02:25:966 (5) - missing NC for new pattern here maybe, considering you did it 01:37:489 (1) - here
02:32:966 (5) - shouldn't NC be on this instead of after it?
01:42:489 - 02:25:966 (1) - with NC i guess maybe u didn't update?
01:37:489 (1) - same
02:32:966 - agree
01:43:989 (1) - feel like doing something similar to 00:51:575 (2,3,4) - what you did here or 02:31:966 (1,2,3,4,5) - here would work better, this long of a repeat is kinda underwhelming to have in the chorus imo
02:16:489 (3,4,5) - id go with a single 3/4 repeat slider instead to keep things calm in this section
same 02:08:489 (1) -