Vaelumir's Call

00:00:901 - 00:04:297 - 00:05:147 - , etc.

are these intended to be empty? because if it isn't, I suggest that you map these empty spaces in this section too to give emphasis on the flute techniques

00:05:430 - missing 1/4 rice? (I following angki diff)

00:05:925 - for me can do 1/4 like previous pattern bc it heard it like the same
just do this!

00:12:434 should be triple for cymbal, can make adjustment like 00:11:302 (11302|2,11302|3,11373|1,11444|0,11444|2,11444|3) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19218710/b9fe
01:59:132 02:16:396 too

00:21:490 (21490|0) - small suggestion, for the ascneding pitch u can move this to col 3
then move 00:21:631 (21631|2) - to col 1

00:23:047 - miss note?

00:25:311 (25311|3) - i think sound here is same as 00:25:736 (25736|3,25736|2) - so maybe you should double it?

00:26:820 - here has a rapid sound before 00:26:868 (26868|1) - so i think you can add a note at 00:26:820 (26820|2) -

00:27:151 - 00:27:292 - 00:28:566 -, and more timestamps

are these intended to be tap notes? if not, I suggest that you make them as LNs because they follow the sound the other LNs represent

00:27:363 (27363|0) - Ghost note

00:27:434 - 00:39:603 - Check the 1/2 red line in this part. The music has the small Ethnic instrument sound (maybe it's Marimba) at these timepoint, but you only add at someplace like 00:28:424 (28424|1) - 00:29:273 (29273|2) - 00:34:792 (34792|0) - etc.

And other place like 00:27:575 - 00:29:556 - 00:30:971 - didn't do this.

It's not necessary to add everything 1/2, but it's best to recheck and unify it

00:27:717 (27717|2,27858|3,28000|2,28141|3,28283|2) - not a big fan of this trill as it doesnt represent anything, maybe just rearrange to smthn like this?

00:29:273 (29273|2,29415|2) - 00:30:122 (30122|3,30264|3) - 00:30:971 (30971|3,31113|3) - 00:33:518 (33518|3,33660|3) - 00:35:641 (35641|3,35783|3) - jacks appear on same hand 5 times in a row maybe move 00:30:264 (30264|3) to the other hand with some restructuring

00:30:759 (30759|3) - ghost note? i didn't here any sound here and as for 00:30:547 (30547|0,30618|1,30688|2) - has strong sound and it is very obvious so i suggest to delete this note make it more clearly or you can make 00:30:547 (30547|0,30618|1,30688|2) - to all double to make a jumptrill

00:32:103 (32103|3,32103|2) - This sound is not very loud to double it.
I suggest you check for similar problems.

00:34:085 - missed 1/2 ln here

00:34:509 (34509|3) - the violin sounds cut off on the 00:34:651, so how about change that 1/1 ln to the 1/2 ln

00:39:603 - i suggest triple here to make a comparison with 00:41:302 -

00:39:603 - to 00:46:396 - the flutes here do some kind of "playing in between keys". is it intended that you mapped them as one LN only? if not, I suggest that you map the "riff-y" parts of the flute too

00:40:594 00:40:665 I think it is better to mark these notes, the sound is too noticeable not to take them into account.

There are details that need to be expressed, the section is very quiet so they are very noticeable.

00:43:000 (43000|3,43283|1) -

00:44:698 (44698|3) -

00:45:122 - i think i heard sound here can shorten the long LN and add 1/2 LN one

00:49:226 (49226|2,49509|2) - feel like the ln release is too tight here? (compare it with the previous lns) just shorten the ln to the 1/2 snap

00:49:509 - can sacrifice the LN length for 1/4 for the double of kick, i think is not good in here to be single cuz it kinda noticable

00:49:934 - could use a double, sounds the same like 00:50:075 -

00:50:004 (50004|3) - why use 1/4 here , for the consistency i think you should delete it

00:52:339 (52339|0,52339|3,52339|2) - i don't think here need triple actually , i suggest just delete 00:52:339 (52339|2) -

00:53:401 - 00:58:919 - , and many other timestamps in kiai

are these also intended to be empty? some parts of the kiai with the same "riff-y" flute sounds, you mapped them including the blue ticks (ex. 00:55:169 (55169|0,55240|1,55311|2) -) so why not fill the other spaces too?

00:55:028 (55028|3,55169|2,55169|3,55311|2,55594|3,55735|3,56160|3,56302|3,56726|3,56868|3) - 5 jacks in same hand in a row

00:58:283 suggest just reducing this to a triple as this is just a normal kick

00:59:981 (59981|3,59981|1,59981|0,60122|2,60264|1,60264|0,60264|3,60335|2,60405|1,60476|0,60547|2,60547|3,60618|1,60688|0,60759|3,60830|0,60830|2,60830|1) - this is skewed to the left hand, rearrange it a little

01:00:264 - for consistency here shoule be tripled

01:03:518 - you can add a note at 01:03:518 (63518|2) - because here has 3 kick but your density is lower than 01:00:264 (60264|1,60264|0,60335|2,60405|3,60476|0,60547|1,60547|2,60618|3,60688|0,60759|1,60830|0,60830|3,60830|2) -

01:03:802 (63802|3,63802|2,63943|2,64085|3,64226|2,64368|2,64368|3,64509|2) - this is too saturated on RH, 01:04:085 (64085|3) - move to col 2 to fix that

01:03:872 - i think its a miss note cuz you didnt ignore any mainsounds before

if want to show the difference between this sound and kick , i think can do something like this ↑

01:04:226 - there is a continuing drum, i recommend using some anchor to highlight the feeling

01:05:075 (65075|0,65075|2,65075|1,65075|3,65500|3,65500|1,65500|2,65500|0,65924|3,65924|1,65924|2,65924|0) -
these 3 quads have 3 different pitches, add lns in diiferent columns to distinguish them.
for example:

01:05:075 - make here like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19223925/e60d to fit the low-high-low pitch

01:08:613 (68613|3) - move to col 3 to avoid the 3 note anchor

01:09:320 (69320|0,69320|1,69462|3,69462|2,69603|0,69603|1,69745|2,69745|3,69886|1,69886|0,69886|3) - you can make it to jack instead of jumptrill like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19223928/120f becuase the 1/2 jumptrill is a little bit boring and can't make flow

01:11:797 - I still think move 01:11:868 (71868|3) - to here is better: Compared to the difference between 2 and 3, the difference between 1 and 2 is more noticeable

01:12:717 (72717|3,72717|2,72717|1,72717|0,73566|2,73566|0,73566|1,73566|3) -

Seems no bell sound like you use 4 in recent place, I haven't hear the bell. I don't know if I heard it wrong, can check again

01:13:849 should be triple? like 01:13:283, 01:14:415

01:16:962 (76962|2,76962|3,76962|0,76962|1) - you can represent the melody by making this quad ln, just like 00:46:396 this section

01:19:509 (79509|3,79580|2) - #4691404

01:20:358 - i think this part missing some LN ,
like
01:22:905 - personal dont think it sounds like a long sound , its more like 01:22:622 - 01:22:764 - 01:22:905 -
01:29:698 - LN ? have the similar feeling like 01:29:132 (89132|2,89273|0) - for me
01:30:971 (90971|1) - should be a LN ?

01:26:302 (86302|1,86302|0,86585|0,86585|1,86868|1,86868|0) - 01:20:500 (80500|2,80783|2,81066|2) they sound the same, why are the notes different?

01:39:037 - too empty
add some ln to snap the violin.

01:43:707 (103707|2) - delete this
if you want to snap the sound, you should snap all this sounds in this period of songs.

01:47:528 - i think you can use some 1/2 ln to embellishment here

01:53:471 you can add notes for the bubbly sounds here on every 1/2s so it doesnt feel too empty?

02:04:368 (124368|2,124509|3,124509|2,124651|3) - probably should avoid being too heavy on the right hand, move 02:04:651 (124651|3) - to col 1 probably

02:05:358 - triple for cymbal?

02:11:302 (131302|0,131302|1,131302|2,131302|3) - ignore this if it's intended but just a suggestion, what if this quad was to be reduced into a triple to make way for the flute "riff" sound?

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19232109/8276

02:20:075 (140075|3,140075|0,140145|1,140216|2,140216|3,140287|1,140287|0,140358|2,140358|3,140428|1,140499|0) - this looks kinda rough to play, asking to smoothen it a lil bit

02:20:641 (140641|2,140641|1,140782|2,140782|3) - all kick like these ,you can make double at same column like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19223937/486a

02:20:641 (140641|3,140641|2,140711|1,140782|3,140782|2,140853|1,140924|0,140994|3,141065|2,141065|1,141136|3,141207|0,141277|1,141348|3,141348|2,141419|1,141490|3,141490|2,141560|0,141631|1,141702|3,141773|2,141773|1,141843|0,141914|3,141985|2,142056|1,142056|0) - this is skewed to the right hand, rearrange it a little

02:20:782 02:21:348 maybe double for kicks?

02:24:887 (144887|3,145028|2,145170|1,145311|0,145453|1,145453|3) - I think the structure can be change abit, because for me flowing of the notes is still stuck for me
so i think it can 02:25:170 (145170|1,145311|0) - swap these columns and moves 02:25:453 (145453|1) - to column 1 for better flows also constant with the sound pitch

02:28:283 (148283|1,149981|2) - I perceive more of a cut than an extra intensity, so I can suggest: