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I'm going to have to ask to try to redo the intro, because it is very inconsistent - 00:06:620 (6620|9,6764|8,6908|6,7195|9) - if you're mapping the second layer (a consistent 1/2) here for instance, you want to do it throughout the entire intro; 00:02:159 (2159|8,2159|1) - these also suggest you're trying to map the second layer but you don't go through with it - either map a two handed pattern where it's 1/2 in both hands or do the same I suggested with hyper - map to the occasional ding that's on the background

00:10:145 - 00:10:217 - 00:10:289 - 00:10:361 - 這邊有聽到聲音跟00:12:519 - ~ 00:12:807 - 這邊的聲音類似覺得可以補上
https://i.imgur.com/Bt04UCz.jpg

00:11:368 - add these missing notes like so https://lunar.s-ul.eu/o4jn4Ghc with whichever arrangement feels good to you

Suggestion, change this 00:11:944 - to 00:12:375 - to only use notes on 1/2 snap, I dont think it needs a 1/4.
same as this 01:25:613 - 01:26:044 -

00:13:670 - add these missing notes like so at your preferred arrangement https://lunar.s-ul.eu/sU47EU0B

00:14:965 - missing note, also 00:15:397 -

00:17:123 - thru 00:17:411 - missing 1/4 stream

00:17:699 - buff to triple better, can notice that 00:17:843 - 00:17:699 - is similar, make it double / quad is kinda weird

00:18:418 - missing note

00:23:526 - missing note

00:31:800 - missing note

00:42:088 - missing note

00:43:670 - missing note

00:51:800 (51800|6,51800|0,51800|3,51800|9,52303|0,52303|3,52303|6,52303|9,52519|0,52519|6,52519|3,52519|9) -

All these chords have a note too much. The sounds are absolute identical with 00:49:641 (49641|9,49641|5,49641|3,50001|3,50001|7,50001|0,50217|0,50217|7,50217|3) - yet these are mapped with 3 notes.

You should stick to 4 notes only in this part when there is a F-sound for it. Randomly increasing the note count in chords is a no-no.

add an extra note here? 01:04:174 -

01:05:037 (65037|8,65109|4,65181|7,65253|2) -suggestion to the emphasized pitch https://puu.sh/HD1Lq/26ad502c22.png it is a sample so probably you can catch something

replacing 01:13:958 (73958|9,73958|4,73958|5,73958|0) - for a [90] chord would feel better to me

01:24:030 - missing note

01:25:181 - and 01:25:325 - 01:25:397 - missing notes

01:27:483 - 01:27:627 - 01:27:699 - missing notes

01:28:634 - 01:29:066 - missing notes

01:30:793 - 01:31:080 - missing 1/4 stream

01:37:195 - missing note

01:38:778 (98778|1) - Ghost note, there is no 1/4 sound. The 1/4 begins at 01:38:850 -

missing note at 01:46:980 - and 01:47:123 - 01:48:418 -

I know you made 01:48:059 (108059|3,108059|8,108131|7,108131|2,108203|5,108203|6,108203|1,108275|7,108275|2,108347|8,108347|3) - a motif, but in spite of being able to execute it I found it awkward to play - I suggest changing it to single handed streams... though I leave it to you

01:49:426 (109426|1) - extra note (loool)

01:49:929 (109929|9,109929|8) - consider moving to left hand and 01:50:001 (110001|1) - to right hand (I think it feels better)

01:54:174 - missing note

02:00:577 - I'd like if you decomposed these triples into the 2 notes for the strike, and the third note following the melody... like this, 02:07:483 (127483|0,127483|5,127483|2,127699|2,127699|0,127699|6,127915|2,127915|7,127915|0) - but all the time!

02:00:613 - why no grace rhythm here? i see it is on the hyper diff, is this intended?

02:10:073 - make this a quadruplet? since you have it on this 02:00:865 (120865|1,120865|0,120865|2,120865|9) -

02:13:239 - ~ 02:17:843 - 這邊只有02:13:814 - ~ 02:14:246 - 不是jack 我是覺得讓他們統一都是jack會好一點

02:16:692 (136692|6) - 跟 02:16:116 (136116|6,136332|6,136548|6) - 我覺得還是不要疊在一起好, 前面都是4個一組就這邊是5個一組