Shiratsuyu no Kaze

00:00:998 00:02:443 强烈建议折返改滑条+单点，音效太强了，这折返很难受

00:06:058 (6) - a single note is a bit weak following the instrument here since it's not as distinct as 00:05:335 - etc. , a slider would do it better imo -> https://i.imgur.com/eDVJt5v.png

00:08:216 (4) - 再放的离23远点

00:08:949 (3,4,6) - hard在这种情况我的建议是松开ds，不然视觉上46太近了，空间关系不明所以

00:16:359 (4,5) - 包起来

00:16:901 (5,6,7) - 请注意间距，让他们等距

00:18:347 (1,2,3) - 00:21:238 (1,2,3) - etc. could probably stack 2, 3 to differentiate vocal (00:18:528 (2,3) - ) from filler instrument mapping (00:18:347 (1) - ), would also reduce consecutive 1/2 movement in this relatively calmer section

00:18:528 - add a note

00:24:130 (1,1) - 为了配合低难度保持一致是没问题，但是低难度空出两个转盘的时间是为了体现人声，你这里反而把最明显的最需要点击的那个节奏放到了转盘开头。我建议00:24:130 - 00:27:022 - 都加一个圆圈。把转盘缩短往后面放。

00:29:913 (1,2) - similar to #3636366 , would suggest doing same thing as 00:41:479 (1,2,3) -

00:36:419 (4,1) - more fitting as two circles or one 1/1 slider instead since there are no vocal on the slider ends, unlike 00:36:058 (3) - 00:33:528 (3,4) - etc.

00:48:708 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - 排列上我觉得这里5和2的不叠处理有点不合曲，比较建议和6 3各叠起来

00:50:154 (1) - wrong snapping, slider tail should end on the white tick (00:50:516 - ) instead

00:50:696 (2) - #3636368

00:50:877 (3,1) - 包

00:52:323 (4,5) - 前面类似部分都是跟的人声，这里突然变成跟鼓点很违和。我建议删掉00:52:504 (5) - ，把00:52:323 (4) - 改成1/1滑条

01:02:263 (4,3) - 使用类似的摆法，01:01:720 (1,2) - 使用类似的摆法会好看一点 现在太乱

01:04:251 (1,2,3,4) -这不是suggestion，我觉得这超出hard的容许范围了

01:04:612 (2,4) - 我说实话这个原地放，甚至不如固定间距跟着走。毕竟音效和人声都是渐强，起码拉开一点好，没必要做的这么gimmick

01:05:696 (1,2,3) - 开着ds把1往下拉一点会好看很多 现在1和3的间距不明所以 另外01:04:973 (3,3) - 都可以试着包一下01:05:877 (2) - ，会好看一些

01:07:504 (1,2,3) - 细节，让这三个等距

01:09:672 (8) - consider using lower sv for this slider because instrument is less active there, for better comparison with 01:08:949 (7) -

01:14:000 - 这个kick还是加上比较好，用nc来区分vocal就行

01:14:732 (1,2,3) - i'd do a 1/4 reverse slider here for simplicity since all other active 1/4 rhythms in kiai are following vocals and this triple suddenly coming out of the blue can be a bit odd

01:21:238 (1,2) - 间距有点大，不合曲

01:21:238 (1,2) - would use just one 1/1 slider like 01:09:672 (8) - for better density comparison with rest of the kiai where consecutive 1/2 sliders were only used at spots with very active instrument and vocal

01:22:142 (4,5,6) - broken stack

01:22:323 (6,7) - 01:25:214 (4,5) - would really recommend ctrl-g rhythm on these to better grasp the vocal rhythm, similar to first part of the kiai (00:58:829 (2,3,4,5) - etc. ), currently there are a lot of filler instrument notes (01:22:684 (7) - 01:24:853 (1) - etc.) that make it hard to tell what's the rhythm focus in the section

01:23:046 (2,1) - 这两个快贴在一起了，请让他们保持一定的视觉间距

01:24:853 (6,13) - 忘记NC了吧

01:27:744 (1,2) - 我是觉得，既然你有用 01:30:636 (1,2) - 这种圆圈叠滑条尾的方法，不如这种 3/4 直接错开比较合适

01:28:738 - 可以加绿线消音

01:29:190 (3,4,5,6) - this should be using some actual harder rhythm and maybe spaced patterns instead of 01:30:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - where the song intensity goes down, would buff the former and nerf the latter for better song expressions, example -> https://i.imgur.com/FrUflDC.png

01:30:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - 比较建议01:31:178 (2,3) - 01:31:901 (4,5) - 叠起来，而不是叠在滑条尾，一个是移动很难为打hard的人，另一个是，音的强度和点击性我觉得是1 23 45

01:32:805 (1,2) - 建议重新做成一个1/1滑条，跟人声就好

01:33:799 - 01:36:690 - could do a triple for vocal

01:34:431 (1,2) - ctrl-g rhythm? i feel 01:34:973 - is more fitting grouping with 01:35:154 (3,4,5) - instead

01:35:154 (3,4,5) -不如摆三角

01:35:335 (4,5,6) - 太近了

01:36:419 加个 circle 叠在 01:36:600 (1) - 头上

01:37:855 (3,4) - 人声这里在渐强了考虑也改4个圈吧，这样和前面01:34:963 - 难度起码对应

01:41:479 (3) - 加个NC好看一点

01:44:732 (3) - 缩短成1/2滑条，跟人声好一点，毕竟你整个难度都是跟人声为主，这里乐器又不是主要声音

01:46:540 (1,2) - 整个ctrl+shift+R 180°，现在这个flow难读

01:50:516 - add a note

01:53:769 (4) - might need a nc here for consistency

01:55:937 (3) - 建议改成单点，其他难度都这么做的