00:08:976 - I think there should be a break before 1/3 stuff like in kiai 00:28:176 - They focus on different sound so a break would make it less confusing
suggestion to remove either 00:08:826 (29) or 00:09:126 (31) -
on parts with the same pattern too
00:29:676 (95) - maybe remove ผมว่านะ มันจะได้มีกลุ่มเท่ากันเป็นชุด ๆ
01:05:135 (237,238) -
01:07:317 (246,247) -
01:09:499 (255,256) -
suggestion to change all of these to don
their pitch are lower compare to previous k k k k and it'd make the next kddk stand out more and more variety
also change in muzu too