Egao no Kimi e (TV Size)

00:09:454 imo better to move it on 00:09:797 - for distinguish and ending the intro better

00:09:454 - maybe change this note to k since the piano's pitch is higher than 00:10:140 - ?

00:11:340 - You may probably remove this unnecessary greenline here

00:19:054 and 00:19:740 - i suggest to deleted both and add 00:19:397 k for better part transition

00:24:882 - how about change this note to k to give some variation? it could highlight the vocal better imo

00:28:654 (35) - switched red to blue (because it felt better with the beat, but then again thats just my opinion)

00:30:711 (38) - Couldn't get the point of using big note here since this is not really the accent point.

00:39:282 - maybe change to k to emphasize the lower drum sound at 00:39:625 - ?

00:40:997 - imo better to change it d -> k for pitch

00:41:682 - consider to remove this silder to give a necessary break for a beginner, also conside to move 00:41:340 - to 00:41:511 - to emphasize the vocal before the break

00:47:854 - consider to move this note to 00:48:197 - ? i think it would fit the drum and vocal in a way better

00:49:911 - 00:50:597 imo swap this pattern k d -> d k because reversed pitch

00:53:511 - Could add a don here for the start of the percussion

00:54:711 (78,79,80) - kkd would emphasize the lower pitched vocal at 00:55:397 - in a way better

01:01:568 - 01:02:254 this triple 1/1 pattern are imo not really fit well.... suggest to move 01:01:911 to 01:01:225

01:03:968 - , 01:04:311 - i highly suggest to delete these two notes to make a break between the kiai. also it would emphasize the vocal at 01:04:654 - in a way better imo

01:05:682 (96) - how about moving this to 01:05:682 (96) - to follow the vocal better?

01:06:882 - instead of mapping the offbeat vocals here, you could move this over to 01:07:397 - to allow for a break time as there is not another one until the end of the chorus.

01:09:454 (91) - could shift to 01:10:140 and 01:12:882 (97) - to 01:11:511

01:15:968 (110) - Not enough emphasis for finisher here

01:15:968 - to 01:26:940 - having no type of a proper rest time does not fit well with the rest of this difficult, which is aimed towards beginners. you may consider deleting 01:19:397 - or 01:24:882 - to make a break for players.

01:24:197 (121,122) - imo swap this pattern k d -> d k for pattern distingush and will emphasize 01:25:568 - 01:26:254