00:21:557 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - instead of suddenly increasing the spacing, try gradually increasing it
00:23:448 (2,3) - the direction of the jump and the sliderbody does not fit because you are doing a lot of circular movements and this pattern breaks it without anything significant happening in the song
00:38:998 (3,1) - I say it is better to stack the 1/1 here since you used a lot of overlaps on 1/2 rhythms, so a stack here will differentiate the rhythm
00:40:569 (2,3,1) - i think spacing this triple away from the last note a little more would be good for emphasis
00:50:300 (5,6,7) - prob nerf these jump's spacing as there's no reason for them to increase in intensity here after the previous 00:49:829 (2,3,4) - jumps have much more fitting spacing
01:07:420 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I know there is vocal but try reducing the spacing a little bit because I personally don't think such large jumps fit there
I made it like that because it will make it smoother, because the pattern is just in the middle of the dance, just like this part 00:47:480 (3,4,5,6,7) - 00:55:961 (2,3,4,5) - 01:07:427 (2,3,4,5,6) -
01:28:939 (4) - try changing the slider end to whistle instead of clap. I think sounds more natural
01:30:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - you could increase the spacing of this stream to make this ending part more intense
01:36:328 (1) - shouldn't this spinner finish on this tick 01:43:632 ?