51:839 (1, 2) - ^, Look at the differences!!!! ;_; what's the difference.

That's it.
Thank you and good luck.

Shiki wrote:

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello. Hello~

~Normal~

[*]03:36:018 (Spinner):That spinner's too close after (3)... Move this to another tick or white tick... Done~

~Hard~
[*]00:50:645 (9, 10) - That;s better to me. :O
[*]00:51:839 (1, 2) - ^, Look at the differences!!!! ;_; what's the difference.

That's it.
Thank you and good luck.

Thank you
You forgot to kudo me for the m4m ;_;