00:24:636 - If you were buffing this part with what I suggested on MX, then you should apply https://rhythmega.s-ul.eu/GuwCmr8T here to rebalance the difficulty in this map with the MX.
01:08:436 (68436|2,68586|2,68736|2,68886|2) - There's no real cue for these notes so it could fall to the territory of ghost notes. I suggest to delete these.
My suggestion would be to use Double LN for this section or do a 1/6 stair here. I'd choose the latter since MX is using 1/8 so a bit simplification on this would be 1/6 stair.