I'm going to be completely honest, I have no idea what you mean. Music-wise, it follows the same rhythm as the previous and succeeding slider and both seem fine to you.
00:32:622(1,2,3) I think this can use some hitsound mixing with normalfinish and normal whistle) you could place a kiai mode at 00:56:733 and end it at 01:29:511. if you dont know how, go to timing panel and click on the timepoint for kiai to start. then go to the settings and check kiai mode. for ending kiais, DO NOT CHANGE THE OTHER GREEN LINE TO THE KIAI MODE. Theese are indicated by a star icon at the right side of the points data. 01:43:733 - 01:56:733 can use drum sample since begginers have default sound skins so bumping in some drum hitsounds won't harm at all for them. People are gonna 3-4 mod lower diffs anyway for leaderboards if this gets ranked so that shouldnt be an issue. 01:58:255 - 02:26:826 should be kiai mode. :)
01:17:289 (1) - way too complex for new players. Stick to 1/1 rhythm and replaced with a circle
02:55:123 - 03:27:067 kiai mode should be used here again. 03:33:511 (1,2,3) this is a bit too hard to read on default skin. this type of reading stuff only came present in iNiS mapping.(which was pretty bad quality. including maps ranked 2007,2008,2009 and a bit of 2010,2011. mapping shifted today to encorporate flow, angles and aesethetics more than the management of opaque 300's using eyeburning patterns.) :)