00:22:601 (4,5) - Thaat DS feels very extreme, I know the vocals getting higher on this note, but the spacing is way to high, consider reducing it
00:39:190 (1,2,3) - there is a near 100% guarantee on a 100 on these sliders because of either how fast they are, or the sudden bluetick switch, i suggest keeping the first two, and then adding a slower slider velocity at the last one (00:39:541 (3) - ) to transition back into the regular
00:58:877 - i feel like it would sound better to shorten this repeater (00:58:702 (1) - ) until the red tick, and placing a circle on 00:58:877 - because i hear a different beat
01:05:967 (5,6,7) - this has the weakest finish ever because it ends on a slider, no impact!
02:49:438 (1,2,3) - why not make a similarly arranged pattern with 02:45:688 (1,2,3,4) - , would make sense for consistency
02:54:945 (1,2,3) - manually move this down so that 02:54:711 (10,11,12,13,1) - a straight line, the stack messes it up
03:01:625 (2,3,4) - Why this sudden change in flow ? I think it would be better if you keep everything as linear flow then stack 03:01:977 (5,6) - at the end of it https://i.gyazo.com/2f7202aa546ce71c8bf909369c9bc198.png
it would be closer to what you did on 02:59:633 (1,2,3,4,5) - which has the same sounds