abalee wrote:

banvi:
01:13:856 (x) - consider add a note here.
hmm , I don't want to do. This time , I want to follow backsounds.... (same as 02:03:909 (1,2,3,4,5))

abalee wrote:

:?

Holo:
00:58:540 (3) - consider to delete it.
02:05:093 (x) - add a note here?

ooooooops wrote:

I can make a taiko diff 0.0?

Shiirn wrote:

banviloid
01:54:435 (7) - can't see the second repeat due to hit score but uuuuuhhhhh
02:32:330 (2) - ^

Shiirn wrote:

Holoid
00:22:225 (3,4,5) - there are no 1/4s in the music, you should refrain from making something 'harder' just for the sake of it being harder. Also, the hitsound pattern here is rather displeasing to the ear. try removing the claps from the red and blue ticks, and leaving the clap on the white tick.-no change
00:27:119 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:33:593 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^ except that the hitsounds are ok
00:47:330 (2,3,4,5,6) - well. you seem to like this pattern
00:57:435 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^i think you know where i'm going with this.
01:02:014 (1,2,3) - overmapping is bad on a song this calm imo-no change
01:03:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ blah blah
01:11:883 (1) - remove new combo-fixed
01:12:119 (4) - new combo-fixed
01:34:856 (2) - move break to here and i will love you for fifteen seconds-moved
01:53:014 (1,2,3,4) - overmapping ok but this makes less sense than an outright stream-no change
02:02:409 (1) - remove new combo-fixed
02:02:646 (4) - new combo - in fact, whenever you do this change it-fixed
02:07:304 (1,6) - ^like that, but will need to remove new combo from 02:08:172 (1) -fixed

1. Tick Rate: "2" fits perfectly this song, I strongly suggest to use it for all the diffs.
2. Kiai-Time: Perhaps, end the 2nd one here: 02:22:856 - ? The current ending-point is following the vocals thus looks a kinda odd, try that one.

1. Since the BPM is quite fast the current settings are a bit high. If you're going to keep this as the easiest diff of this mapset, I strongly suggest to tweak the settings a bit, perhaps AR & OD -1, please?
2. 01:22:698 (1) - This slider miight be a bit hard to follow Uh, the fact that it's slider helps a lot so I guess it's alrigth, nvm~
3. 01:34:856 (1) - Post-Spinner circles tend to be a bit hard to hit for rookies so... Perhaps remove the circle and use a "Rhythmical-Break" instead? All you need to do is "drag" the break.
4. 01:50:014 (1) - Using kick-sliders is definitely not a good idea. That kind of sliders by themselves are hard for rookies, with the current BPM it might be too much. Perhaps, try a simple slider?
5. 01:52:540 (1) - Just wondering, would you like to improve this blanket?
   

   272,264,112540,6,0,B|240:288|192:288|152:248|152:208,1,160,4|0

6. 02:26:646 (3) - Same as before about the "kick-sliders". Just pointing out that this is mainly because the Fast-BPM makes these slider harder for rookies.
7. 02:30:435 (1) - ^, Same as the previous "kick-slider", this one is kinda worse tho. I strongly suggest to use something else instead. I simple slider should work, it would suit better this diff.
8. Really nice, just some suggestions to make this diff slightly easier for rookies.

1. Combo Colours: "Black" mess ups some skins, if you care about this, try using Dark-Grey instead~
2. 01:14:014 (3,4,5) - This part didn't flow really well. If you unstack (4) the flow would improve a LOT imo. Consider doing it~
3. 01:31:383 (1,2,3) - I strongly suggest to sliiightly increase the spacing of these objects, otherwise they look like fake 1/4 or something.
4. 02:21:909 (1,2,3) - ^
5. Awesome!, I love how your patterns flow perfectly and are creative at the same time. Good job!

1. Tick Rate: I suggested in [General] to use '2', I still think it would work. Anyhow, if you don't want to use '2' you must use at least '1' because '0.5' is no longer allowed.
2. 00:28:067 (8,9,1,2,3) - The current NC Placement doesn't make much sense. Actually, It's making the jump harder to read. You should move the NC to (8)(00:28:067) or (7) (00:27:909) (Also, consider removing this object: 00:28:067 (8) - it feels a bit off and the pattern would be way better w/o it)
3. 00:48:593 (1) - You should unstack this object, otherwise the Stacks and Jumps make this pattern really hard to read and completely killing the flow. Actually, the current pattern is quite messed up. I strongly suggest to re-arrange the pattern to make it readable, you should remove this object: 00:48:435 (3) - and then re-arrange the stacks. Perhaps something like this?
4. 01:51:909 (8) - Due to the previous objects and hit-burst, I found a bit hard to notice that this objects was a slider. I strongly suggest to tweak the slider-shape a bit to make it more visible.

Gonzvlo wrote:

[banviloid]

1. Combo Colours: "Black" mess ups some skins, if you care about this, try using Dark-Grey instead~ ok , changed~
2. 01:14:014 (3,4,5) - This part didn't flow really well. If you unstack (4) the flow would improve a LOT imo. Consider doing it~ Hmm , ok changed!
3. 01:31:383 (1,2,3) - I strongly suggest to sliiightly increase the spacing of these objects, otherwise they look like fake 1/4 or something. changed sliiightly
4. 02:21:909 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
5. Awesome!, I love how your patterns flow perfectly and are creative at the same time. Good job!wow thanks <3

Gonzvlo wrote:

[ringloid]

1. Since the BPM is quite fast the current settings are a bit high. If you're going to keep this as the easiest diff of this mapset, I strongly suggest to tweak the settings a bit, perhaps AR & OD -1, please?ok
2. 01:22:698 (1) - This slider miight be a bit hard to follow Uh, the fact that it's slider helps a lot so I guess it's alrigth, nvm~:3
3. 01:34:856 (1) - Post-Spinner circles tend to be a bit hard to hit for rookies so... Perhaps remove the circle and use a "Rhythmical-Break" instead? All you need to do is "drag" the break.ok
4. 01:50:014 (1) - Using kick-sliders is definitely not a good idea. That kind of sliders by themselves are hard for rookies, with the current BPM it might be too much. Perhaps, try a simple slider?ok
5. 01:52:540 (1) - Just wondering, would you like to improve this blanket?thanks!
   

   272,264,112540,6,0,B|240:288|192:288|152:248|152:208,1,160,4|0

6. 02:26:646 (3) - Same as before about the "kick-sliders". Just pointing out that this is mainly because the Fast-BPM makes these slider harder for rookies.ok
7. 02:30:435 (1) - ^, Same as the previous "kick-slider", this one is kinda worse tho. I strongly suggest to use something else instead. I simple slider should work, it would suit better this diff.ok
8. Really nice, just some suggestions to make this diff slightly easier for rookies.

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

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  [Holoid]

1. Tick Rate: I suggested in [General] to use '2', I still think it would work. Anyhow, if you don't want to use '2' you must use at least '1' because '0.5' is no longer allowed.-Fixed
2. 00:28:067 (8,9,1,2,3) - The current NC Placement doesn't make much sense. Actually, It's making the jump harder to read. You should move the NC to (8)(00:28:067) or (7) (00:27:909) (Also, consider removing this object: 00:28:067 (8) - it feels a bit off and the pattern would be way better w/o it)-no change. I like this pattern... sry >.<
3. 00:48:593 (1) - You should unstack this object, otherwise the Stacks and Jumps make this pattern really hard to read and completely killing the flow. Actually, the current pattern is quite messed up. I strongly suggest to re-arrange the pattern to make it readable, you should remove this object: 00:48:435 (3) - and then re-arrange the stacks. Perhaps something likethis?
4. 01:51:909 (8) - Due to the previous objects and hit-burst, I found a bit hard to notice that this objects was a slider. I strongly suggest to tweak the slider-shape a bit to make it more visible.-Fixed

Changed combo color
That should be all, let me know when you're done and I'll gladly return the bubble.

1. Kiai Time: The musical changes starts here: 02:22:856. 2nd Kiai Time should end there.
2. Letterboxing: Well, the BG is already letter-boxed so it's not necessary to use it. Right now, it is adding unnecessary load. (Disable it, please)

1. Since this is the easiest diff in the mapset and due to the high BPM, I'd suggest to reduce "AR" 1 tick.
2. 02:26:646 (3,1) - This is going to be way too hard for rookies. Unstacking (1) should be enough, try it.

1. Tick Rate: 2 would fit perfectly this song and map, consider using it.
2. 02:31:067 (10) - The repeat-arrow is partially hidden, it's not huuuge problem but this can be easily fixed. Try to tweak the slider to avoid stuff like this.

Gonzvlo wrote:

[ringloid]

1. Since this is the easiest diff in the mapset and due to the high BPM, I'd suggest to reduce "AR" 1 tick.ok
2. 02:26:646 (3,1) - This is going to be way too hard for rookies. Unstacking (1) should be enough, try it.ok

Gonzvlo wrote:

I didn't get your PM... I completely forgot about this.

Sorry, let's get this re-bubbled. Just a few things before proceeding:

[General]

1. Kiai Time: The musical changes starts here: 02:22:856. 2nd Kiai Time should end there.
2. Letterboxing: Well, the BG is already letter-boxed so it's not necessary to use it. Right now, it is adding unnecessary load. (Disable it, please)

[ringloid]

1. Since this is the easiest diff in the mapset and due to the high BPM, I'd suggest to reduce "AR" 1 tick.
2. 02:26:646 (3,1) - This is going to be way too hard for rookies. Unstacking (1) should be enough, try it.

[Holoid]

1. Tick Rate: 2 would fit perfectly this song and map, consider using it.
2. 02:31:067 (10) - The repeat-arrow is partially hidden, it's not huuuge problem but this can be easily fixed. Try to tweak the slider to avoid stuff like this.

I'll keep an eye on this until it gets ranked.

Gonzvlo wrote:

Okay, I'm ready to bubble but I just found this in iTunes:



Although, I'm not sure... let me know if you have any reference of the current title, otherwise change it to "the last effect", please.

Gonzvlo wrote:

Okay, I'm ready to bubble but I just found this in iTunes:



Although, I'm not sure... let me know if you have any reference of the current title, otherwise change it to "the last effect", please.

EDIT:

Make sure to follow this guide.

Gonzvlo wrote:

Okay, after a long re-checking process everything seems okay now.

Rebubbled.

kurohana wrote:

gogo rank this x33