00:59:009 (59009|3) - suggest removing this note and add a note at 00:59:176, this way you can maintain consistency with the 1/4 patterns 00:53:259 (53259|3,53342|2,53426|1,53592|0,53676|1,53759|2) -
02:57:926 (177926|3,178092|2,178259|3,178426|2,178592|3,178759|2,178926|3,179092|2) - erm
1/2 LN trills is way too strenuous for a normal diff, especially when it is played on one hand only
simply spread the notes evenly and add a double every 1/1, that should represent the song better imo