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00:01:926 (1926|1,1926|2) - tbh i didn't here kick here so maybe you should make it single?

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00:05:842 missed note for drums? compare 00:03:176

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no drums, u compared it with very basic and obvious drums

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00:06:759 (6759|1) - small suggestion, move to col 1 to provide chord complexity from 00:06:092 (6092|2,6092|1) -

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its fine

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00:13:592 (13592|0,13592|3,13592|2,13926|2,13926|3,13926|0,14426|3,14426|0,14426|2,14926|2,14926|3,14926|0) - suggest rearrange the jacks a bit, the placement is a bit monotonous atm

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wdym by monotonous? it feels fine as intended for snare sound

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00:29:676, 00:35:009 - missing single notes?

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00:35:009 - no

other ye

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00:33:092 (33092|3) - for comfortability u can just move this to col 2, the jack and the ln release on RH is jarring

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I did smth other

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00:34:759 (34759|2,34842|1,34926|0,34926|3) - actually i did'nt here 1/4 sounds so im a little confused that why here use 1/4 note

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hihat

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00:45:759 - it has same sound with 00:47:092 but its double

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00:49:259 - idk why here use tirple because i think sounds here is obvious weaker than 00:49:426 - but you use triple instead

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and the whole part has the same situation which what i said

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the rhythm i heard is xxx , xx , xxx , xx . but you make them all xxx,xxx,xxx,xxx

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intended for kiai itself

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00:57:092 (57092|2,57092|3,57092|1,57592|2,57592|1,57592|3) - you can use different kind of chord placement on this one, as both has different vocals
rearrange things around after fixing this

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rearranged lil bit

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01:07:592 (67592|1,67759|1,67926|1,68092|1) - this anchor is too long? just move 01:07:926 (67926|1) - to col 4 to fix thatr

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oh ye bor

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01:11:926 - u should change to triple

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01:30:842 (90842|1,90926|3,90926|2,91009|1,91092|2,91176|3,91259|2,91259|1) - this part is quite calm, i dont feel this much strain is necessary

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ur example is little right-biased, did smth other

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01:34:926 - u should change to double

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02:19:259 ~ 02:26:926 - how about expressing the guitar sound in 1/4 LN

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dont like that idea ssry

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02:45:426 (165426|0,165759|0,166092|0,166426|0,166759|0) - too many notes in col 1 on red line, move 02:46:092 (166092|0) - to col 4 and 02:46:759 (166759|0) - to col 2?

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02:49:759 (169759|0,170092|0,170426|0,170759|0) - this too lol, yea just move things around

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i dont find it a problem so ye

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03:00:759 add a note for kick

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03:36:509 same for continuity

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03:00:759 - only

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03:12:259 ~ 03:12:592, 03:34:592 ~ 03:34:926 - they have the same sounds, but why they dont have the same notes

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density stuff

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03:28:759 (208759|3) - bring this to col 2, think it would be better cuz the triple anchor is hit with different hand than the ln 03:28:592 (208592|2) -

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its preference, but ok

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