00:13:486 (4,5) - this rhythm doesn't really match up to the song, something like https://imgur.com/Vl1pEvB would be more aligned to the song
00:34:319 (4) - Kinda similar thing as #827043 , I'd recommend changing the linked slider into a hitcircle
00:45:319 (3) - You could follow the song here more closely as the sounds on 00:45:153 - 00:45:486 - don't get any kind of representation. Using rhythm closer to https://puu.sh/CS0AW/9d4fc9f6f3.png could work out really well
00:51:986 (1,2,3) - this overlap doesn't look too great. either make it overlap more or not at all please
01:01:319 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this is a really long chain of half beats for a normal maby try making it a bit less dense
01:14:319 (4,5) - A bit unsure about this rhythm. I 'd recommend using something like https://puu.sh/CS0Kl/9b3210ca5c.png instead
01:22:653 (1,2,1) - is it really necessary to overlap? Regardless of the alignment to make it look more aligned, I think it would still be better they aren't seen overlapping
01:39:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - feel like this might be a bit to dense for normal. especially when it is the lowest dif in the set.
01:41:819 (6,2) - This overlap is kinda visible and a bit unclean, I think you could just try to avoid overlapping these two altogether
01:53:319 (1,1) - in normal tier diff recovery time after spinner should be at least 2 beats