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00:43:006 (2,3) - these 2 notes are stacked together when they shouldn't be

00:46:672 (1,2,3,4) - space this grouping out from 00:46:339 (4) - like you had done with the other pitch groups to keep consistent

00:52:006 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern should be further away from 00:50:672 (1,2,3,4) - to be consistent what you did earlier

00:54:506 (3,3) - make the hitsounding consistent throughout here by either removing these claps or adding them onto the ends of the next measures

00:59:506 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19143113/99c1 is the real rhythm

Make 01:01:339 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - more Pattern wise -> f.e https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19146656/5d56

01:02:839 (3) - Could add a new Kickslider for the 1/12 sound

01:04:672 (9,10,11) - this pattern is really cramped, going right back into the exact same spot of the playfield as the stream just before (01:04:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ), I would suggest making this pattern go somewhere else, perhaps more to the right like so:

01:06:672 (1) - I would look into spacing this group a little bit more to make the pitch change a little bit more noticable

For example 01:06:672 (1) - beeing "lighly curved) and 01:08:006 (1) - being a hard curve does not make sense and makes it inconsistant to play. Its overall the problem for your stream patterns

01:20:672 (13) - there should not be claps on this slider

01:29:672 (5) - there should be a new combo here, and 01:29:339 (1,2,3,4) - should probably be either a buzz slider or apart of the same combo as the stream before it

01:33:006 (13) - new combo should be on this, not 01:33:339 (1) -

01:48:172 (3,4,1,2) - this stream changes direction on the wrong note, it should change on 1, not 4

01:58:839 (2,3,4,5) - 02:01:506 (2,3,4) - there has got to be a better way to represent these loud sounds than stacked 1/1 breaks, the intensity goes from almost spaced streams to quite literally a 1 star pattern randomly

02:02:506 (10) - would consider moving these sliders as they feel uncomfortable to aim,. maybe something like this would work https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19143126/8b29

02:11:172 (7,8) - this should probably be a kick slider

I like the idea of 02:14:006 (1,2,3,4) - , but you didnt kept it consistant with 02:13:339 (1,2,3,4) - & 02:14:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - . Just make all 2 Slider insides and keep the flow

02:14:006 (1,2,3,4) -

I get that you like this stacked slider idea, but I think the way you're going about implementing it is kinda wonky and weird. a much better approach would be doing something like this:

Just the way, in the entire map that you make these patterns overlap is really weird. So I think moving the 2 sliders together more, but then spacing them away from the other groups of 2 more will go a long way to making your map much more visually appealing

Overlaps are generally considered bad unless they have a very clear purpose and are very intentional. These feel just sorta iffy, and would be better off not stacked

02:21:589 (4) - makes no sense

02:25:339 (1,2,3) - Completely ignore this loud sample that you consistently use to transition 1 pattern to the next in just this 1 part really doesn't make any sense. I would probably put this triple into like the bottom right-ish corner to convey how loud that sound it more

02:28:006 (1,2,3,4) - these should probably be 2 kick sliders, the burst should only be on 02:28:339 (5) -

02:31:756 (4) - don't map this, this one is inaudible even with slow slider

Make 02:50:006 (6,7) - to 1/4 slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19146670/37df

02:58:672 (2,3) - maybe move 2 over to the left a bit so these arent overlapping
id also suggest maybe ctrl+g these too since the sound at 03:00:006 (3) is noticeably higher in pitch so having it higher on the playfield might be cool

excuse my rudeness in saying this but what the fuck are these 03:00:006 (3,4) - first one is just ass and the second one is somewhat fine but i have seen better

this entire part feels off. it might be subjective and my taste but some sounds you mapped seem to be too quiet to provide accurate feedback to the player in this part. 03:28:172 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - the way you used sliders like this is great though maybe try using these more in the section 03:29:339 (1) - ;also this is a menace to play 03:27:839 (10,1) -

03:28:172 (2) - this could be a 1/4 reverse instead of 1/2 just to fit with the 1/4 sound on 03:28:256 -

03:46:672 (7,8) - controversial but definitely possible like this

04:16:006 (1) - consider making this like the intro more cuz almost the same

04:41:339 (1) - put circle here

05:29:672 (6,7,8) - change these up due to pitch change