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00:13:397 (12,13,14,15,16) - идентичные звуки в начале и конце, советую заменить на дкккд

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Поменял все

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00:13:397 (12,13,14,15,16) - kdddk or kkddk sounds much better if you hear the song closely, also you did do this pattern on 00:40:983 (158,159,160,161,162) -

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00:16:156 - also here, same case

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00:18:914 - also here, same case

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00:21:673 - also here, same case

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00:22:190 (65) - I think this could have a finisher for that deep sound imo

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Yes, and added some more after that for similar sound

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00:31:500 (104,105,106,107,108,109) - I heard as ddkdkk(1/2)

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at least you should change to d 00:31:500 i thought

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00:32:018 (107) - выше чем 00:32:190 (108) - , соответственно к

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Поменял

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00:36:673 (130) - попробуй без ноты здесь

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Попробую

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00:38:569 (143) - попробуй подчеркнуть этот звук, переделав 00:38:397 (141,142,143) - в ккд

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Ок

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00:38:964 - according to ranking criteria, oni diff shouldn't have 1/4 more than 9 notes, so you need to nerf this stream by deleting note. my suggestion will be delete 00:42:793 - and 00:43:483 -

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01:26:500 - same case

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00:40:983 (159,160,161,162,163) - советую сделать кдддк ради идентичных битов на 00:40:983 (159,163) -

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00:42:362 - This part gaps too much with the Oni, I suggest splitting this stream or making it more simpler

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01:26:500 - ditto

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I don't know, I think this stream fits here pretty well, and patterning is not that hard aswell

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00:45:121 - change to d, you can emphasize k on 00:45:293 - better

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00:47:880 - also here, same case

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00:50:638 - also here, same case

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01:29:259 - also here, same case

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01:32:018 - also here, same case

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01:34:776 - also here, same case

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00:51:759 - consider delete this note, it doesn't really follow any sounds,

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01:35:897 - also here, same case

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if you agree to this suggestion, you can change 01:35:983 (481,482,483,484) - to finisher as the sounds support it I guess.

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I dunno, I think I'm gonna keep it, even tho it's kinda overmapping, but it saves consistency
And I don't think that finishers are good idea either, this part is similar to 00:46:328 - this, and I don't want to make a mess

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00:53:397 (237) - д для контраста с 00:53:569 (238) -

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Мне кажется с к все-таки получше будет

edit: хотя не, поменяю, но как на твоем следующем предложении

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00:54:604 - kdkdkdkdd fit more to the sound tbh,

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01:05:638 - also here, same case

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01:38:742 - also here, same case

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sure, changed

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personally, I think some extra SV on 00:57:707 - , 01:00:466 - , 01:41:845 - and 01:44:604 - would give those finishers more impact and make them stand out more. a feasible value would probably be along the lines of 1.2x. consider giving it a try c:

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Thats a great idea, applied

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00:59:431 (276,277,278,279,280,281) - имеют разные звуки на конце, попробуй сделать из 00:59:776 (279,280,281) - ккд или ддд

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Не знаю, они звучат достаточно одинаково для меня

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01:02:880 - how about adding some SV here in a similar fashion to 00:51:845 -, since the wub is pretty much the same?

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Yeah wub is the same, but SVs in the first kiai don't follow wubs, they synth rather, and 01:02:880 - there is no synth, so I don't think it will work if I try to do it the same way

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Just to note, I tried a few variations, and I didn't like how it played out

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Okay!

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01:07:362 - make this consistency with 00:23:224 -

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01:08:397 - delete, sounds better if you ignore the vocal here

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applied both

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01:13:742 - change to k , higher sound from before note

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01:15:638 - make this consistency with 00:31:500 -

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01:16:673 - delete, sounds better if you ignore the vocal here

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01:16:156 (373) - к для консистенси с подобными моментами до этого

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Поменял несколько мест

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01:30:811 - you can add 1/4 kkd or 1/6 kkkd here

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I could, but I don't really like it, so gonna keep it as-is

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01:33:138 - change to d to follow drum

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01:37:707 (491) - д для контраста с 01:37:535 (490,492) -

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00:53:397 - сделал одинаково

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01:44:259 (536) - если примешь, переделай в к

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сейм ответ

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01:44:604 (537) - спорный финишер, звук явно слабее чем на 01:41:845 (520) -

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Пусть будет пока

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01:47:018 - you should follow this sound ( 01:47:018 (552,553,554,555) - ) with same patterns. so 01:47:018 - should be d here

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please fix the notes from 01:46:673 if you dont like ddkdd

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01:50:466 (580) - I think this could have a finisher imo, to follow that deep sound

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01:50:983 (584,585,586) - переделай к ддк/ккд ради бита на последней ноте

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Там и в начале, и в конце есть удар, который я хочу выделить как к, и из вариантов кдк/ккк - ккк мне нравится больше

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02:01:156 - change to d, fit the drum sound better

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02:05:293 - delete this note, to make this part clearly calm part

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02:05:207 - change to d, if you agree with the suggestion

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