01:01:340 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - there are definitely drums missing out. I imagine you wanted to make this part a lot less dense.
I personally think you should at least add a note there 01:01:449 - or just make this tbh https://princess-suissie.s-ul.eu/U5y20AKF while maybe this 01:01:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - looking like https://princess-suissie.s-ul.eu/lwsyZfVo
01:10:905 (2) - replace this with circles so it's more apparent that guitar gets emphasized since it's the same as 01:10:036 (1,2,3,4,5) - then
the pillars of god 03:58:731 (1,2,3,4,5) -
god I always loved this pattern so much