Fly Like You [Long Version]

00:00:354 (354|4,389|0,424|1,459|2,494|3,529|4,564|5) - 여기 1/5 인것 같은데? 나오는 멜로디 갯수 따져보면

00:05:843 - according to PR I think u can make some folds to express Piano strength better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18113146/70ea

00:06:892 (6892|2) - how about col1 I think col1 col 2 is mirrored with col6 and col7 it will make beautiful

00:06:892 (6892|2) - actually it should be 3 note becuz comparing with 00:09:095 - 00:09:305 - it is more a kick than others

00:16:962 - tbh I prefer 4 notes becuz cymbal and it is the beginning as one part I think it could be stronger

00:19:270 (19270|0,19270|4,19270|1,19270|3,19322|5,19375|4,19427|3,19480|5,19480|6,19480|1,19480|2) - this part, personally i will suggest avoid 00:19:270 (19270|4,19375|4) - this jack like what you do at 00:24:305 (24305|2,24305|0,24305|4,24357|5,24410|3,24462|2) - , since the BPM is 286 and the pitch also not support this jack.

but this is kinda subjective so depends on you.

00:19:899 (19899|4) - how about move it to col 7 I think it is more beautiful for pattern

00:20:633 (20633|3) - ghost note

00:21:053 - 00:21:263 - u should add them one note to keep consistency with 00:20:214 - 00:20:424 - 00:20:633 -

00:21:892 - is this piano sound intentionally ignored? since it's a bit weird for me to miss here

00:22:102 - actually triple is overmaped it is less strong than 00:22:207 - 00:22:312 - double is enough tbh

00:24:305 - 00:24:515 : it should be piano sounds? I can hear it

00:26:612 - miss snare

00:28:815 - how about double it it is synth sounds and stonger than hi hat and so on

00:37:312 (37312|5,37312|6,37364|4,37417|1,37417|0,37417|2) - the snap here is weird
what I heard is like : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18160096/0aeb
the blue selected notes are 1/3 and the triple chord is on 1/2 line.
If you have any other intention (simplification or sth), feel free to tell me.

Subjective issue :
00:37:731 (37731|6,37731|0,37731|5,37731|2,37836|6,37941|0,37941|5,37941|4,37941|2,38046|2,38151|4,38151|0,38151|1,38151|3,38256|3) -
I will suggest rearrange here like what you do at
00:32:696 (32696|2,32696|5,32696|6,32696|0,32801|3,32906|1,32906|4,33011|3,33116|0,33116|5,33221|3) -
Because they are similar rhythm structure and pitch.
Maybe sth like : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18160103/ea67
you can rearrange by yourself if you think my suggestion is bad.

00:40:878 - hmmm I think here triple is enough for only kick (no cymbal), and also better for consistency like 00:41:193 -

00:50:996, 00:51:066 - 1/3 스냅 여기 피아노 사운드 넣어야 00:50:716 (50716|2,50769|1,50821|4,50873|3) - 이부분의 피아노 사운드와 일관성이 맞아짐

00:52:394 - 이랑 02:30:531 -
둘중 어떤걸로 할지 하나로 통일 하셈 근데 소리 없어서 지우는게 타당할듯

01:00:262 - hmm single is too less for this kick? I think at least double here

01:01:415 - 노트 3개가 맞지 않음 ? 똑같은 소리 나는곳도 01:01:625 - 01:01:730 - 3놋 인데

01:02:464 - to 01:02:884 - the snap here is 1/3 not 1/4, but 01:02:884 - to 01:03:094 - is 1/4 right, and also miss a note at 01:03:041 -

01:23:234 (83234|2,83339|2,83443|1,83548|1,83653|0,83758|2) - 여기랑 01:23:234 (83234|4,83234|5) - 여기 위치만 바꿔주는게 어떰? 왜냐하면 메인 신즈 음정은 낮고 드럼 사운드는 높은 음정부터 내려가니까 그게 PR에 더 적합할 것 같음

01:25:541 - think this should be only triple like 01:25:332 - since they both only have the main melody without any drum, better to be consistent.
suggest remove 01:25:541 (85541|4) -

01:27:587 - miss a very strong snare here, if add a note here I guess should nerf 01:27:534 - a bit
and also 01:28:793 (88793|5,88793|4,88846|2) - and 01:32:569 (92569|3,92569|6,92622|2,92622|5) -
it's better to make this 3 places consistent since they're the same.

01:29:003 - 여기 드럼 하이햇소리 넣어야 전체적인 일관성에 맞음

01:31:066 (91066|4,91136|2) - 이거 스냅 1/4 01:31:101 - 01:31:153 - 임

01:37:709 (97709|3,97709|6,97709|2,97814|4,97814|5,97814|1,97919|3,97919|2,98024|4,98024|0,98024|5,98129|2,98129|1,98234|4,98234|3) -
the note usage here is kinda weird, compare with other part in this section. If you want to emphasize 01:37:709 - and 01:38:024 - , should nerf 01:37:814 - to double since you already ignored the snare at 01:38:129 -

01:38:915 (98915|6) - 이거 정당성이 그다지 없어 보임 메인 멜로디도 음정이 변하는 것도 아니라서 지우는게 타당할듯

01:48:731 (108731|5,108839|0) - 하이햇 소리 굳이 넣어야 함? 다른 소리에 거의 뭍혀서 들리지도 않고 패턴 진행상 1/2 스냅 유지 하는게 더 좋아 보이는데

01:50:416 - 하이햇 소리 노트 빠짐

01:54:003 (114003|5,114003|2,114003|6,114003|0,114075|3,114147|4) - I think it's 1/2 here not 1/3 lol

02:14:923 - 02:15:133 - 못해도 노트 2개는 넣어야 다른 부분과 일관성에 맞을듯
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/944465282418769980/1025980887600468059/unknown.png
요런식으로 ㄱㄴ

02:24:144 - 여기 스냅 02:24:130 - 02:24:144 - 02:24:158 - 1/16 으로 이렇게 해야 피아노랑 스냅이 일치 함
뭐 02:24:130 - 여기 안쓴다 한다고 하더라도 02:24:172 (144172|2) - 이건 02:24:158 - 여기로 옮겨야 할듯

02:27:594 - maybe triple is enough here? like 02:27:175 - , better for consistency

02:36:930 (156930|4) - I will suggest move this jack to left hand and rearrange the pattern after since the right hand already very intense and already jack 02:36:720 (156720|5,156825|5) - here

02:40:287 - 메인신즈+ 드럼사운드가 들어갔기 때문에 못해도 3놋 이상 해야함

02:41:860 - to 02:42:490 -

actual snap here is : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18160179/0395
the blue selected note is actual a bit different with 01:02:604 - (1/6 late).
and 02:42:280 - to 02:42:490 - is also 1/4 again.
so how to rearrange here, depends on you.

02:42:962 - 드럼소리 노트 빠짐

02:50:252 - and 02:50:462 - are there 2 single intentionally? since I can still heard snare here, so only single is too weak I think

02:58:084 (178084|5,178084|4,178154|2,178154|1) - are this 2 double for drum? if so they are 1/4 not 1/3

03:03:049 - 이전 규칙 보면 3놋이 맞지 않음 ?
소리도 3놋에 적절 하다고 생각됨

03:08:869 - 여기부터 피아노 소리 나는거 노트 안넣는것 보단 LN 하나 넣어서 03:09:357 - 여기까지 채워주는게 더 좋을꺼임

03:12:092 (192092|4,192168|5) - 1/5 스냅으로 가야함
03:12:245 (192245|1,192245|2) - 1/7 스냅으로 가야함
03:12:361 (192361|3,192361|4) - 1/9 스냅으로 가야함

03:14:454 (194454|2,194536|3,194618|4) - here is 1/12 not 1/8

03:17:091 -
suggest rearrange like : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18160211/9d26
because I notice you follow pitch strictly in this section so I provide the advice for you.
you can rearrange your own version but at least do not make 03:17:685 - and 03:17:982 - in this same column since they are different pitch.
Also 03:17:982 - and 03:18:576 - are the same pitch so that's why I put like that.

03:28:953 (208953|4,208953|3,209186|4,209186|5) - 그냥 오른쪽 한칸 옮기는게 어떰
쉴드 패턴이라 좀 불편함

03:42:301 (222301|4,222415|4,222529|4,222643|4,222757|4,222871|4) - are you sure about this 6 notes jack in 263 BPM? strongly suggest 03:42:529 (222529|4,222529|5,222643|4,222643|5) - to col67 lol

03:54:672 ~ 03:56:980 - 소리에 비해 난이도 spike가 좀 심함 전채적인 패턴이랑 비교 해봐도 조금 언밸런스 하다고도 할 수 있겠음
너프 해야 한다는 의견이 강하게 들음 ㅇㅇ

03:56:980 - to 03:59:288 -
This whole section is 1/5 not 1/6, should be fixed.