00:01:660 (1660|1,1891|0) - it would make more sense if these two were in the same column since they are the same pitch instead of these two 00:00:968 (968|1,1660|1) - which are completely different
same thing for the rest of the section of course
00:08:352 (8352|1,9044|0,9275|0,10198|1,10891|0,11121|0) - if you wanna some variation, can try to swap their place
1 -> 2, 2 -> 1
same goes with the rest
nah not really, i really liked how repetitve this song was and wanted the pattern to showcase that lol
00:29:352 (29352|2) - i think adding a note besides the LN here for the kick would be nice, since throughout this section you used for these kinds of sound 00:28:660 - doubles besides the LN whenever the sax and the hihat appeared at the same time, also because you did that for kicks in the previous section (example: 00:00:968 (968|1,968|2) - )
02:27:506 (147506|2) - same thing
ehhh, I feel like this would be a tad bit awkward and out of place for the note. i generally try to avoid stuff like that when I can so I don't exactly agree with this unfortunately. no change.
00:29:352 (29352|3) - would personally shrinking this into 1/4 and add a note on 00:29:583 - for the piano still on going along with the kicks
i disagree here since I think I originally wanted this part to be more exclusive to the drumroll here and would like to keep it that way
00:33:506 (33506|1) - this LN should end at 00:33:621 - and then this LN 00:33:737 (33737|3) - should start at that same spot, you even did what i'm explaining here at 00:40:891 (40891|1,41006|3) -.
00:35:468 (35468|0) - also this one should end at 00:35:698 - and you should add another LN at that same spot.
Also, just to have it all in one mod, i'd like to also add that after hearing 00:57:660 (57660|0) - multiple times, i'm pretty sure it shouldn't be 1/6, it should be 1/4 since the sax starts playing at 00:57:621 -
this of course applies to the rest of the times this section appears in the map
reopening this since there are still spots where this: "00:33:506 (33506|1) - this LN should end at 00:33:621 - and then this LN 00:33:737 (33737|3) - should start at that same spot" isn't fixed, at these timestamps 00:48:275 (48275|1) - 01:32:583 (92583|1) - 01:47:352 (107352|1) -
00:43:429 (43429|0,43429|3) - following your reasoning throughout this section I'm pretty sure you used triples only when both piano and hi hat play at the same time, so I think it would be appropriate to make this a triple because this is a case of the two playing at the same time. In case this is intentional to reduce difficulty I still think you should make it a triple since it really doesn't represent any kind of challenge compared to other parts of this map
00:48:275 should be mapped consistently with 00:55:660, doesn't make sense to skip out the syncopated sax here, so redo the pattern to something like this. https://prnt.sc/zrjenh
00:50:352 (50352|2,50468|2) - i think you pretty much forced it to be there
like the only jack during the trumpets sound so i think it should be moved to 00:50:352 - [13] to it can dissolve the jack as it feels out of place imo
00:53:929 (53929|0) - 01:53:006 (113006|0) - Is it intentional to have this LN ended at blue line instead of red line?
I think it seems intentional, but considering this is the only unnatural structure in the entire difficulty, it sort of confuses me.
00:58:198 (58198|3) - 01:57:275 (117275|3) - The LN tail should ended in white line i think. That's where the sound ended.
i dont think so, I hear the sound completely end at the 1/2 line instead. i do this with all my other diffs too
00:59:352 - should be 1/4 jack like 00:58:429 (58429|2,58544|2) -
and maybe missing hihat on 00:59:814 - too
hmmm im not sure what you mean by this. I felt like i tried to follow the pitch pretty appropriately here but perhaps im being naïve. it'd be great if you can point what I can do better here. i'll resolve this but feel free to reopen if you'd like to elaborate!
yea that mod was a bit unclear so let me elaborate (oh god this is quite long but I hope it's helpful, i tried my best to take into account what was probably intentional for gameplay reasons or wathever reasons you had but i'm not a mind reader so some of these may be wrong), 01:00:737 (60737|2) - this should not be in the same column as these two 01:00:275 (60275|2,60506|2) - since if you listen closely you can hear a slight change in pitch.
01:03:506 (63506|1) - this one should be on column 4 like these 01:03:044 (63044|3,63275|3) - since they are the same pitch.
01:04:775 (64775|2,64891|0,65006|1,65121|2,65237|0,65352|1,65468|2) - this pattern was a weird choice, i think this would much better fit the song: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16192182/59d5 because these three 01:04:775 - 01:05:006 - 01:05:237 - are the same pitch, 01:05:121 - 01:05:352 - these two are also the same pitch, and of course 01:04:891 - since this has the lowest pitch it goes on col 1, 01:05:468 - and this one has the highest pitch so it goes on col 4.
01:07:429 (67429|2,67544|1) - this is not percisely wrong but it just feels weird that despite the change in sound there is nothing to differenciate it from the previous section, i would recommend moving 01:07:544 (67544|1) - to col 4, and 01:07:429 (67429|2) - to col 2, mainly because this 01:07:429 (67429|2,67544|1) - has the same pitch as 01:07:891 (67891|1,68006|3) - (which is col 2 and 4).
01:11:121 (71121|3,71237|2,71352|1,71468|2,71698|2,71814|1,71929|2) - i think you should move all of these 1 column to the left, since this 01:12:044 (72044|0) - is the same pitch as these 01:11:352 (71352|1,71814|1) - and this 01:12:160 (72160|1) - is the same pitch as these 01:11:237 (71237|2,71468|2,71698|2,71929|2) -. Also, 01:12:391 (72391|1) - is the same pitch as 01:12:621 (72621|3) - so it would make more sense to have that in the same column, instead of these two 01:12:621 (72621|3,72852|3) - which have nothing in common.
01:14:006 (74006|1,74121|2,74237|1,74352|2,74468|1) - i don't see a reason for this to be a trill, just to prevent it i'd say you should move 01:14:121 (74121|2) - to col 4, since it is higher pitched than 01:14:352 (74352|2) -
01:12:996 (72996|2) - i don't see much reason for this note to be here really, it doesn't sound like these 01:09:275 (69275|0,69304|3) - or anything similar, it just sounds like the rest of the piano in this section, so i suggest deleting it
applied most of this. some of them i dont think i applied cuz i disagreed with them but lmk if u need these claified in any capacity. i'll try my best lol (sorry for responding so late). thank you for taking the time to mod all this! i honestly appreciate it!
01:04:429 (64429|3) - think this should be 1/16 grace as well to make it consistent with the piano grace on 01:03:737 (63737|1,63766|2,63968|1,63996|2) -
01:04:660 https://prnt.sc/zrjo6q You can do something like this for better PR, right now the patterning lacks in PR as it just repeats the same 123 motion which is kinda boring, at least in relation to what the music is doing.
01:05:698 (65698|2,65814|2) - a bit odd as it's the only 1/4 jack for the whole run
can try something like this https://akasalt.s-ul.eu/BndGI9jV, that follow the hihat too so i think it's more fun
following that's the piano on https://akasalt.s-ul.eu/JgaoLUOW
01:06:506 - is repetitive piano so can try something to go with that PR
apply to 01:20:352 - too? it's fine to keep as well but wondering if u want to make it consistent
it should be like https://akasalt.s-ul.eu/BndGI9jV
01:14:352 (74352|2,74583|3) - are same pitch and 01:14:121 (74121|3,74583|3) - aren't the same so 01:14:583 (74583|3) - should be on col.3
01:24:044 Considering that you during this section layered in the percussive sounds around here 01:14:814, it doesn't make much sense for this to be so similarly mapped to 01:09:275, I would suggest to add in singles at all white lines, which doesn't lose the rhythmical emphasis of the piano as that is more prominently layered,
01:24:362 (84362|0,84391|3) - just realize, i think it should be moved 1/16 upward to 01:24:391 - 01:24:419 -
notice the piano is on 3/4 rhythm and the grace happen after that rhythm, it's same to the rest 01:24:044 (84044|0,84073|3,84737|1,84766|3,85083|2,85112|3) -
same thing to 01:09:593 (69593|0,69621|3) -
01:26:352 (86352|2) - i'd move this note to col.4
give it a separate col will not make it looks connected and able to separate the piano field out
01:28:583 (88583|2,88660|3,88718|2) - this is easy to play but can be more challenging and let heavy on that right side
https://akasalt.s-ul.eu/EGs6letj
plus since you already did follow piano for the whole thing, continue the piano is better imo than ignore it for the kicks
the stacks here serve the purpose of the kick sounds here https://akasalt.s-ul.eu/om27gxNR
fair point but i think i intentionally did this because this would play like shit if i added a note here so i left this out
yea suggest something like this to follow the concept i suggest at the intro https://akasalt.s-ul.eu/VZAEwFKb