SImilar to #4868056 00:26:594 ~ 00:31:469 - You can do some 1/1s and 2/1s:
For example: 1/1 d k dkd d k dk (dkd refers to 1/1, d k refers to 2/1)
d k dkd d k dk
00:17:594 ~ 00:23:594 - I think it would be a better idea if you just map basic beats here instead of following the vocal in those 1/2 snaps, for this calm section.
You can do like 2/1 d k d _ k k d _ here
d k d _ k k d _
00:05:594 ~ 00:16:469 -
We may use a different mapping here to capture the melody, and give a little bit more breaks for players with something like this for example: