00:15:056 - I would make this sound clickable and not being a slider-end
00:15:510 - the "aw" sound should be emphasize more. consider making slider here.
by comparing to 00:22:783 (1) - I dont see why 00:15:510 (1) - is not emphasized
00:15:510 (1,2,3) - also wouldn't the spacing too crazy here? the part has calmed down from the intro
00:28:238 (1,2) - I dont think this pattern/nc match the song
for reference, I would make something like https://imgur.com/r39sVfh.png
00:31:192 (4) - a bit inconsistent to 00:38:465 (5,6) - while they are both the same thing.
also I am not a fan to 00:31:874 (1,2,3) - which is off-vocal sliders. hitting on the vocal would be better imo
Edit:
well actually the whole part in 00:30:056 - 00:44:147 is very inconsistent. The slider is not on the vocal with strong sound e.g. 00:35:283 - 00:40:283 - 00:42:556 . The rhythm would just be so messy.
00:44:147 (3) - there is a loud snare on this circle, but it is very close to the last object, maybe make it a bigger jump
01:00:510 (3,4) - suggested to make something like https://i.imgur.com/Ln8YYiA.png
now is pretty weird and not match the song since the vocal is on 01:00:624 - and 01:00:851 -
same to 01:07:783 (3,4) - 01:58:692 (3,4) - 02:05:965 (3,4) - 02:27:783 (3,4) - 02:35:056 (3,4) -
01:15:056 (6,7) - i think you should make it a triple, all the vocals are pretty important there and it feels better
01:23:465 (3,4,5,6) - The spacing is SOO crazy.
comparing with 00:29:147 (4,5,6,7) - here is the high snare part but 01:23:465 has nothing to support. just no reason to make high space here.
02:30:056 (1,2,3) - seems a bit cramped compared to the patterns u did before, i think space out more