00:10:642 (5) - would be nice to change sampleset to normal for more feedback on 1/4 patterns
The spacing here is too big!
00:14:818 (2) -
You can just make it a triangle and achieve the same effect
The verses are Dense but they are patterned very well. I know this is mapper intention but you could consider making the following 3/4 to pad the density of your verses
( delete circle, extend slider )
00:15:159 (1,2) -
00:17:887 (1,2) -
00:20:614 (1,2) -
00:23:341 (1,2) -
you can keep 00:24:705 (1,2) - because of the distinct sound
00:30:159 (1,2) -
you can keep 00:31:523 (1,2) - because there is a distinct sound going on
This allows you to clearly seperate the density for the buildup at 00:34:250 (1) - +
as of now, it feels like the same density for the verse and buildup and the part next to it where the guitar starts to play
00:16:182 (1) - should remove nc for consistency with 00:18:568 (1,2,3,4) - 00:21:296 (1,2,3,4) - etc. ?
01:04:762 (1,2,3) - 01:06:125 (1,2,3) - 01:07:489 (1,2,3) - 我建议这几个三连不要摆开了，这段重点强调 01:03:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:05:273 (1,2,3,4,1) - 01:08:000 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这种可能更好，三连作为过渡用类似 01:13:284 (1,2,3) - 的间距差不多了