00:11:076 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - The highs should be wider and the lows narrower.
00:13:818 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
00:12:093 (1,2,3) - visual spacing here is kinda scuffed. this would be slightly better imo https://i.imgur.com/CN5yQK0.png
00:16:207 (4) - 00:17:579 (7) - make these 2 the same. Either a 1/2 slider, or a circle for both
00:18:104 (3,4,5,6) - https://i.imgur.com/s1olzM2.png - make it like this could emphasizes the repeated melody more imo
00:33:008 - kinda wierd having this as passive since next section is about sounds like that 00:34:036 - 00:36:094 -
and sounds that u following with 00:31:980 (1,2,3,4) - ends on 00:32:836 -
mb u would like any of these:
https://i.imgur.com/a4VfHOL.png
https://i.imgur.com/UNLuNBu.png (5 stacked with 6 for stronger emphsz on 1)
https://i.imgur.com/zU2aMqJ.png
patterns from 1 00:33:351 - to 00:35:579 - moving in one direction which is cool,
but then u broke that flow 2 00:35:751 - 00:38:322 -
3 00:38:494 - 00:40:379
mb use flow idea from 1 for 2 and 3 since there vocals and instruments are the same?
and spacing for quiet 00:37:980 (3) - is huge compared to 00:38:494 (1) - which is a lot more stronger
mb decrease it a bit?
nc 00:39:866 (9) - for consistency with others down beats 00:34:379 - 00:35:751 - etc
isn't that offscreen or am i trolling. i could adjust it but i'm trying to keep it in line with 00:34:036 (5,6) - and 00:39:522 (7,8) -
00:40:723 (3,1) - 00:41:065 (3,1) - 00:41:751 (5,1) - spacing on these is a bit high compared to 00:51:351 (4,5) -
which is the most spaced pattern in whole kiai with easer rhythm, mb decrease 00:40:894 - 00:41:236 - 00:41:922 - so jumps in kiai will feel more stronger than quiet build up before it?
00:42:692 (2) - either make this active, or do something very funny like https://i.imgur.com/QGwbPyM.png but obviously with slightly lower spacing into 00:42:950 (1) -
00:42:961 (1) - make this a stream would create a better contrast with 00:43:990 (1) - 's rhythm imo. the current one suddenly ignores the hihat sound
00:47:590 (2,3) - make it like this looks and plays better imo (https://i.imgur.com/tEwco7g.png) in creates a nice symmetrical curve and also flows to it
00:53:076 (2,3,4) - making it like this plays better imo so that it continues the up-down movement https://i.imgur.com/DxSZSbC.png
01:01:818 (1,2,3,4) - make this flows in back-and-forth will be consistent with the other similar objects imo (something like https://i.imgur.com/25pKZLL.png)
01:08:665 (1) - make this the same as the others in the measure? like make it kickslider-note just like 01:09:007 (2,3) -
01:33:179 (7) - think the movement is slightly cooler if you did spacing closer to this screenshot https://i.imgur.com/tlaLR7O.png but this isn't a huge difference
02:09:693 (3) - this slider felt very janky to play compared to the similar reverse sliders, probably because it isn't linear?