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00:21:412 (2,3,4) - 这吉他弹的有点不明所以 这种1/9建议加个全nc

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00:24:153 (2) - 滑条头提前一个1/8开始 或者在00:24:069 (2) - 加一个note

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00:32:986 (2) - 直线不是很对味 以及00:34:319 (2) - 这个2和00:32:986 (2) - 叠起来反而让整体的flow变得很奇怪 我不建议为了单纯的叠这个位置的note牺牲flow

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改了

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00:36:986 (2,3) - 00:38:319 (2,3) - note叠在滑条头强度一下子下来了 和后面这几个大三角跳的强度反差也太大了吧,可以把00:36:652 (1) - 改成一个1/1滑条

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如果不想牺牲这个节奏就把00:36:986 (2) - 拉开,00:37:986 (1,2) - 同理

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换成了1/1

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1

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00:40:152 (5,6) - this 5 is super spaced and it looks a visually jarring, maybe slide it back in with the others, or space everything else out more to make it consistent

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ok

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00:42:152 (1,2,3) - 进主歌强度下来了,节奏密度理应也降低一些,与前面作出差别,不推荐仍然用大量的1/2滑条,可以提高1/1滑条甚至是1/1折返滑条的比例

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现在这段节奏给我感觉就是啥都想用滑条头跟,反而显得非常混乱:00:42:152 (1,2) - 有跟鼓和乐器的趋势,00:42:819 (3,4,1) - 开始跟人声,结果到00:43:819 (2,3) - 又变成跟鼓和乐器;00:44:819 (1,2) - 滑条头跟的是乐器和鼓,滑条尾巴跟的人声,后面突然变成小跳跟人声,结果前面差不多的排列00:44:486 (4,5) - 反而跟的是鼓和乐器;00:48:152 (3,4,1) - 大量跟人声的情况下结果在00:49:319 (3) - 突然来了个特殊形状的滑条跟乐器,以此类推。我觉得需要避免的一个节奏误区是不能什么都跟,要有一个主次的区分

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改掉了

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00:52:819 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I think you can change this part a little. I'd suggest that you reverse both the 1s with ctrl + G, then stack the 5 on the 2 and lastly swap 2 and 3 with each other on the timeline.

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sure

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00:58:736 - theres a kick here thats not mapped

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fixed

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01:02:819 (4,5) - 俩滑条跟的音是有区别的 这个flow的思路不错但是我会推荐把01:02:819 (4) - 改成一个二连小跳:

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ok

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01:09:319 (3) - 这种地方的停顿小细节也可以做出来,推荐原地

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ok

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01:12:652 (1,2,3) - flow在前面这么顺手的情况下突然来了个直线…歌也没有什么太大的变化,用意不明啊,可以改改吧

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改了

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01:15:152 (10) - 如何避免大量的1/2带来的无聊感其实在这种地方的小细节就能解决,比如把这个滑条尾拉到3/4和后面01:15:486 (1) - 做个对比就很好了

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01:17:819 (6) - 这地方做的就可以 不过避免一下1/2滑条和3/4滑条间距混用的情况 容易误导

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01:20:486 (7,1) - 这个很好

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ok

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01:44:319 - Forgot a circle

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oops

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02:47:452 (1) - You should deal with all the unsnapped objects that are showing up on Aimod

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ok

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