00:56:292 (5,6,7,8,9) - I think it's okay to make this pattern more flexible , It might feel a little difficult because of the ambiguous movement
02:25:481 (1,2,3,4) - it's good to express DS differently, but I think it'd be better to make ds the same like in 01:02:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6) section
02:27:427 (5,6,7) - it's not mean edge dash, but considering that it's a lot more dash than the previous section, and that it's anti flow, it's better to reduce the DS a little bit or make it similar to the previous section 01:03:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)