very nice set, although i dont see mods at all being done looks pretty cool except some hitsounds?
01:21:155 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:22:000 (1,2,3,4,5) -
this does not represent the sound in the song at all, this sounds like someone hitting a big plastic water barrel really fast highly recommend changing this hitsound, it is really uncomfortable also asked several players about this before I wrote
01:16:429 (1,2,3) - 01:19:187 (1,2) - 01:21:946 (1,2,3) -
Jumps like this in this part need a bit of a nerf aswell to balance things out.
01:08:499 (3,4,5,6,7) - I recommend you to remake this part to accentuate 01:08:671 (4,5,6,7) - those jumps with 1-2 1-2 NC to make it stand out more and space it a little less while emphasizing the diminuendo.
I think you can delicately nerf parts like 00:48:670 (1,2) - 00:51:429 (1,2,3) - 00:54:188 (1,2) - 00:56:256 (4,5) -
01:04:533 (4,5) - 01:05:222 (1,2,3,4) -
Parts like 00:59:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is balanced well in one place so the spacing doesnt feel excessive so try to balance other parts to imitate this one while not having one random big jump in the middle of it.
Jump here is a bit too aggro 00:51:084 (6,1) - considering the song emphasis and the whole balance of the map.
Moments like this is fine 00:52:463 (6,1) - to have a bigger spacing with a bit of angle change it complements the start of a new section pretty well and balances things out smoothly so keep those while reducing other parts.
Where did you find the romanization metadata? I think it is wrong? Youni is not one word in Japanese it is you ni and the title translates to "like snow". I just noticed all the sets have the same mistake?
Artist: MISATO
Title: Necro Fantasia
Source: 東方妖々夢 ～ Perfect Cherry Blossom.
Tags: ネクロファンタジア Touhou Toho Arrange Album Youyoumu Ghostly Dream 八雲 紫 Yukari Yakumo Necrofantasia Masayoshi Minoshima Haruka Phantasm Stage Boss Theme For Your Pieces EXSERENSES C74 Reitaisai8 Alstroemeria Records ALR 東方Project Video Game Japanese sbsonic
Overall needs serious work you need to get some feedback and probably watch some other maps or watch videos by Pishifat or ask people ingame to help you.
Map more dont give up ur on good way
01:35:683 (1,2,3) - I guess you played your own map and you should notice that stuff liek this does not play well bnecause of the weird angles and low spacing and position is also questionable
If you look at this 01:31:262 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - you can see this is very straightforward and plain out boring without any relation, why not make something that looks nice, plays nice and also makes sense with the song? The song changes, try to always think when you make a pattern to fit it to the song on all levels, this is very one dimensional now.