Let's do this!

The rythm you created doesn't entirely fit the flow of the song. Some parts are overmapped (for istance, the first melodic part after the beginning, there I suggest you prioritizing the rythm of the melody). Try to calm everything down.

Lower the volume of the objects, the song isn't that aggressive so "calm" it down.

SIGNORA I LIMONI SIGNORAAAAA

Here are some tips for your map:

1. 00:10:051 Try to begin the stream as close as possible to that slider end.
2. Stream combos at 00:11:960 and parts like that should contain at most 16 objects and not more than that.
3. 00:40:938 I think this circle here is useless. No significant sound in that precise point can be represented, so I suggest you ereasing it.
4. 00:51:165 Start a new combo here.
5. 01:51:165 Bring it closer to the slider. I think it's too far.
6. 03:12:028 Bring the spinner end here.
7. From 03:35:210 to 03:35:892 I think this part should be smoother to follow to flow of the section.
8. 03:51:027 What was the point of using this slider?
9. From 04:13:118 to 04:17:346 I see you like jumps xD. No ok let's be serious, You should ease it a little bit. I personally believe it would be too tiring keeping it like that.
10. 05:14:209 Ok, I know it's a 8-9* 220 BPM map, but I suggest you easing this part a bit (not too much though).

Keep in count that these are minor tips given only to improve the quality of it. No major changes are required.

Good luck for ranking ;).

Good luck for your map!

good luck for your map!

Buona fortuna :)

You can decrease the OD in Normal from 5 to 4, just to make sure taht beginners can SS it easier :)

I absolutely love this set here. I hope it gets ranked :)

Nice map man. Compared to Sotarks' ones this is more original in terms of farming! I wish you good luck for ranking :)

Buona fortuna con il mapping frate.

00:55:446 Simplify this slider

Apart from this, this is a map worth ranking :)

As You get to higher timings, you shall use a slower sv, shorter streams and easier jumps. This is a marathon, so you need people to get easily lots of score.

actually good, but do not lose the sense of distance snap and real rhythm

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mappe fantastiche, fatte veramente bene! L'una cosa, magari per rendere l'insane 5 stelle puoi spaziare i jump un poco di più, ma non tanto. Per il resto, spero venga rankata! :)

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farming is good guys

Actually good boi

I highly recommend to increase CS from 4,2 to 4,5 in order to have 6 entire stars, and also advice to increase the distance snap of the first stream form 0,6 to 0,7 and move it a bit more left. For the rest, fantastic!