00:41:969 - you can add a d here since it is musically (except vocal) similar to 00:35:594 (107,108,109) -
00:51:719 - consider adding a note here for the vocal presence, and remove 00:53:969 (158,159) - for alternate 2/1 break spot.
01:22:094 (248,249,250,251,252,253) - I think you can change this pattern to K kdkdd for a longer 1/2 as a slight burst, also to refer to the spread progression