00:35:555 (18,19,20,21,22,23) - Change all of these to k, that sounds better for the snare. Also changing them can emphasize the drop at 00:36:253 (24) -
00:36:427 (25,26,27) - Same suggestion as #471596. You can try kkk, dkk, kkd (or maybe dkd?) patterns to make the map more interesting to play.
01:03:898 (215) - delete? because using a 9-note stream in this part seems too difficult for players to play.
There are both low and high pitch "wub" sound in this part. Change these high ones (01:32:241 (3,8)) to k, and keep the low ones d, like 01:35:032 (19,24) .
02:10:265 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - This pattern is too difficult for an Oni diff. You can try delete one of these notes and make this stream into 5+5 or 3+7, 7+3 pattern. I think an 11-note stream is too hard