00:06:766 (6766|3) - this ln is starting on the wrong line (which should be in 00:06:891). Another, instead of just being a single ln, try charting that sound effect like this?
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/829524287899172876/1347522995069128737/screenshot376.jpg?ex=67cc2215&is=67cad095&hm=78cf59ab62e6e06da1d838dada536cfd70b9261c7ede84fc338e05a56e23a3a7&
00:36:516 - 1 I think we can skip this (hi-hat sound that has been omitted in the majority of the chart) and instead add a note here 00:36:641 for the followed sounds 00:34:766 (34766|2,34891|0,35141|3,35391|0,35641|3)
00:45:016 seems a bit complex for "easy" players in terms of getting the pattern and the music digested -- instead of following the consecutive kicks you can follow up the lead melody https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19540373/376b
01:00:266 - for this section, wouldn't it be better to isolate the notes likes this since it kinda doesnt show which direction it's going?
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/829524287899172876/1347531006546284634/screenshot377.jpg?ex=67cc298b&is=67cad80b&hm=33570555dab00e2c9e63663046006ed09d625efe42716cbfbe88c59be2ce52fc&
01:02:016 (62016|1,62266|1,62766|1,63016|1) - kind of compromising having both at the same column, and there's no gradual sound justification for the pattern -- making a simple alternation may suit the consecutive kicks 
