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K2J
Bippity-bumpity-boo. The last part of Insane is gone, you can all come back now.
Topic Starter
K2J
I think this is going to be the last bump. If this falls off into Graveyarded, I'm going to let it stay there. A star isn't bad for a first map, and I'm sure someone down the line will have the same affinity for Sonic music, regardless of the game it comes from, and enjoy the map, even if it isn't ranked.

It's been a learning experience. 2 week timer - Go!
Mogsy
Rose Easy:
-Hitsounds all throughout the map, please, not just at the end.
-00:44:782, 00:45:116, 00:45:449 - Beats go here. Make 00:44:782 and 00:45:116 clicked beats and 00:45:449 a slider 1 beat in length, but repeated so it covers a span of 4 beats.
-Reinput the break after that last point.
-00:54:78 (1) - Straighten this out; make each side symmetrical.
-01:02:78 (1) - ^
-01:13:44 (1) - ^ (it is possible to keep the letter shape even after doing so)
-01:16:11 (1) - ^
-01:38:44 (2) - This is a no-go, given that you haven't prepped for anything like that earlier in the map.
-01:52:78 (1) - Repeat twice more.
-02:39:78 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.

Chaotix Medium:
-Hitsounds all throughout the map, please, not just at the end.
-00:44:94 (1) - Remove this, extend the break.
-00:47:44 (2) - Place the endpoint exactly on 1's endpoint.
-00:52:78 (2) - ^
-01:56:78 (2) - ^
-01:59:44 (2) - ^
-02:07:44 (2) - ^
-02:08:78 (4) - ^, except replace 1 with 3.
-02:21:44 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:22:78 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.

Sonic Hard:
-Hitsounds all throughout the map, please, not just at the end.
-00:18:11 (3,4,5) - This looks awkward, given the part just like it rhythmically before.
-00:23:78 (2) - New Combo mark. Don't care if you're going for that sorta theme, it's wrong.
-00:24:11 (3) - ^
-00:29:44 (7) - Make the endpoint match up with 8's starting point.
-00:50:78 (5) - Line up the starting point with 4.
-00:57:44 (3) - Make this symmetrical, it just looks random in its current design.
-01:08:11 (1) - This looks too angular, not smooth enough.
-01:14:44 (6) - Make this symmetrical.
-01:20:11 (5) - ^
-01:31:28 (2,1,2) - Line up with 1.
-01:33:11 (2) - New Combo mark. At least make this make some sense, normal-map-wise. In this case, phrases are not made up of 3 notes.
-01:33:44 (3) - New Combo mark.
-02:24:11 (7) - ^
-02:33:11 (2) - ^
-02:33:44 (3) - ^
-02:39:78 (2) - ^

Gimmicky map ideas are alright as long as they fit.

Dark Insane:
-Hitsound shpeal again.
-Stacking is okay. Stacking is okay. Stacking. Is. Okay. You don't need to seperate the beats like you did due to stacking being on.
-00:23:78 (2) - New Combo mark.
-00:24:11 (3) - ^ and match it up with the height of 2 and 4.
-01:01:44 (11) - New Combo mark.
-01:09:94 (2) - Remember the alignment thing? Yeah.
-01:11:11 (3) - ^
-01:14:78 (7) - ^

Other mods can see if the ending fits their qualifications, though.
Topic Starter
K2J
Fixed...?
happy30
Rose Easy

00:23:44 (1,2) - 1 grid to the right
00:53:78 (3) - 2 grids up, 1 to the right
01:58:28 (2) - 1/2 beat later
02:39:78 (1) - 1 grid to the left

Chaotix Medium

01:00:11 (1) - 3 grid right and 1 up
01:01:44 (3) - 1 grid up
01:33:44 (1) - 1 grid to the left
01:54:28 (1) - I dont like this slider, should start 1 note later IMO

Sonic Hard

00:17:78 (2) - 1 grid down, 2 to the right
00:18:11 (3) - 1 grid left
00:54:44 (7) - 1/2 beat later
02:34:61 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Remove the overlappings, make the spacing equal to eachother

Dark Insane

00:16:28 (6,7) - snap the notes to the grid, they will be stacked like that automatically in play mode
00:19:28 (8) - 3 grids to the right, and 1 up
00:21:44 (5,6) - 1 grid up and 1 grid right
00:25:94 (2,3,5) - Snap it to the grid please, overlap (2) and (4)
00:28:44 (8,9,10,11) - Grid snap
00:31:11 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:41:78 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:45:11 (14) - 1 grid down
00:47:11 (3,6) - use grid snap
00:49:78 (3,6) - ^
00:52:11 (1,2,4,5) - Use grid snap
00:53:44 (7,8) - ^
01:59:11 (13,16) - ^
02:03:94 (1) - more space here please

I don't like the overal spacing patterns, I suggest you to make it more interesting.
Topic Starter
K2J
Happy half-birthday, Egg Fleet! Your destination is still uncertain...
Skyripper
Great spinner sound and miss sound!

[Normal] -
00:33:78 (5) - I'd like to see this moved down a grid level to line up with the 4
01:01:78 (4) - Extend this one more time. Sounds a bit more natural going into the break
01:12:44 (2) - cool sounding slider with the drums 8-)
cool ending

[Hard] -
02:34:78 (1) - The stream starting here. It's not bad or anything, I just don't think it's consistent with the rest of the song per say. This is just imo, so you don't have to change it or anything. I just think adding a few sliders to make it more similar to the stream starting here: 01:00:28 (1) would be more consistent.
AND I'm only pointing ^ that out because there is nothing wrong with this difficulty ^_^. Good job.

[Insane]
This is doable and spacing is pretty consistent along with consistent patterns throughout. I think combo colors could be a little more consistent. But, that's not really important and I only saw maybe two places where they were conflicting.

This is great work, you shouldn't have any trouble getting this ranked. (Get more people to star this)

P.S. Your Meta-Knight Storyboard blew my mind. AWESOME job.

Star!
Larto
Meh, it's not the prettiest beatmap on the world, but it's pretty cool and fine so let's bubble?

Oh I forgot:


BOXXYBUBBLE!
Lokamp
This song is AWESOME! Keep up the good work!
awp
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
K2J
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
YellowerYoshi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
vytalibus
qlum
it would be better to give Chaotix the insane difficulty because its the hardest team to complete the game with
Topic Starter
K2J
That might be true, but I like the difficulties as they stand. Dark has a higher multiplayer rating than Chaotix, in any event.

Incidentally, the reason why it's called "Chaotix Medium" instead of "Chaotix Normal" is because the Chaotix certainly aren't normal.
ztrot
I love this :) and you should now why. plus the map is excellent no probs that i can see i only played sonic hard tho.
here comes the star
Zerostarry
Easy:
00:33:79 (2) - 2 hitcircles work better, imo
01:41:13 (1) - ^
01:51:79 (1) - ^
Fix those short 1/2 sliders in medium, too, i wont be mentioning them

There really isnt anything wrong in the other difficulties.
flyboy87
My goodness... what an awesome beatmap. .____. It made me feel so inferior.

Suggestions!

[Chaotic Medium]
23:466 (1,2) - Going for the triangle shape? Copy (1) from 22:800 and go to edit. After that, choose flip horizontally. Ctrl + C that note placement and return (1) from 22:800 back to what it was previously. Go to 23:466 and paste your new (1,2) there. Now you have a neat triangle!
30:800 (1) - Move this 1 grid to the left

I'm afraid that's all I could spot. If you spot any off looking shapes in your map, you can follow the concept I just explained in 23:466.

That's all from me.

Oh, and have a nice star, too. You deserve it.
RemmyX25
Bubble Pop.

Team Dark:
01:31:63 (4) - Slider is too short IMO
01:33:96 (3) - Could be better aligned

Those are my only concerns. If you insist on keeping that slider, have another BAT look at it then. If he says its ok, then I'll take back my comment :3


All fixed! Have your bubble back. (if you had a bubble... i dont remember...)

Niiiiiiiiice custom sounds though <3
Mogsy
I'd say that this is finally good enough to rank.
Topic Starter
K2J
Please wait as I go celebrate in an annoying fashion in chat.

Thank you everyone who helped make this possible!
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