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This beatmap wasn't updated since 19 January 2022 so it was graveyarded...
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i'd NC this 00:08:504 (5) -

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no reason to put a kickslider here, use a normal one 00:15:412 (4) -

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00:16:202 (6,7) - this two slider feels weird
consider change slider 6 to a 1/2 reverse slider
and slider 7 to a circle

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Done.

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00:17:188 (9,1) - Add a cricle between them

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Fixed by making 9 as slider

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00:28:044 (7,8) - two 1/2 slider should fits to vocal more...?

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Yup. Done.

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00:33:077 - shorten the slider and change this to a note to better follow vocals

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Done.

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00:35:149 (2,3) - increase spacing here to match 1,2, i dont see a rhythm to justify the decreased spacing

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Ok.

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00:36:531 (5,6) - decrease spacing on this cause no drum on 6

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Ok.

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00:36:728 (6,7) - spacing here is awk consider the strong note on 00:36:925 (7) - might wanna increase spacing

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Ok.

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00:39:294 (7,8) - following the piano, consider to add a triple tap here

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This is a incorrect timestamp.

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lol wait

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I tried slow down the music and I didn't heard a triple there :thinking:

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The piano is the main sound and it's pretty highlighted.
So I think making the rhythm simpler may be more suitable.

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00:39:392 - missed note

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u have a ton of these missing, consider adding them, these are not the only examples, should recheck whole map for these

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Ok. Thx! I'll try to check the whole map and add them.

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there is a triple here 00:45:609 (7) -

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00:50:765 (5) - consider adding a small curve to this slider?

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00:54:120 (2) - I feel like this doesn't follow anything in the music other than the vocals? in which case it would be better to have an extended slider so the player doesn't get free hp and combo

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some of ur nc also seem random to be, eg 00:56:859 (1,1,1) - i cant see why u would nc there

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Ok fixed. I'll check the whole map later if there are other strange nc.

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00:57:452 (1,1) - hummmm I also prefer two sliders here =w=

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Ok =w=

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01:01:202 (2,3) - confusing rhythm choice here
first u miss the drum 01:01:300 - which is ok if ur mapping vocals here
but then 01:01:399 (3) - this slider is not representative of the vocals at all
01:01:399 - "ah"
01:01:596 - "ahhh"

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Ok. I changed 01:01:399 to be a 1/4 slider and 01:01:596 to be a 1/8 half-beat reverse slider.

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01:01:399 (3) - maybe change the slider direction to make it feel more comfortable to click

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Ok.

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01:06:531 (4,1) - why change spacing here, vocals r following the same pattern

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Fixed.

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01:14:425 (9) - increase spacing here to match strong drum beat

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Ok.

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01:17:978 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this part doesn't fit too well as there is a pause

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Will adding a circle in between OK?

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Fixed by making it 4 1-2 jumps

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01:20:149 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like there is one more beat?

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Yes. Fixed.

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02:04:557 (7,8) - triple tap!

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Fixed.

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02:08:133 (4,5,6) - I think this would be more intuitive as a triple followed by a 1/2 slider

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02:11:587 - you should map this sound and rearrange surrounding objects accordingly

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02:34:976 (5,6) - I think it would be better if you used the same rhythm as 02:35:765 (7,8,9)

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02:39:120 (7,8) - what happened to the stream here? can't tell if this is intentional (if it is add a nc on 7)

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03:24:294 (1) - expand this spinner 1 more beat to hit to vocal

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I extended it for 1/2 beat, see if it's better. (Cuz I want to stop the spinner where the vocal stops)

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Fixed as above.

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