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00:20:355 (3) - Blanket is a little bit off, try x:160 y:204

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ok

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00:20:805 (1) - thought it feels weird you ignored the guitar in the body when you didn't around 00:20:805 (1) - or smth

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all downbeat or cymbal crash use 1/1 instead tho

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00:22:605 (2,3) - I expected a 1/1 slider here like you do at 00:25:005 (2,3) - , maybe do the same?

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good point, made the 1/1 into 1/2 instead

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00:24:255 (4,5,6,7) - I feel like the stream is too intense here, later on sure but this part is of not as intense as later parts so maybe make this differ a bit?

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sorta get what you mean but its such a stream heavy map tho. esp since its stacked too i dont think this should cause much strain at all given the general density of the map

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00:34:005 (6,1) - no triple here? there's an audible kick at 00:34:080 - and having a stacked triple here would feel pretty nice considering the staccato sounding vocals

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nah i dont feel the need for that since the stream section after this is a bit dense (also it kinda sounds like a 1/6 double here but thats more a composition error i think)

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00:50:355 (1,2) - Vocal is actually held like 00:50:655 (3) - , maybe make 1/2 slider here aswell?

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i feel the two notes work well as transition here, the first and second slider here are a bit easier to play while the two notes still give some form of strain. i feel if i use 3 sliders its too easy here ):

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00:57:555 (5,6) - CTRL-G makes a very cool "reverse" going flow which fits with the pitch of the singing which goes down and back to what it was, also plays very cool!!

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i like the idea tbh, but with the current pattern 00:57:555 (5) - has the largest jump which is what i wanted here for the vocal. also i personally feel the current is easier to read lol

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01:00:030 (2) - this circle shouldn't be here, there's nothing in the song on that tick. if you wanna follow the drums, it would be better to have it at 00:59:880 - where the drums are actually playing

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there's a really clear snare here tho? there is also a sound between that but thats not as loud as the snares in 00:59:955 (1,2,3,4) - so decided not to map that (i never start streams on offbeats in this diff anyways)

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01:01:155 (3,4) - snare feels weak due to the really low spacing, buff a bit somehow?

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i tried to make it bigger

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01:04:755 (3,4) - A 1/2 slider would sound better for the vocal in my opinion.

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consistency with 00:55:155 (3,4) - , and if i wanted to emphasize the 1/4 sounds here i would have a two 1/2 sliders with a 1/4 note in between.. while not an uncommon rhythm i never used that in this diff before so putting that here randomly doesnt seem quite right

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01:04:755 (3) - i'd prefer if this was moved to the left a bit, there's a triple for emphasis right after but there's hardly any movement so the emphasis is sorta negated

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theres almost identical flow at 00:55:155 (3) - i feel this should be fine. else itd break my visual pattern

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01:06:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - if you follow my advice and do the reverse thing I'd also do something like this here! would be super cool imo, like this? https://puu.sh/zcmQH/364afd3cd1.png just spaced out so you can see nr clearly hh

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interesting idea, but what i can see in your pattern is that the movement at (5,6) is completely different than (1,2,3,4). i feel my current pattern fits my taste better, since the vocals are a bit repetitive, so are the movements (back and forth here, triangle repeat/circular in the one mentioned before)

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finish

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01:14:655 (1,2) - don't really think you need the nc here

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finish = nc

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01:14:955 (1) - make this 3/4? skipping both the snare and the kick for the vocal kinda hurts

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dont think i used 3/4 in this diff at all since i emphasized all new sections (especially after dense sections like here) with 1/1. just placing one here would feel too random

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01:16:455 (1,2,1) - the implied flow here due to 1's sliderbody doesn't really feel smooth here, you could maybe ctrl+h 01:16:755 (1,2) - either together or separately to have more fluid movement?

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i dont think this is a problem here, if anything something not implying expected flow is something more fitting for the 1/3s here. mapping with the same flow for 1/3 would feel a bit monotonous. also i did the same at 00:40:755 (1) - which i think is fine since its more like a reoccuring pattern now

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01:22:755 (1,1,1) - shouldn't these be 1/3

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i like how sotarks resolved before i replied but its fixed hue

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ok, @sotarks add for me pls

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Sure fixed

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