00:01:926 (1926|1,1926|2) - tbh i didn't here kick here so maybe you should make it single?
00:06:759 (6759|1) - small suggestion, move to col 1 to provide chord complexity from 00:06:092 (6092|2,6092|1) -
00:13:592 (13592|0,13592|3,13592|2,13926|2,13926|3,13926|0,14426|3,14426|0,14426|2,14926|2,14926|3,14926|0) - suggest rearrange the jacks a bit, the placement is a bit monotonous atm
00:33:092 (33092|3) - for comfortability u can just move this to col 2, the jack and the ln release on RH is jarring
00:34:759 (34759|2,34842|1,34926|0,34926|3) - actually i did'nt here 1/4 sounds so im a little confused that why here use 1/4 note
00:49:259 (49259|2,49259|0,49259|3) - 00:49:926 (49926|3,49926|1,49926|0) - 00:59:926 (59926|0,59926|3,59926|1) - 01:00:592 (60592|2,60592|0,60592|3) - and other repetitive parts. should be doubles like 01:01:926 (61926|3,61926|0,62259|3,62259|1,62259|2,62592|2,62592|1,62926|3,62926|1,62926|0,63259|0,63259|3) - etc
00:57:092 (57092|2,57092|3,57092|1,57592|2,57592|1,57592|3) - you can use different kind of chord placement on this one, as both has different vocals
rearrange things around after fixing this
01:07:592 (67592|1,67759|1,67926|1,68092|1) - this anchor is too long? just move 01:07:926 (67926|1) - to col 4 to fix thatr
01:30:842 (90842|1,90926|3,90926|2,91009|1,91092|2,91176|3,91259|2,91259|1) - this part is quite calm, i dont feel this much strain is necessary
02:45:426 (165426|0,165759|0,166092|0,166426|0,166759|0) - too many notes in col 1 on red line, move 02:46:092 (166092|0) - to col 4 and 02:46:759 (166759|0) - to col 2?
02:49:759 (169759|0,170092|0,170426|0,170759|0) - this too lol, yea just move things around
03:28:759 (208759|3) - bring this to col 2, think it would be better cuz the triple anchor is hit with different hand than the ln 03:28:592 (208592|2) -