AIAIAI (feat. Yasukata Nakata) (Cut Ver.)

00:01:373 (1) - the first circle is 1/8 too late. u could stack (1) and (2) after changing so that the spacing is not confusing

00:03:717 (7) - NC?

00:05:123 (4) - 2 circles here to match 00:01:373 (1,2) - ?

00:08:189 (7) - convert to 1/4 taking the low emphasis with slidertail on downbeat

00:14:029 (9) - NC the stream so combo doesnt get too long?

00:14:967 (1,2,3,4) - Use 1/6 instead of 1/8 !!!

00:16:842 (1,2) - spacing this more would be better imo. It would express the rhythm visually better and avoid the overlap. maybe something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16515043/f1a7

00:17:173 (1) - id remove this nc and add one at 00:17:798 (4) - instead.. its like 00:16:861 (1,1,2,3) - are the weird sounds (cant describe it better xD) but 00:17:798 (4) - is where the drums start again

00:20:025 - referring to 00:19:087 (2) - its more recognize to click at the point which simply could emphasized by adding a circle due the similar spacing

00:21:529 (1,2) - u could map the sound between these sliders with a circle, cuz i think a 1/2 gap makes the pattern a bit stagnant

00:21:548 (5) - missing nc?

00:22:017 (6) - kinda underwhealming, at least make it something like 00:18:267 (6) - so it fits the music much better because with the low sv slider it just doesnt feel consistent with the fast section you just played before this

00:24:361 (4) - too missing nc, u should try to have it consistent

00:24:829 (5) - kinda weird to play because it has so low spacing compared to everything else and it just doesnt look that good, if you put it just up right like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13034726 it will be fixed with higher (but still very easy) spacing and no awkward flow and no stopping

Drain Time: The dt is a little overboard on the slow parts and the first part of the ending, you may want to either put the dt down a bit, or add more objects to the slower parts to counter-act the dt. Suggestion DT: 5

Flow: Some of the flow in the song needs to be in shape because it fits with the song. Some points do not need to flow with the sliders or anything at all. Ex: 00:28:111

Overview: You may need to add more difficulties to have the chance of being qualified, so take that in to mind or else you might not get to the ranked category.

Best regards, Ratikell.

00:30:454 (2) - sometimes you put the melody beats into only 1 slider, which is kinda sad.
you could maybe just do 2 stacked circles, then youll have to click 2 times with the melody and it will still be different and fit what u were going for

00:34:888 (5) - kinda same opinion as "Parachute" mentioned in the above comment. theres two distingt "claps" in the melody there but only one is clickable. same at this time: 00:38:404 (4,5) - (one clap is on sliderend) i think it would be nicer if those claps would be clickable

00:36:998 (4) - This slide look overlap and feel weird. I recoment to rotate -20 and place at x:62 y51
for ss : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13154205

00:36:998 (4) - Just make a triangle here with these notes 00:36:060 (2,3) - to give more emphasis to the NC.

00:44:498 (4) - Copy this 00:44:029 (3) - rotate 180 and place at x:432 y:335 to give more emphasis to the NC.

00:40:631 (4) - and 00:48:131 (4) - why did you break flow? it looks very odd here unlike 00:50:943 (2) - and 00:54:693 (2) - for example

00:42:388 (5) - using circles to match vocals might feel better

00:42:857 (7) - to show that this vocal is lower than the others u could make a 1/2 slider on (6) so that this is emphasized less

00:46:842 (1) - u can shorten this slider by 1/4 to map all of these vocals and then move 00:47:310 (2) - 1/4 earlier. this rythm fits better cuz currently u dont really follow the song here

00:54:693 (2,3) - inconsistent ds

00:57:154 (5,6) - these sounds differ from the other sounds in this pattern which u could show by breaking flow, stacking or highering DS.

00:58:111 (1,2) - should be like 00:54:361 (1,2,3) - to be consistent, and it just fits better imo

01:05:611 (5) - should nc this cuz combo is too long imo and u did that later too

01:13:462 (2,1) - try to make so that such things dont touch, it should have some kind of gap between them so it looks much cleaner

01:14:967 (1,2) - these 2 should be 1/6

01:14:986 (1,2,3,4) - u should make those 1/8 shorter to have enough reaction time to jump from the sliders to the next, especially on 01:15:923 (3,4) - this seems a bit too much

01:24:829 (2) - same like before, feels like it has wayy too low spacing the the pause you have in your movement for this just doesnt fit after the fast section, just put it more down like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13034924 to have x1 spacing and itll be totally fine and really nice to play

01:25:279 (1,2) - follows melody i know but earlier in the song you have mapped the claps as well. maybe shorten 1 and add a circle on top of 2 for same feeling?

01:30:923 (3) - nc like before

01:33:248 (5,2,3) - NC these sliders, because of different velocitiy, but if you don't want to, then it's okay

01:39:361 (1,2,3) - lol burai, do this instead https://puu.sh/DbGbC/24406a3601.png. 2 slider come with 1.15x sv and the rest are 1.0x to measure the visual