Naraku no Hana (TV Size)

00:57:691 (10) - Consider using a D and move 00:56:177 (2) ->00:56:453 + changing 00:56:040 (1) - also as a D. In this way (6) doesn't stay awkwardly alone while the end of this section gets more emphasized. Sure, some cymbals like 00:57:141 are not mapped, but that is due to the 1/4. I think rhythmically it works quite well.

If you feel like this might be too much, (6) could be changed to a normal note then. Works as well.

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Rycy

sure

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01:13:654

OnosakiHito

01:13:654 - Very nice alternation in finishers at the end.

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01:18:333

OnosakiHito

01:18:333 & 01:18:884 add kats? Absolutely fine without. Your idea is clear. Just while playing it felt like it could be filled with these. Same for 01:27:141.

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Rycy

prefer current

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01:32:370

OnosakiHito

01:32:370 - Maybe I am getting ahead of myself, but try this pattern:

Cursor at 01:32:370 and finishers are highlighted