00:03:199 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17622647/17a2
can do this instead?, repeated drum sounds so why not
00:06:992 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17622664/51c2 express drums like these too, they're pretty cool
00:08:458 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17622676/a7e8 you already introduced minijacks at 00:08:286 so why not continue with this pattern as well?
hmm then why not apply some to exh ? to resolve the difficulty gap, it doesnt have to as abrasive/dense as this one, less dense but same aspect, definitely understand the concern of the difficulty gap
00:11:303 (11303|0) - Since this sound is just the same intensity as other sounds around here 00:11:130 (11130|1,11130|0,11217|2,11217|3,11389|3,11389|2) - , i think just double this to use jumptrills will be a better expression
00:14:579 (14579|1) - leaving this kick+synth sound with single can be a bit weird if you compare this with the following double notes 00:14:751 (14751|0,14751|2,14923|1,14923|3,15096|3,15096|1) -
Maybe this will somehow violates your concept of LN, but i think you can consider making some changes here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17775882/eff4
00:20:096 - Same
Also the repeated part from 01:23:544 -
00:16:648 for the double LNs here:
First, it's better to move them to middle hands (col 1 and 2) since the pitches get different from 00:16:475 the previous sounds.
Second, the two double LNs are not for the same sounds but they have same shape, which is not good. I can hear 00:16:648 this is melody but 00:16:992 this is vocal. It's better to make it consistent. imo, it's better to follow the 3/4 melody sounds. As for the different pitch of the last melody sound, you can place the double LNs on col 0 and 2 or 1 and 3
00:31:044 - There is a very clear synth melody, ignoring that will just break the completeness of the melody here imo, even if you want to keep a comfortable pattern on purpose
how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17775909/5027
01:42:768 - Same
00:48:975 (48975|0) - Personally feel it's a ghost note, and since the music somehow has broken at 00:48:889 - , it will be fair to give it a break in pattern here
00:55:010 (55010|1,55182|1,55354|1,55527|1) - feel like the pattern kinda interrupt the one hand trill pattern 00:55:268 (55268|0,55354|1,55441|0,55527|1) - for the alternative sound, maybe we can rearrange a bit here
01:09:061 should be consistent with 01:11:820. You see, 01:11:820 (71820|1) - is stacked with 01:11:648 (71648|1) - for the differen pitches so here 01:09:061 should be same -> you see you didn't place them as stack
01:21:992 (81992|1) - May can change this to 1/2 LN for better consistency with your overall design
01:23:027 I may see the only extra sound here is vocal but it's weird to place double here. You can hear the special 1/4 sounds (I don't know how to call that) so I think it's better to make it single trill like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17604284/ee0a
01:44:234 - vs 01:33:199 - feel like the use of short LN in these 2 places is slightly inconsistent.
Other than consistency reason, i think the short at 01:44:837 - is also needed to distinguish from the split-jumptrills for the drums, so recommend to also apply similar short LN at 01:44:234 -
If accept this, also change 00:32:510 -