00:15:056 - I would make this sound clickable and not being a slider-end
00:15:510 - the "aw" sound should be emphasize more. consider making slider here.
by comparing to 00:22:783 (1) - I dont see why 00:15:510 (1) - is not emphasized
00:15:510 (1,2,3) - also wouldn't the spacing too crazy here? the part has calmed down from the intro
00:28:238 (1,2) - I dont think this pattern/nc match the song
for reference, I would make something like https://imgur.com/r39sVfh.png