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00:43:006 (2,3) - these 2 notes are stacked together when they shouldn't be

00:46:672 (1,2,3,4) - space this grouping out from 00:46:339 (4) - like you had done with the other pitch groups to keep consistent

00:52:006 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern should be further away from 00:50:672 (1,2,3,4) - to be consistent what you did earlier

00:54:506 (3,3) - make the hitsounding consistent throughout here by either removing these claps or adding them onto the ends of the next measures

00:59:506 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19143113/99c1 is the real rhythm

Make 01:01:339 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - more Pattern wise -> f.e https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19146656/5d56

01:02:839 (3) - Could add a new Kickslider for the 1/12 sound

01:04:672 (9,10,11) - this pattern is really cramped, going right back into the exact same spot of the playfield as the stream just before (01:04:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ), I would suggest making this pattern go somewhere else, perhaps more to the right like so:

01:06:672 (1) - I would look into spacing this group a little bit more to make the pitch change a little bit more noticable

For example 01:06:672 (1) - beeing "lighly curved) and 01:08:006 (1) - being a hard curve does not make sense and makes it inconsistant to play. Its overall the problem for your stream patterns

01:20:672 (13) - there should not be claps on this slider

your combo changes feel a bit random sometimes. i see you changed it on the subtle sound most of the times but then there are some combo changes on nothing, so it feels a bit weird sometimes 01:25:339 - 1:46:006

01:29:672 (5) - there should be a new combo here, and 01:29:339 (1,2,3,4) - should probably be either a buzz slider or apart of the same combo as the stream before it

01:33:006 (13) - new combo should be on this, not 01:33:339 (1) -

01:48:172 (3,4,1,2) - this stream changes direction on the wrong note, it should change on 1, not 4

01:58:839 (2,3,4,5) - 02:01:506 (2,3,4) - there has got to be a better way to represent these loud sounds than stacked 1/1 breaks, the intensity goes from almost spaced streams to quite literally a 1 star pattern randomly

02:02:506 (10) - would consider moving these sliders as they feel uncomfortable to aim,. maybe something like this would work https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19143126/8b29

02:11:172 (7,8) - this should probably be a kick slider

I like the idea of 02:14:006 (1,2,3,4) - , but you didnt kept it consistant with 02:13:339 (1,2,3,4) - & 02:14:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - . Just make all 2 Slider insides and keep the flow

02:14:006 (1,2,3,4) -

I get that you like this stacked slider idea, but I think the way you're going about implementing it is kinda wonky and weird. a much better approach would be doing something like this:

Just the way, in the entire map that you make these patterns overlap is really weird. So I think moving the 2 sliders together more, but then spacing them away from the other groups of 2 more will go a long way to making your map much more visually appealing

Overlaps are generally considered bad unless they have a very clear purpose and are very intentional. These feel just sorta iffy, and would be better off not stacked

02:21:589 (4) - makes no sense

02:25:339 (1,2,3) - Completely ignore this loud sample that you consistently use to transition 1 pattern to the next in just this 1 part really doesn't make any sense. I would probably put this triple into like the bottom right-ish corner to convey how loud that sound it more

02:28:006 (1,2,3,4) - these should probably be 2 kick sliders, the burst should only be on 02:28:339 (5) -

02:31:756 (4) - don't map this, this one is inaudible even with slow slider

Make 02:50:006 (6,7) - to 1/4 slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19146670/37df

02:58:672 (2,3) - maybe move 2 over to the left a bit so these arent overlapping
id also suggest maybe ctrl+g these too since the sound at 03:00:006 (3) is noticeably higher in pitch so having it higher on the playfield might be cool

excuse my rudeness in saying this but what the fuck are these 03:00:006 (3,4) - first one is just ass and the second one is somewhat fine but i have seen better

03:28:172 (2) - this could be a 1/4 reverse instead of 1/2 just to fit with the 1/4 sound on 03:28:256 -

03:46:672 (7,8) - controversial but definitely possible like this

04:16:006 (1) - consider making this like the intro more cuz almost the same

04:41:339 (1) - put circle here

05:29:672 (6,7,8) - change these up due to pitch change