00:39:868 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - rhythm here feels way too simplified when the song is building up, maybe you could at least turn 00:39:868 (1) - 00:40:896 (4) - 00:41:239 (1) - into circles
Same thing applies to 02:07:639 (1,2,3,4) -
00:57:010 (4) - given how intense the vocal is, this 3/4 slider feels a bit too lacking, maybe replace it with something like this?
01:05:239 (2,3,1,1) - the rhythm here feels way too sparse. Though the song dies out in intensity, I feel like this can be denser. Also considering that the Hard and Expert diff had dense rhythm here, why not do it here as well?
Perhaps something like this could work
01:39:525 (3,5) - could NC these to differentiate the 1/3s here from the 1/4s in other patterns
01:45:268 (4) - maybe replace this slider with a 1/4 double instead to catch the vocal on the white tick
I want to maintain consistency and simplify the pattern to lower the perceived difficulty. If you really don't think this is right I'll think about it.
instead of ignoring the vocal, 01:42:268 (3) - this part was changed
02:44:668 (1,2) - kinda underwhelming to have the strong beats be passive here, could maybe remove 1 reverse so you can put a circle on 02:44:839 and 02:45:182 so that you are actively mapping the beats?
02:44:668 (1,2,3,4) - the 1/8s feel sudden to play for the target audience and you didn't put this kind of pattern previously in the diff so this seems so out of place, think replacing (1) and (3) with 1/4 sliders would be more lenient and easier to play
