Suggestion to remap 00:01:584 - to 00:08:922 - since it feels too random
Pattern Suggestion:
00:01:584 - 00:03:167 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16707237/2a0a
00:03:167 - 00:05:469 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16707239/8ac5
00:05:469 - 00:07:771 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16707243/2bab
00:07:771 - 00:08:922 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16707248/f6fe
Sorry for all the screenshots X_X
00:08:922 (8922|2) - not sure if this LN stopped 1/4 earlier than 1/1 beat line is intentional...
00:21:296 (21296|7) - why not keep it at same col with 00:20:433 (20433|2,20721|2,21008|2) - lol
Doubles usage from 00:28:204 to 00:37:699 seems rather inconsistent.
From the beginning of 28sec you have double note at the start of every 2nd bar, but then consistency is broken with a double 00:34:246 (34246|6,34246|4) - here
00:29:498 (29498|4) - Note for melody but 00:34:677 is missing note for melody. Fix inconsistencies.
00:31:224 (31224|5,31368|5) - Why are these notes on the same lane? You haven't put notes in the same lane within 1/2 snap in this section. Nothing stands out in the music that warrants this pattern.
consider rearranging 00:43:167 (43167|4,43167|5,43311|3,43454|2) - so that it follows motif of 00:40:577 (40577|2,40721|3,40865|4) -
00:44:318 (44318|8) - move to 7 or 6 for easier reading and easy to move to 00:44:606 (44606|9) -
Suggestion to remap this part from 00:46:908 - to 00:53:814 - for consistency and easier to play
Pattern Suggestion:
00:46:908 - 00:46:908 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16707195/2c78
00:49:210 - 00:51:512 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16707196/fdc9
00:51:512 - 00:53:814 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16707199/8da2
00:52:231 (52231|7) - Found this bad boy while modding the Normal, should be moved 1/4 up to match the heavy kick
01:04:174 - 01:05:325 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16707207/b951 suggestion to change to this
for easier patterns since 01:05:613 (65613|0) - is hard to hit after 01:05:325 (65325|1) -
If you applied #2409017 then you can also apply it to here, i changed it a bit so it has more variation
01:30:577 - 01:32:375 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16707281/15e6
notes missing at 02:03:023 - and 02:03:167 - ? you weren't shy about mapping them before at 01:58:275 (118275|0,118490|5,118706|0,118850|9,119066|4,119282|9) -