01:52:694 (1,2,3,1) - You could adjust this a little bit like: https://i.imgur.com/gyX41EH.png so that the impact towards 01:53:346 (1) - feels somewhat stronger
02:05:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2) - If you really want to have the spaced stream here then first you should do the kicksliders, then the stream since the instruments here 02:05:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - behave the same as 02:04:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and the most intense beat is at kicksliders.
02:07:368 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This sounds more like a 4-9 groping, not a 6-7 so having a triple with a kickslider + burst of 9 makes more sense
02:28:333 (2) - seems off, should snap it to 02:28:306 - and adjust the greenline accordingly too
02:28:564 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - I think a new combo should be applied to each object so that it will not be overshadowed by the changed beat.
02:28:781 (1,1) - 02:28:998 (1,1) - Looks like you messed up NC colors here, for some reason they are same color that's right next to each other
02:37:694 (4) - bend slider like the (2) before it, looks better
https://gyazo.com/8d3c0a062242c84a3ab5649bddac2879
03:02:151 (3,4) - I wouldn't cover 03:02:151 (3) - under the stream; looks and plays better if you have done something of: https://i.imgur.com/m1BcPUQ.png
03:10:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this doesnt flow so well, maybe move the stream a bit upwards so you can keep the flow, its also missreadable
03:31:824 (1,2,3) - 기타음을 따라가셨는데 03:33:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 03:34:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 에서는 드럼을 따라가신 이유가 있습니까? 서로 다른 리듬을 채용할 이유는 없어 보입니다.
04:08:998 (4,5,6) - not a big deal but consider using similar jump patterns with 04:08:346 (1,2,3) - , feels more consistent in terms of gameplay considering how you build up the earlier section (04:03:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 04:05:738 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - )
04:21:390 (1,2) - You could stack (2) under (1) so that a) people don't get confused if it's 1/4 or 1/2 b) matches the song better cuz the actual increase in intensivity in the song happens at 04:21:716 (3) -
04:23:998 (1,2,3,4,5) - seeing how drastic the spacing change is from 04:23:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , I'd suggest nerfing a bit the spacing of this stream as a better build up and transition to 04:24:488 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) -
04:24:488 (6) - 04:24:977 (11) - I already mentioned in the general (this diff) post about NCs and here is the part where I'd NC each of those because of how the song behaves.
Same goes for 06:47:966 (6) - 06:48:455 (11) - etc.
04:48:129 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2) - imo this curve in stream exaggerated for no reason, if anything the curve should be on 04:48:455 (13) - not (14)
05:14:868 (1,2,3,4,5) - Personally I don't think such spacing fits here, would make them closer
05:16:172 (1) - think it's a cooler finisher to the section using a spinner or slider until 05:18:455 - to fully follow the guitar sound
05:26:444 (3,4,5,6) - placement is a bit confusing right now considering the rhythm usage because 05:26:933 (4,5) - is the only 1/3 gap here, would suggest ctrl-g the rhythm and rearranging a bit the pattern, which shall be more intuitive imo
05:56:607 (1) - 여기도 드럼 생략하신게 조금 어색한데 기타음 표현한다고 하시면 어느정도 이해는 가지만 그렇다면 슬라이더 모양을 좀 더 꼬아보시는건 어떤가요?
06:02:477 (1) - what about shortening the slider by 1/4 (ending at 06:02:966 - instead) for the guitar? since rhythm focus in the section was guitar, the change would sound nicer and more consistent with the section imo
06:14:134 (8,1,2) - would suggest a flow change instead cuz it seems like the intention here with how you group the stream (8+8), but the movement here doesn't feel as smooth tbh. could rotate the second stream a bit I guess? -> https://i.imgur.com/gByYHvV.png
06:14:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Again feels fairly weak to how the build-up is done; something of https://i.imgur.com/w6ope7X.jpeg would work nicely.
06:15:846 (1,2,3,4) - This part has a strong drum sound. 06:16:091 (4,5) - It is made into a narrow shape because there is no drumming sound. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16995524/de98
06:50:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/777583731711541262/816017387685937163/unknown.png
the way the slider is slightly missaligned compared to the other 2 notes of the triples triggers me, on all 4 of the triples i linked
06:55:303 (1,2,3) - you could manually place this triple instead since it looks like you're going for gradually larger spacing but it ends up not looking like so with the auto stacking (https://i.imgur.com/Zoh4Fsp.png)
07:23:998 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Cute pattern but again feels really weak after that spaced stream, would move the right side more towards the edge.
07:37:042 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Make Every End slider Volume to 5%
07:38:020 (3) - 07:40:629 (4) - personally think they should work better as 1/2 sliders considering how you place the next combo this far away
07:46:824 (1,2) - Passive 1/3 me crying ;w;
If you want to support Zelq then go for something of https://i.imgur.com/d9VepiI.jpeg (can even be lower spacing, or even (circle + slider) x2 would work!
09:44:213 (1,2) - Same ;w;
08:14:426 (1,2,3) - this fits the song much better as a 1/4 triple rather than 1/6 -- the snare hit is late here, but the kicks are very noticeably 1/4 and on sync
10:32:765 (1) - I think you should end the song after the spinner. It can be similar to Image Material, so the calm melodic section will play after you have finished the map. It is a little slow after such a high intensity map. Overall amazing map though, one of my favorite stream maps in osu, great job.
Thank u so much ! :D Maybe most people don't like this calm part, but I personally think it's an indispensable part of this song.