00:00:113 (113|0,457|3,1492|0,1837|3) - Listen to the sound again. It feels a bit different, right? You have to change it to something else. and 00:02:181 - High sound. 00:01:147 - It seems to be lower than the note below. i suggest this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17216168/31e6
00:03:561 (3561|1,3906|3,4250|0,4595|3) - If you want you can change it to this so you follow PR better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17338843/43d5
00:04:595 (4595|2,4940|1) - It doesn't fit the sound. because , 00:04:940 - is because that is a higher sound than 00:04:595 - . ex) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17216172/46c9
00:05:975 (5975|3) - It is right to express the laser sound at the left end. 00:07:009 (7009|1,7699|1) - high sound 00:07:354 (7354|3,8044|2) - low sound . thus , i suggest this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17216176/5569
00:08:733 - Even if you keep listening to it, you can hear it on the left. But considering the pitch, I think this is right. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17216187/6c13
00:10:457 - It has a higher pitch than I thought. 00:10:802 - It has a high sound, but it's also a low note. Therefore, this can use pitch in many ways. so i suggest this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17216193/af53
00:13:561 (13561|1,13906|1) - Why are these on same column? I don't hear same pitch from here, I suggest moving one ln to other column. Same with 00:20:457 (20457|2,20802|2)
00:13:561 (13561|1,13906|1) - because it's 4k and I can't do it any other way (because then I just don't have enough columns on the left)
00:20:457 (20457|2,20802|2) - about this: long LNs don't allocate a pitch. Only short LNs, check it - 00:20:457 (20457|2,20802|3)
00:13:906 (13906|3,15975|2) - I think the top is higher. And the current shape is difficult to arrange according to the pitch. thus, i suggest this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17216203/38d6 . If you think the long note proposal is wrong, I'll suggest a short long note placement. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17216206/f72d
00:16:664 (16664|0,17009|2) - I think the bottom is higher than the top. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17216210/c8e6 00:17:354 - Only the sound is loud, but it feels lower than this. thus , i suggest this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17216210/c8e6
00:19:768 (19768|1) - This may be a low note, but 00:20:457 - is not. 00:19:423 - 00:20:113 - Since the above is a lower note, i suggest the placement of my feelings. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17216218/9e84
00:27:699 - added
00:43:561 (43561|3) - if you mean LN, changed
00:43:561 (43561|3) - there's already one note, two LNs and one LN-end, so I can't add a note
00:44:250 - 00:49:768 - I will place it like this, you can keep it as it is https://i.imgur.com/vYvUGcQ.jpeg https://i.imgur.com/B1hBgeI.jpeg
00:45:630 (45630|3) - 00:47:009 (47009|0) -
Subjective thoughts，I think it needs to be doubled
00:55:975 (55975|0,56664|2,57354|1,58044|2,58733|0) - instead of having these notes
i suggest just aburpty stopping this LN (and re starting it) 1/4th of a note b4 those points in time (like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17218790/cf0d ), as there's no new sound to be represented its just the sound that your signifying with the LN stopping and starting again.
00:59:423 (59423|0,59423|1,59768|0,59768|1,60113|3,60113|2,60285|2,60285|1,60457|2,60457|0,60630|3,60630|0) - It should be removed or expressed correctly. Vocalists should be given a note if possible. I'll suggest two. SV. 59423,-10,4,2,0,50,0,0
59466,-10000,4,2,0,50,0,0
60630,-62.5,4,2,0,50,0,0 Note : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17216354/2b38
01:01:492 (61492|1,62354|0,62871|2) - these LNs should be 1/2 not 1/4 for the instrumental melody
01:03:561 (63561|1) - Should probably be an LN to match up with 01:00:802 (60802|1,60802|0) - If u apply then I would probably move to column 3
Something in the chorus i would like the point out is the anchor could be stacked so much on one col that left the layout a little bit unbalance, worth mentioning are: 01:04:768 (64768|1,64940|1,65113|1,65285|1,65630|1,65802|1,65975|1,66147|1,66319|1) - you could split it out like moving 01:04:940 (64940|1) - to 4 and switch place for 01:06:147 (66147|1,66147|0,66319|1) - and switch place for 01:05:975 (65975|2,66147|3) - -> https://i.imgur.com/9B2aZL8.png. I believe it would be more balance to play while still keep the main structure of the map.
01:23:561 (83561|3,83647|2,83733|3,83906|2,83906|3,84078|2,84078|3,84250|2,84423|2,84595|2) - it quite right sided as you can see and 01:24:768 (84768|1,84940|1,85113|1,85285|1,85457|1,85630|1) -
Same to 01:29:423 (89423|3,89595|3,89768|3,89940|3,90113|3,90285|1,90457|1,90630|1,90802|1,90975|1,91147|1) - as well, which doesn't follow any musical pattern, Because if you're following the dubstep sound that's repeating, I think you can do these type of jack but only if they're on the same pitch and you would need to switch col once the pitch changed. E.g.: https://i.imgur.com/IGLmUzL.png which I believe it would make more sense to do the jack this way, elsewhere the jacks are rather uncomfortable to play with or arbitrary to follow which is why I do suggest to balance your pattern out like the part it doesn't have this type of long anchor
01:24:423 (84423|2) - the anchor on here is still long and not connect with the song itself that I recommend to move this note to 4
01:10:802 (70802|1,70802|2,70802|3,71319|2,71319|1,71319|0) - The sound is not loud enough to use three, and it is a point that does not highlight the expression of the note above. One note per section must be removed.
01:12:009 (72009|3) - Why is this LN here? I don't see it represent anything and all the other similar sounds and it's the only place you do it. I would remove it and make 01:11:837 (71837|2) - go to 01:12:181 -
01:21:492 - for this section, the hats are audible enough and i believe they’re kinda waste if you don’t mapped it
Pattern suggestion -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17653486/723e
If you ask me why i don’t mapped 01:22:268 - and 01:22:699 -,
as for 01:22:268 - it’ll ruin this pattern 01:22:354 (82354|3,82354|2,82354|0,82526|0,82526|3,82526|2) -
and for 01:22:699 - i just don’t like an anchor (4 stacked notes in this case) but if you think it is necessary then feel free to add it
same as here: #2961772/8045447
I don't like how it feels and it's imperceptible during the game.
also, it may interfere with my idea of sv at this point
i'm not sure about what the mod said here -> #2697585, so i just gonna open new mod. besides the screenshot is outdated (it can't be open)
01:38:906 - missed a sound here. I mean, 01:38:733 (98733|1) - and 01:38:906 - are not the same, therefore the LN should be divided into 2. should be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17653530/d84b
01:43:561 - 01:44:595 мне кажется, более звучная и правильная структура - следовать снейрам, а не барабанам. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17218539/657e дабл - снейры, синглы - барабаны
01:46:319 (106319|2) - 01:46:319 (106319|2) - 01:51:837 - 01:54:595 (114595|3) - 01:57:354 - 02:00:113 - 02:02:871 - I think it's better to reduce the number of notes one by one. The notes you add and the things you can understand, but the laser sounds too side manu, so I think it's better to distinguish between the sounds of kicks and claps.
01:48:388 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17319314/6894 предыдущие паттерны скучно играть (по желанию можно изменить так)
и остальные парты тоже желательно разнообразить по другому (желаемый джеки все равно у тебя остаются)
01:51:837 (111837|2,111837|0,112009|2,112009|1,112181|2,112181|1,112354|2,112354|1) - this pattern rather feels weird for me, each dubstep anchor hold at least 4 notes on 2 col, but on here it's only 4 notes on 1 col. Reference: 01:45:630 (105630|3,105630|2,105630|1,105802|3,105802|2,105975|3,105975|2,106147|3,106147|2,106319|2,106319|1,106319|0,106492|1,106492|0,106664|1,106664|0,106837|1,106837|0,107009|3,107009|2,107009|1,107181|3,107181|2) - .
this could be easily be fixed by moving 01:51:837 (111837|0) - to 2nd col. Another note is on 01:52:526 (112526|2) - it made the col on the right a little bit biased to the right, which I also recommend to move to 2nd col
01:55:975 (115975|0,115975|2,116147|1,116319|0) - I think these are same sounds as 01:55:285 - 01:55:457 - 01:55:630 Please keep or delete :(
02:04:595 (124595|3) - сомнительно выделять этот звук единожды, учитывая, что тут еще 3 раза он появляется
02:04:595 (124595|3) - i think don't ln ，Because the timbre of these places is different 02:04:250 (124250|1,124768|0,125285|2) -
02:04:595 (124595|3) - This hihat note is rather random to be noted on, because you don't seem to note any hihat previously. I would recommend to remove this note. On a side note, 02:04:250 (124250|1,124768|0,125285|2) - are having same pitch, put 3 of them on the same col would be a nice call to represent this wub sound.
02:04:595 (124595|3) - deleted
02:04:250 (124250|1,124768|0,125285|2) - moved to col3 and 02:03:906 (123906|3,123906|1) - switched these notes
02:05:630 - added
02:07:009 (127009|0) - end this LN at 02:10:285
02:07:009 (127009|2) - end this LN at 02:10:975
and 02:07:009 (127009|3) - end this LN at 02:11:664 ?