Exit This Earth's Atomosphere (Camellia's "PLANETARY//200STEP" Remix)

00:07:280 - 00:25:805 from my perspective, u can delete all the rice notes in the doubles, using a single ln to highlight the guitar sound, in such a lower density can we better form a gradient and smoothly strengthen the density into 00:26:180

00:11:930 (11930|0,12080|1) - ctrl+j for better transition

00:11:930 (11930|0,12080|1,25730|3,25880|2,26030|1) - i dont see why these are here, as well as they are ending a measure earlier than 00:26:180 , in my opinion this is unnecessary and there isnt much validity to why is this used

00:24:980 (24980|3,25580|2,25730|1,25880|0) - should avoid these 1/4 releases if u are keeping 1/2 rhythm here
smth like this is more clear

00:45:380 (45380|0,45530|1,45680|2,45830|3,45980|2,46130|1,46280|0,46430|1,46580|2) - i think these cases on short long notes on the melody should be switched to single rice notes, and 00:46:580 (46580|0,47780|2,50180|0) - chord additions should become long notes instead

00:45:380 (45380|0,54380|0) - pitch relevancy is wack at times around here

00:54:380 (54380|3) - this should be kept 1/2 length like 00:56:780 (56780|0,56930|1,57080|2,57230|3) - ?

00:54:980 (54980|0,55280|0,55580|2,55730|2) - things like this create weird ln-shield kinda stuff, i think moving the objects around (for example 00:55:430 (55430|2,55580|0) ) should fix the problems

01:00:530 - can do small rearrangement here for better clarity (not separating the ringing melody)

01:03:680 (63680|1,63830|2,63830|0,63830|3) - no point why they end in a grace

01:07:280 (67280|3) - can end at 01:08:105 to integrate with the Lns left side

01:12:680 (72680|0,72755|1,72830|2,72905|0,72980|3,73055|2,73130|1,73205|0,73280|3) - ctrl+h to divise from previo us instance as this is obvious its copypasted from the same thing n measures earlier

01:13:580 (73580|1,73580|0,73655|2,73730|1,73805|3,73805|0) - so many notes for just two sounds inbetween a calm transition is asking for weird visual feeling, simplify

01:23:105 - can def align LN releases to be more so in a pattern and to highlight the rhythm-change

01:26:480 (86480|2,86555|1,86630|2,86705|1) - weird trill and 01:26:180 (86180|3,86330|3,86480|3,86630|3,86780|3,86930|3,87080|3) - omega anchor

01:36:380 (96380|3,96380|0,96380|1,96455|0,96530|1,96530|2,96530|3,96605|3,96680|2,96680|0,96680|1,96755|1,96830|0,96830|3,96830|2,96905|2,96980|3,96980|0,96980|1,97055|2,97130|3,97130|0,97130|1) - minijack hell, please, dont, you can use graces as they are probably better to play and also the transition between 01:36:230 (96230|2,96230|0,96230|3,96380|3,96380|1,96380|0) - is really lackluster

01:51:530 (111530|3,111530|0,111605|0,111605|3) and 01:51:755 (111755|0,111755|3,111830|3,111830|0) - should diverge because the entire section is focused on 1-4 column and not balanced further or back

02:04:580 (124580|1,124580|0,124655|2,124730|3,124805|1,124880|3,124880|2,124880|0,124955|1,125030|3,125105|0,125180|2,125180|3,125255|1,125330|0,125405|2,125480|0,125480|1,125480|3,125555|2,125630|0,125705|3,125780|1,125780|0,125855|2,125930|3,126005|1,126080|3,126080|2,126080|0,126155|1,126230|3,126305|0,126380|2,126380|3,126455|1,126530|0,126605|2) - unbalanced difficulty wise compared to previous sections, this is like light insane, while the previous parts are expert+

02:10:780 (130780|0,130930|0,131080|0,131230|0,131380|0) - offsnapped, should be at 02:10:730 (130730|0,130880|0,131030|0,131180|0,131330|0)

02:12:680 (132680|3,132755|1,132755|0,132830|3,132855|2,132880|1,132980|3,132980|0,133017|1,133055|2) - massive spike

02:42:380 (162380|0,162530|0,162680|0,162830|0,162980|0,163130|0,163280|0,163430|0) - omega long anchor, balance section will fix

03:12:230 (192230|2,192230|3,192380|3,192380|2,192530|2,192530|3,192680|2,192680|3,192830|3,192830|2,192905|2,192980|3,193055|2,193205|2,193280|3,193280|2,193430|3,193430|2) - this whole section is really hard on 3&4 columns making the 1&2 columns underused and shifting balance to right hand

03:39:905 (219905|2,219905|3) - move these to 03:39:830 -

There seems to be an incorrect position of the LN in the part 04:50:180 to 04:59:780.

• 04:50:705 (290705|0,290705|1) - -> 04:50:630 (290630|2,290630|3) - LN move

• 04:51:905 (291905|3,291905|2) - -> 04:51:830 (291830|0,291830|1) - same

• 04:53:030 (293030|0,293030|3) - -> 04:53:030 (293030|0,293030|3) - same

• 04:54:305 (294305|2,294305|1,294455|1) - -> 04:54:305 (294305|2,294305|1,294455|1) - same

• 04:55:505 (295505|0,295505|1) - -> 04:55:430 (295430|3,295430|2) - same

• 04:56:705 (296705|2,296705|3) - -> 04:56:630 (296630|0,296630|1) - same

• 04:57:830 (297830|0,297830|3) - LN add

• 04:58:955 (298955|1,298955|0) - -> 04:59:030 (299030|2,299030|3) - LN move

This way, the LN is exactly where the emphasis is in the music.

06:30:980 (390980|1,390980|0) - why double? this part is same 00:06:980, but you not used note this part. Also, I don't think it's sound enough to use Double. I think single is right for this part