01:09:926 (69926|2,70092|2,70426|2,70592|2,70926|2,71092|2) - too many jacks in col 3, suggesting spreading the 1/2 stacks around
01:31:259 (91259|0,91426|1,91592|0,91759|1,91926|0,92092|1) - rearrange a bit to avoid the trills?
01:59:426 (119426|2,119592|1,119759|2,119926|1,120092|2,120259|1,120426|2,120592|1) - this resembles [23] trills, just move 01:59:926 (119926|1) - to col 1 to loosen it up a bit
02:42:426 (162426|2,162592|1) - ctrl H for hand balance, 02:41:759 (161759|3,161926|2,162092|2,162259|3,162426|2) - is little too much