01:05:217 - this kinda felt awkward when playing that you switched the drum to having triples instead of the claps having doubles since you represented the claps before with triples and the drum with doubles, refer to the part right before it.
I really recommend changing this to claps = triples and drums = doubles
The same would apply here 02:33:832 - it really played awkward when suddenly the representation of the sounds switched
02:41:524 (161524|3,161524|1,161678|2,161678|0) - you could ctrl+h this so you get a jack at 02:41:370 - on lane 1 and a jack here 02:41:678 - on lane 4 so it's on both hands a jack instead of having it on 02:41:370 (161370|3,161524|3) - and 02:41:678 (161678|2,161832|2) -
03:51:370 - I kinda dislike how this sv goes rn maybe it would be better to change it to
03:51:370 - 0.4x
03:51:524 - 2.2x
03:51:601 - 0.4x
03:51:755 - 2.2x
This feels a bit better to me and it's a bit easier to sightread it since it's also normalized, while unnormalized svs aren't bad they are sometimes harder to acc and that's what I had with the current svs
05:12:486 (312486|1) - this one is a little bit too early and should have been on the 1/4 snap here 05:12:524 - and honestly I would remove 05:12:793 (312793|1) - since it's not really a new sound it's the one from before ending at that moment