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00:49:350 - 00:50:378 -> The way this plays is pretty awkward on the left hand. You start with left-sided bursts to a triple and then have it transition into a burst pretty straining on 2nd col in comparison when considering the overall structure, which is a bit unpleasant. Some rearrangements can be done to improve how this plays.
Similar issue with 00:53:807, it's unpleasant on one hand considering the way it transitions. Would rearrange it to something like this:
00:55:178 - 00:56:892 -> The way this just repeats on the right hand twice, but slightly different when you usually alternate feels off-putting as it kind of breaks the flow in gameplay and causes a bit of awkward strain. This can easily be improved on by mirroring 00:56:207 and making some small arrangements so it plays out better in each transition:
01:10:178 (70178|3,70221|2,70264|3) - 1/8 minitrill is a bit awkward
probably something like this would be a little better
01:12:492 (72492|3,72492|2,72835|1,72835|2) - This is completely inconsistent with what you've usually done with the LNs when it comes to vocals and synths - as a result the way this plays feels out of place and a bit intrusive.
Should be something like this to be more consistent and natural in gameplay:
02:01:929 (121929|1,121958|3,122043|0,122043|3) - I'm wondering whether these chords should be swapped around to make the polyrhythms a little more readable by separating the 1/4 and 1/6 into separate hands
so like this
I feel like this could help but I'm not sure since polys are super messy anyway
02:12:843 - ^ but ctrl+h
02:22:786 - um no
sure the pattern is easy but this is a blatant difficulty spike and I'm not having this, especially with the chord placements as they are
doubles at most would probably be every 1/2, but you still have plenty of options here:
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have doubles every 1/2 with a light challenge on streams, or just a roll (but that's kinda boring), e.g.:
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have doubles every 1/1 with slightly more complex streams
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have no doubles and instead have a difficult and/or trilly 1/6 stream as the burst instead
Choice is yours but I really don't think the current pattern is a good idea
03:05:292 (185292|1,185421|1) - lets see this is your only same cols in the burst unlike 02:58:435 (178435|0,178478|3,178521|2,178564|1) - and 03:03:921 (183921|3,183964|0,184007|2,184050|1) - so wanna make similar style like
03:26:721 (206721|0,206807|1,206892|0,206978|1,207150|1,207235|0,207407|0,207492|1,207578|0,207750|0,207835|1) - Seriously straining on the left hand and with LN streams it makes this even more awkward - would highly recommend rearranging this whole part in general as the vocal LNs also feel off (03:27:492 (207492|1) is not 1/4, it's 1/2) and is pretty inconsistent.
You could do this:
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