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00:06:055 - I believe this place should not use triple because the drum is not that strong compared to 00:06:423 - . Double note is more proper.

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00:09:920 - For similar logic, I would suggest double note here with drum too. However, 00:09:736 - this is just a piano sound stand-alone so single note is enough.

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为什么00:06:961 (6961|3,7145|0,7329|3) - 三个note的音你在hard采了而不在another也采呢?

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00:12:298 (12298|2) - 放在1感觉更好 00:12:298 (12298|2) - 条子旁边的音写了把 不然连贯感比较差 00:12:298 (12298|2) - 这段开始抓琴为主,其他的可以不要 后面鼓出来在带上鼓 00:54:169 (54169|2,54537|1) - 这2个音建议不要 00:55:274 (55274|2) - 同上 01:11:562 (71562|0,71562|1,71746|1,71746|0,71930|0,71930|1,72114|2,72114|3,72298|1,72298|0) - 这段改成更琴走,鼓点辅助的类型 01:14:691 - 错音 01:24:906 - 音感上不应该是梯子 01:27:114 - 这里没6分音把? 01:27:666 - 这里也好向没6分音 水丸就溜

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感谢建议!1/2 已修改 3.感觉整个放鼓会更好一些 4/5 这几个音比较明显 6/7/8已修改 9/10 压音参照的pms转谱

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00:17:098 - 00:17:282 - Single notes are enough here if you compare these weaker spots to the stronger piano sounds immediately after on 00:17:466 - and 00:17:650 - , etc.

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00:17:098 - Single note for this one too?

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00:17:359 - 漏音

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感谢建议!我觉得这些音中有一部分可以取舍

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00:19:844 - 这里用双note

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00:25:840 - 00:28:049 - Pretty sure there are bass sounds here, so I suggest adding 1/4 notes to these spots.

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00:29:613 - Here you can use triple note because of the crash in my opinion.

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00:37:145 (37145|1) - missing 1/4 stream; Hard is harder than Another in this spot

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Many thanks for your advice! Fixed.

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00:38:310 - missing grace note, similar issue to #2299742

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Fixed.

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00:39:000 (39000|3,39184|2,39368|3,39552|2) - I'm not sure the purpose of these one hand trill, i think you can definitely make it like this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17743712/7640

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00:41:576 - 00:41:760 - 00:47:098 - 00:47:282 - 00:47:650 - I think you can add one more note each for these spots because they have stronger cymbals/kicks that can stand out with heavier representations. It will help making your concepts more accurate, and create a more logical spread with Hard.

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00:43:586 - to 00:48:004 - this part is basically easier & a lot less dense in Another than Hard.
you might wanna buff this part a little, also make adjustment in Hard

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00:51:883 - Double note is better because there is a piano sound here and for similar pinao sounds before this you have been using doubles.

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00:54:092 - Use double note for this one too similar to your concept on 00:56:116 - .

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01:00:902 - Missing one note for the piano.

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00:57:957 - 00:58:325 - 00:58:693 - 00:59:061 - Might be a bit subjective, but I believe the piano sounds are stronger because of the addition of lower pitch layer, so similar to your triples for 00:56:484 - and 00:56:853 - , I would suggest using triples for these spots too.

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01:06:607 (66607|0) - Suggest you move this note to column 4 so the number of anchors can remain consistent.

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01:08:264 (68264|0) - For similar reason, move this to column 3.

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01:09:736 - to 01:10:656 - I think the kind of sounds that made you stack 1/2 notes before still present in this part, so I think you can continue using some anchors on column 2, maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17715471/6fbb

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If you apply my suggestion, you can add a note for 01:04:767 - , which has similar hihat sound as 01:10:472 - , for consistency. Otherwise you can make 01:10:472 - a single note too.

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01:11:208 - For such a strong kick + cymbal, I think triple note is definitely more appropriate.

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01:16:914 (76914|2) - Could move this note later by 1/4 to capture the piano sound on 01:16:914 (76914|2) - instead.

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01:16:991 - missing note for piano

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01:22:881 - too? tho its a bit faint here

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It would be too dense for this difficulty therefore I chose to make reference to the chart in arcade.

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01:21:147 (81147|2,81331|1) - Better do a Ctrl+H here so as to reduce the stack on column 3 and balance the patterns a bit more like 01:15:257 - here.

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01:21:607 (81607|2,81699|1) - I think you can make it into column 2 and 3 instead, to avoid heavy bias on left hand.

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01:26:668 - to 01:27:037 - The pattern here is too unbalanced on the middle two columns, and I believe some rearrangements can help with balancing it out, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17715495/a7fa

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i also think this 1/4 stream at the end 01:35:425 (95425|0) - is not any harder than stream on 4K Hard. i highly suggest to change the note into ln

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and add 01:41:866 -

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